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Paradøx 11-16-03 04:23 PM

Paradøx Vs. Young Smiff
 
6 lines
No Crew, Dick, Swayed, Bias, Hate, ect... Votes
U spit first
and most important, No Bullshit.

Ante Up Man...lol

TAG 11-16-03 04:30 PM

Hitt his up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314 I'll be back when yall spit

Young Smiff 11-16-03 04:39 PM

it s anotha hot six empty out a third of tha clip
he want sum he can get burned like bad pussy on dick
damn hes sick like a cancer victom
fist are dogs so he run when i holla sick'em
i'll counteract a pardox put him a bad spot
like a pass thrown 2 tha middle of tha feild and its cought.... hurt'em

DoperThanYou 11-16-03 04:46 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823

hit this up
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Young Smiff 11-16-03 04:55 PM

where u at homie............................................. ............
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Paradøx 11-16-03 05:04 PM

My fault... wasn't look for you to post so soon... i was checkin out this kid that wants to know what pussy tastes like...lol

ok checkin...

Obscure 11-16-03 05:09 PM

^^TAG and DoperThanYou.. you are both not very smart....1 of them is a flyweight and another is new 2 rb so how can they vote on ya battle?^wack

and ill vote on this when paradox spits

Paradøx 11-16-03 05:22 PM

ok check it

attention, herb clean up needed...
sound the buzzard, start tha timer, lets get it on...
ladies and gentlemen of rb, i'm here to explain how he's sonned...
"u can't beat the unbeatable", i'm glad you have the right mindframe...
i don't have to say that i'm sick, kuz it's already been exclaimed...
your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher...
i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper...

ok wanted to go over, but ya know....

Votes Now Accepted

Paradøx 11-16-03 05:23 PM

the attention part isn't a line.....

just clearing that up......

peace................................

Obscure 11-16-03 05:28 PM

Newb Battle Like Usual not that either of you are herbs though

First off.......
Punches-Tie
Flow-Paradox
Structure-Paradox
Enjoyment-Neither

Best Bar of Battle
Paradox
your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher...
i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper...

Overall-Paradox

u guys keep elevating............................

Paradøx 11-16-03 05:33 PM

Thanx... i know that was a weak ass verse, but it should do the job...lol
i was too busy laughing at that thread about "what pussy tastes like"....lol

Ok, More Votes....

nåmes 11-16-03 06:37 PM

sound the buzzard, start the timer, lets get it on
ladies & gentlemen of r.b., im here 2 explain how hes sonned
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this was wack^
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u cant beat the unbeatable, im glad u have the right mind frame
i dont have 2 say that i'm sick, cuz its already been exclaimed
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better, but im glad u have the right mind frame dont make sense
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yer battling me dog, not complamenting for that go 2 the cypher
i got ya ass following my words like i was pide piper?
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dont ever use pide piper. you dont need a comma after complamenting
kinda wack but average^
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ill be back
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Paradøx 11-16-03 06:50 PM

Uppin for the 1st time


Lets get some votes............................................. ...................

nåmes 11-16-03 06:53 PM

it's another hot six empty out a third of the clip
he want some, he can get burned like a bad pussy on dik
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this was decent, but lacks creativity, & remember 2 use commas
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damn hes sick like a cancer victom
fist are dogs, so he run when i holla sick em
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decent but short, u need more wordplay
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i'll counteract a paradox put him a bad spot
like a pass thrown 2 the middle of the field & its caught
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1st line didnt make much sense^
decent, but as i said before it lackss a lot of stuff
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after seeing these 2 verses, which werent thought out very well
ima have to say
young smiff pulled it off
vote/y.s.
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yo people with 100 posts
check out my battles
names vs copy>that fool was feeding and c-section said i won
copy righted was banned so he dont deserve votes
names vs noabuse>1-0
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Paradøx 11-16-03 06:57 PM

Glad he finally voted...lol, now can we get some votes here.........

don't let this be slept on........................................


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