Lars24 vs. Emcee Universe
 

Neither of us give a shit, I guess anything goes

my white ass is checked in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...

My white ass has also, "Checked In"... -

You just had to critique my first little "rap",
I've read all your shit, you should be fucking slapped.
You're not even good enough to deserve to reply,
people only vote for you cause they'd hate to make a retard cry
You shouldn't say anything, just sit back and relax,
don't forget your lifestyle is paid for by my state income tax.
I guess I should calm down you probably have a short fuse,
I'd hate to piss off a dirtpoor...you'd have nothing to lose.
I guess by now you've realized I'm not a big "emcee"
that's probably because I know my true ethnicity.
I'm by no means trying to make my mark on this shitty site,
I just want to help a few dumbass' like you realize that you're actually white!
but I guess you have an excuse for being a fucking fool,
you can always blame it on the fact you can't afford to go to school.
And to any guys in this place who watch gay shows like 7th heaven,
You should give a "holla" to EmCee, because his pants drop like the towers on 9/11.
Don't even vote for me, I don't need respect from you to brag,
All I'm trying to accomplish is the pointing out EmCee is a fag.
So that's all I have to say, this is getting aggravating,
I'll let you and your boyfriend continue your masturbating.

great battle y'all. could you come vote on mine and i'll do the same when i get to 100 posts, which is in the next 30mins:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92806

New Rule: Noone with less than 100 posts or 5 battles can vote -

This battle was alright.. Keep elevating n dropping, holla y'all Peace..

__________________________________________
Set igno the one with alternative respect//
laffin at these bitches, without breaking a sweat//
literal nigga's fall down to their knees//
i break emcee with a silent breeze

I guess that was directed at me, huh? Anyway its all good. PEACE

Iight...

I coulda came outta my coffin, See, I dont giva fuck about the sun - (son)
Im Coughin out laughter! This idiot missed my heart and hit my lung!!!!!!

This key's better than you're writtens, By Readin My Verse Even you know that -
Voters! eat this Big herb lika Shroom, And Get ya eyes bigger than felix the Cat!!

Heres the chances of you winnin This battle onna 50/50 basis -
(Tosses a coin)
Call It In the Air! (Lars: "I Call Neck!") Cmon man you wont win just face it!!!!!!

Does this really have to happen? Will it hurt In the end??? -
I donno, Lar.. How's it feel like ta let the whole Universe In?!?!

Let go fuckin faggot! BITCH!!! Give up my fuckin cheese and Wine -
I just had Lar for dinner, For desert Im havin dinners leftover Lines!!!!!!

Heres a poem: An apples an apple, a peach is a peach -
They're both like my win and your loss, Easy ta reach!!!

I can see right thru you, theres a whole in ya chest -
Bird Mans Done, His verses mo sloppy than a Birds Nest!!!

Call me ya daddy, don worry, if your my son I'll do my Part -
I'll leave Lars walkin lika zombie, Hes Trya reach the stars!!

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Uppin for votes... -

punches: emcee
flow: lars
personals: lars
wordplay: emcee
creativity:emcee
structure: lars
multies: nill
enjoyment: emcee
vote: emcee

it was a lil close battle, gd verses by both!

peace

weak battle

I coulda came outta my coffin, See, I dont giva fuck about the sun - (son) <<<< no need for son in parenthesis
Im Coughin out laughter! This idiot missed my heart and hit my lung!!!!!! <<<< weak line, flows way off

This key's better than you're writtens, By Readin My Verse Even you know that -
Voters! eat this Big herb lika Shroom, And Get ya eyes bigger than felix the Cat!!
<<<<<<<< ehhhhhh........and flows way off >>>>>>>>>>>>>

Heres the chances of you winnin This battle onna 50/50 basis -
(Tosses a coin)
Call It In the Air! (Lars: "I Call Neck!") Cmon man you wont win just face it!!!!!!
^^^ u cant flow period......you need to learn to cut ur lines short.....ur shit's 1 word too many.....

Does this really have to happen? Will it hurt In the end??? -
I donno, Lar.. How's it feel like ta let the whole Universe In?!?!
^^^ weak personal

Let go fuckin faggot! BITCH!!! Give up my fuckin cheese and Wine -
I just had Lar for dinner, For desert Im havin dinners leftover Lines!!!!!!
^^ u've used dinner twice in da same line....flows fucked.....and didnt hit hard


Heres a poem: An apples an apple, a peach is a peach -
They're both like my win and your loss, Easy ta reach!!!
^^^ cud never flow...but a fairly decent punch, nothing hard

I can see right thru you, theres a whole in ya chest -
Bird Mans Done, His verses mo sloppy than a Birds Nest!!!
^^^ used bird twice..........and this line was ass

Call me ya daddy, don worry, if your my son I'll do my Part -
I'll leave Lars walkin lika zombie, Hes Trya reach the stars!!
^^^ isnt "reaching da stars" lines real old?....a played concept

flow = lar
structure = lar
multis = none
punches = none
creativity = emcee (lolol atleast he tried that is)

vote = lar

weak battle, emcee came wack, and lar spit.....but no punches...........

how tha fuck is my shyt off flow? ALL THE LINES ARE EVEN WIT THIER PUNCHES! wtf... u didnt even say wat u liked and didnt like bout his verse u herb

flow = lar
structure = lar
multis = emcee
punches = emcee
creativity= emcee
final vote= emcee
great battle but i vote for Emcee

lol sorry who ever u r but i posted a rule and imma stick 2 it... thanks for ur vote anyways... STILL 1-1 Uppin...