Game vs Poetictendenceez *real*
 

^^^my fault...pressed submit too quick

alright boi...verses due in 30 min...no dickrydn votes...no hate votes....5 bars you say? OK! PEACE...make sure you check in....this is my check in

Aight this the check in for me................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....................

(Battle Verse)




Look,
Who got a napkin yo? - cause I'm a wipe the Floor with this bastard,
I special - ize in removals - of Garbage on - "RapBattles"/
DOT COM,
And Game Ladin bought to smash and crash this Plain,
Poetic Hot's a pipe dream Ya career - just CLOGGIN my drain/
so hit the sewer b*tch...........................and Splinter wants his freestyles back/
here's the special Award dunn, you not good enuff -
for wack/
Stick with the side hobby- ya videos slob gumming on dick,
that wasn't Paris Hilton Fuckin - that was homeboy with a wig/
Ugly Blonde Bitch, - son why the fuck you testin the game?
How about I blow ya thougts on ya mouse - so I can pick ya brains?/

don't get it twisted, we know that this "game's" already over
this nigga'd have more "luck" trying to find a four leaf clover
in the winter, under a mother fuckn foot of snow
than he'll ever have of beating me like i beat his hoe
through his name we know that he claims to have game
but like a one legged man, his game is clearly lame
he's like the Atlanta Hawks, after they lost Alonzo to New Jersey
their game sucked at first, but now he ain't even worthy
to stand next to me, up on this lyrical stage
while i spit game to your mom, and rattle her cage

Aight son nice spit................... let's get them votes in...................


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uppin (1).......post a link ya'll and i'll be sure to hit up your post as well.....PEACE....................................

Open- game (although first line kinda conflicted. Who needs napkins would have made more sense)

Metas - none
Creavitity - poetic
Personals - game
Flow - poetic
Finish - tie
Abuse - game
(that wasn't Paris Hilton Fuckin - that was homeboy with a wig = nasty...lol)

vote = game

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568

both verses were pretty wack, but i gotta go wit game on dis one.
heres da breakdown:
metas-none
flow-none
punches-game
personals-game
who had the best line-game
finish-neither
vote-game

i'm uppn...but who you calln wack ? (3-4?).......whatever....up this shhhhyt
2...peace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ok games verse was retarded plain and simple
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why do even have to explain this shit
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weak battle but poeticteend....takes this in every catagorie
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vote/poetic
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peep it homie, least u can do is look at it
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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i would vote poetic if i could he had better flow and stronger disses.

vote on my battle with wyze sin if you can.
i'll be polling soon enough.

upping this (3)>>!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~

game's flow was well off, poetics was superior
both could've used more punches, but when they did poetic's hit harder
overall poetic had a better structure, wiv more creativity

VOTE: POETIC TENDENCEEZ

i took the time, now hit this up wiv an honest vote peeps:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89066

opener:poetic
closer:Tie
wordplay:Game
structure:poetic
punches:poetic
overall:poetic


aiight game you need to fix your structure, and also work on your wordplay, and punches. poetic be lucky you got my vote, you only just scraped this one, you also need to keep elevatin.

aaigght

will both y'all peep my battle with Lm, its in my sig.

aiight

peace