Legin vs. 1liner
 

10 lines
u spit first

what are you waiting for?
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yo
who is this Ledge-in/ i should kick his legs-in-
but he been bled-thin
cuz i float like a airborn disease cuz of the way i carry a dead-win
so when i bust a shot at ya red-skin- it will make ya heads-spin
so you get left-in a puddle (drowned) cuz u couldn't lift ya lead-chin)

fuckin around with me like i'm a fuckin rookie
oooopsy ----everybody loooky at what i did to this pussy

i cut ya fuckin head off and let you drown in ya own blood
you claim you put in dirty work--cuz i dragged you in stoned-mud

this fags gettin left with scrapes----- holes-- and contusions
an escaped soul with a awful conclusion
that it couldnt stand the fact of contantly losin

anyways that was a quicky holla back

listen 1liner/even if ya boyfriend voted on this battle he would think i'm finer/you aint ready to battle,i'll leave you with more stitches than a clothes designer/got a shotgun that will have you flying through walls like casper..keep rhyming violent till you get put in a casket/this fag keep more balls in his mouth than a NBA basket..you still wont win if ya family vote for you/after this i'm moving up from one win to two..i got 2 losses, you got nine/ i could tell by ya name you only got 1 hot line/come on, you wasting my time/i'm beating ya ass so bad i'm commiting a lyrical crime...bitch this aint a joke/i'll eat you alive then blow out ya ashes like marijuana smoke

legin man u got sum gd potential set ur verse out a bit better that shit is piss ass annoying to read but overall u may of beaten this cat,oh yeah check my shit out wid liner!pz

Yo i cant vote but i thought Legin took this, 1liner jus didnt come hard enough i dont think, but i think legin took it when he droped...i got 2 losses, you got nine/ i could tell by ya name you only got 1 hot line, that sealed it, ,i give prop votes to legin

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opener: legin
punches: 1liner
flow: legin
Strucutre: legin
closer: 1liner
enjoyment: legin
vote: legin

peace

Opener: legin
Closer: 1limer
Flow: none
Punches: 1liner
Personals: tie
Win: 1liner
Can yall hit this up with a fair vote? Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779

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up i need this closed pz................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .........................

hmm i voted for legin i think he came harder with the punchlines but thats just my vote.so
vote:legin

alright, legin, fix ur structure MADLY...

i got 2 losses, you got nine/ i could tell by ya name you only got 1 hot line

^^ hot line, put more of these in there n u'll be a contender...

1liner, come wit something more tha multi's, i didn't see many punches thrown on ur part...

so you get left-in a puddle (drowned) cuz u couldn't lift ya lead-chin)

^^ good imagery if u like that type of thing...

vote: legin, only because everything he says was in some way, if not wack as hell, a hit towards 1liner...

yo forgot to say to hit this up....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92760

much appriciated to keep votin an active thing u know?