e.coli vs origin
 

5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew no hate no d/r votes

explain all votes

try to have ya verse done before 3:00 est...........i will post my verse around then if ya verse is posted


good luck

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This band of e-coli’s ass droppin through charts like heavy metal
Strikin math flash backs..Black Tie + You = Battle Quickly Settled
Readin my lines backwards only way youz ever fightin back
After this youl get practice..God damn! Mad dog…by typin that (GODDAMNMADDOG..same both ways)
This dicks scared of spittin first..its aiight Heres A Lil Help
Dogg..you aint touchin no one...cus im feelin you aint felt
My punchs homemade..i fire drills till you runnin for the exit
Shit..imma call you european how badly your verse is directed
This cudnt be easier..just look at my sig..crew..avy and my name
There goes all ya punchs….so learn others spittin first is to blame
Pussy must be blind how he struggles to find rhymes
YA CREWS THROUGH..here...take a peice of mine (Black Ties winnin the crew battle)

*farts*

EDIT**...changed the size of ya crews through..lol it was way to big before

u couldnt win if every vote for u counted as 10 origin........
he went for broke...now he decided to become a whore again....
why try to front.........origin is pure white he has no black ties....
need ya dick sucked....origin is now serving number 605....
my punches are bruisin ya face...but give it time ya wounds will heal...
he wanted to be original so he created his name...
....origin but than he realized he wasnt ill....
this cat is whack...he origin-ated from a herb....
in origin’s case the word cocksucker can be used as a noun or a verb....
im homophobic and u are gay so by me u are hated....
this herb is where the origin of whackness was created....

opener:origin
closer:origin
wordplay:tie
structure:tie
punches:origin
overall:origin

aiight, nice battle, no hate, peace



plz vote honestly on this!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4279#post914279

Polled
-Axe

You didnt poll....

but thanks

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uppin 1

tight battle..props to both

breakdown:

punches: tie
multies-origin
flow-tie
creativity-origin
complexity-tie
personals-origin
complexity-e.coli

nice battle
vote-origin

peACE

thanks^

uppin 2

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hmm...........worthy of breakdown

flow-tie
metas-origin 1-0
opener-tie....blah
shut-origin
vocab-e.
punches-origin 7-8
personals-origin...the 1st link

Not a bad battle..........no hate at all......I thaught E.coli had it first but then I broke it down piece by piece.................Origin

uppin(1)..................im not swaying but if u guys read the verses i have some personals......................

anyway 3-0 him

can a mod add his votes

If You Would Be So Kind...

To Give An Honest Vote To Me And X Ecutions Battle...

I'll Be Happy To Return It...

Thanks...

-P

damn i dont know if im trippin or dickride but watver yall can assess my vote

punches - coli...damn kid owned this category
personals - both good, but colis personals were harder
wordplay - coli
vocab - eh tie
creativity - origin
originality - coli
overal - i gotta say it was e coli shit was tight

no hate
no beef
just honest

please hit this up honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528

peace

uppin(2)

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leave a link we will get at u

P cant vote hes in Black Tie......

damn poll!!

uppin 3

3-1 me

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ya, e.coli ... u did have some personals, but so did he an' they were better than yours... you both had some a'ight punches... but if i have to decide i think origin came a bit harder... the fire drills wordplay pretty much won it for him, that line was classic... 1