EnVy SKiLLZ vs Themurderousone
 

6 line max....you spit first...

u got 10 mins to spit and i got anotha 10

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

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murderous one checkin in................................................ ........................................

yo dogg instead of 6 lines...u down for 15??

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yea im down .................................................. ................................................ but give 20 minutes

aight im startin yo 20 minutes........................................... ............................

u soft like ru paul im hard like a dick
stay on my wood like termites more dan ur chik
what made you choose ur name i dont envy you nigga
u a heavyweight im a flyweight so u know i move quicker
read ur rhymes before dey straight trash catch u by a club
like joey porter put a bullet in ur ass
i see right through you and i shattered ur glass
put windex on my bullets get it done a little fast
murder for little cash its more for pleasure
i rock leather blastin holes through ur cheap ass pleather
grand theft auto i rock dat game
its grand theft audio soon as u hear my song playin
only way u get a hit if u bite my skillz
i should change my name to urs so atleast it be real
im so sorry i gave ur mom dat bad pill
u would be freestylin(swimmin) in my balls still

iight yo....your murked....

check this shit.....


I cant stop wont stop because I'm young gunnin'//
I'm not Biggie or Pac but I will have Revelation "Runnin"//
From my flow, because it's expensive like a Rolls Royce car//
and I'm spittin this shit so sick bitches think I got SARS//
battlin EnVy dogg is like "eatin" a "piece of food" thats to "big", ya know ya gonna "choke"//
Dogg ya murdered....I’m bout to eat this piece of trash up like homeless folks//
This is your brain on drugs and it's bout to get cracked son//
Ya'll catz should call me Michael because this TKO is about to get Jacked-Son//
Rev step back - you wouldn’t battle me if you knew where ya sense be//
Because on the slide I got ya girl's mouth open wider than Monica Lewinksy//
Rhymez J and my flow - you know who we are//
Because when I rap I make the crowd say "ooh" more than porno stars//
And I’m to much of pro- you cant heat me//
So trust me you'll never see my urns//
Because my RHYMEZ just fucked you up more than Ashanti's sideburns//

R.I.P.



Explanations:

2nd Line: Runnin= a Biggie and 2Pac Song,
4th Line: SARS = a Disease
6th Line: Homeless people eat trash
8th Line: Jacked-Son=Michael Jackson
10th Line: Monica Lewinksy = Famous Blower

u aint write dat just now............................................... ............................

opening - none
punches - envy
flow - damurder
metas - envy
multis - envy
wordplay - envy
structure - none

vote = envy


weak battle tho...............and that jackson line is really fucking played out....no offense....

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93576

vocab -
closing -
overall -

yo need some votes up in here.....

uppin [#1]

come on........vote.......
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opening - Envy
punches - Envy
flow - Envy
metas - murderous
multis - Envy
wordplay - Envy
structure - tie
vocab - Envy
closing - Envy
overall -Envy
Hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93603

opening - Envy
punches - Envy
flow - Envy
metas - murderous
multis - Envy
wordplay - Envy
structure - tie
vocab - Envy
closing - Envy
overall -Envy
tight battle!

hit mine battle up wit a vote against holster

peace

battle wa pretty off in most aspects....jus no flow at all
breakdown-
punches=envy
sustainment=tie
metas=envy
flow=none
structure=none
enjoyment=envy
opener-da
closer-....
vote=envy

hit this up both of ya even if its jus opinions
pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8841#post928841

thanks for the votes....

uppin....#2..........................

com on................................................ .....

well make sure ya'll check this out pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8841#post928841