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Remixed Illusion 11-18-03 02:53 PM

FRK_ttk
 
aight 10 lines, explained vote, spit asap after me, aight lets drop.

FRK_ttk 11-18-03 02:54 PM

lets do this
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Remixed Illusion 11-18-03 03:08 PM

lets start this battle

Remixed Illusion spits his verse,mouth bout to burst//
leave u lost, like it was a curse, battle wit Illusion//
and ur gunna have ta leave to get a blood transfusion//
i'm win this battle like we won tha world war//
i'm tha alias and ur japan, and ur far more low'r//(lower)
in this battle u aint happen'n, u aint recieven n e clappin//
i'ma jus dancin a circle around ur half ass clown act//
fuck ur black ass is gon b trapped, packed, and racked//
jus give up, looks like u have before, look at ur battle score//
so jus sit down and end ur confusion, cuz this battle wit Illusion...
jus got recomended to end my rhyming trend...

holla wit yo verse...

Remixed Illusion 11-18-03 03:14 PM

oops i jus noticed that this is a fucked up title, sorry people
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FRK_ttk 11-18-03 03:16 PM

yo ok this Remixed dick jus throw a wet mic..shit/
Niggas gona run a gun u suked this mic like my dic//
Suk it fukit you aint winnin its jus an Illution//
This nigga needs ball in his mouth everytime he opens he is pollution//
Spit words of wisdom domination Canada aint win shit Fagget//
Call my niggas to read this cuz yous criin out for dics fagget//
Slapp you with a used condom ant feed you wid it//
You must think its a cream filled chockelete bar stopp bittin it//


I'll end this wid a fuck you

TAG 11-18-03 03:21 PM

OPenr: FRK
Closer: FRK
Flow: FRK
Punches: FRK
Personals: FRK
Much elevation needed. FRK your doin a lot better dawg. Vote=FRK

Remixed Illusion 11-18-03 04:46 PM

y did FRK get all those categories, we need an explaned vote thats jus a d/r vote.............................................. .....................
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UPPIN WIT SUM HONEST VOTES PLEASE.

Remixed Illusion 11-19-03 02:12 PM

UPPINUPPINUPPINUPPIN
UPPINUPPINUPPINUPPIN
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Provoked Images 11-19-03 02:40 PM

multis: no real ones...work on it...
meta's: FRK...he at least had some in his...
flow: FRK...Remix barely flowed n hard to follow...
personals: FRK...went afta his name at least, otha one had none at all...
punchlines: none
opener: FRK...Remix didn't even rhyme...
finisher: FRK...once again, Remix didn't even rhyme... (shame)

overall: FRK...He took this weak battle wit ease...

Explict 11-19-03 02:50 PM

wack battle.. but FRK got this.

Flow-FRK
wordplay-FRK
vocab-None
metas-FRK had some
personals-FRK- dissed on his name

OVERALL-FRK

FRK ur improving little by little..Remix that You Sig is full of shit keep dreaming nigga.. my 5 year old sis can take you to school....ELEVATE>>>ELEVATE

FRK_ttk 11-19-03 05:19 PM

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vote this 2 votes needed

FRK_ttk 11-19-03 08:26 PM

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FRK_ttk 11-19-03 08:44 PM

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anyone vote

1liner 11-19-03 09:00 PM

well i dont feel like i need to break this down but anyways

opener-frk
closer-frk
punches-frk
personals--frk
breakdown-
vocab-frk
originality-nobody
creativity-nobody
overal-frk

WTF is up with these uneven badly matched batles anyways Remixed you need wackness emergency center
aint hatin just tryin to help
Shit I even visited there aint no shame if it ups ya game

FRK_ttk 11-19-03 09:04 PM

aight thanx 1liner


uuuuppppppiiiinnnnn

one more vote needed













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