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Provoked Images 11-23-03 06:34 PM

angellicalr vs. [-!F.A.T!-]
 
5-10 bars (10-20 lines)
all rules apply
drop by Tuesday noon...

[-!F.A.T!-] 11-23-03 08:23 PM

didnt see this tuesday midnight guy i got school durin the day............................................... .................................................. .......................

[-!F.A.T!-] 11-23-03 09:28 PM

imma break this punks spine..374 posts and your still a FRONT LINE!!...
run by this is fun guy...give the pistol light so how you GUN-SHINE!!...[gonna shine]
fix your fate...fat's gon EAT-R...with little taste...one punch this kid'll break...[eat-r fats an eater]
slit your face...you aint even half sick so how you a MID-ILL WEIGHT!!!...[middle weight his user title]
i drop anvels kid...one punch you feel kid..how "R" u "ANGELLIC!?!?!?!"...
kiss and tell bitch!...give away the raw like sushi..call me SELL-FISH!!...[selfish]
MANNNN..asked for a win dumps on ya spine you got shit-back
i got my shit to fix that feline...in my "KIT-KAT"...you in 4 bars i ripped that...[get it?]

SHUNNED!!!!

[-!F.A.T!-] 11-23-03 09:30 PM

LAST LINE EDIT: you in those 4 bars i rpped that

uppin for you
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[-!F.A.T!-] 11-24-03 02:12 PM

uppin for u 2 see this dont forget
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Provoked Images 11-24-03 03:14 PM

yo...

This kid's F.A.T. literally cause he bitin off tha vets...
And that's a fact, he's "hearin" me while i'm WRITING TEXT!
tha only hotness this kid's got is inbetween his folds...
he only flows when he hits his stomach n it rolls...n...rolls... << say it smoothly >>
ur jus a lil soul-less, u is who nobody will notice... know this...
u seem hopeless, wantin to be hilarious but, yo, ur jokeless...
hit-less, every single one of ur hits missed... Mr. D!ckless...
he's huge like Biggy but Big's dead... u? UR JUST FINISHED!!!
F.A.T. is F-ar A-fter his T-ime, before orginizations of bars n lines...
his hardest rhymes were jus scars to mine...STARTIN TIME!!!

yo, yo, yo...

508? get it straight, we can do this personal, ready? don't delay UR fate... << see his verse >>
SET... GO!!! OH NO, this whole stack of cakes will break u jack, right back to tha IHOP on 50-8...
elevation? hit his head on a cloud? forget that, he needs a revelation...say it loud...
"gay n proud"... i guess that defines u... part 2: tha only time ur on top is in an asain crowd...
even wit "bold" words u won't be recognized...oh, dry ur eyes... try? againt u? why?
u suck period... while u eatin at hooters... fill up on "juicers" n "tater" fries... << think about it >>
this guy ain't got a profile like a pedophile wit a mic child...now that's wild...
u better hope u don't get caught... tha Kazaa media's r lookin for ur 508 files...

done...

yo, it's over, left u deaf dumb n blind, wat's left of his rhyme?
nuthin but a tangled...strangled... an angle of this angel's time... this was jus a RAPE'IN CRIME!!!

Theo Ginn 11-24-03 03:18 PM

hmmmmm

Flow: Tie
Punch: Angel
Metas: Angel
Struct: Tie
Enjoy: Angel

This was ok...Fat's best line was the kitkat line...which is played to hell..ok battle..angel takes it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93937

pretend its vida and hit it

[-!F.A.T!-] 11-24-03 03:25 PM

lmfao u realy thought he won wow...ok hhm hmmm

w/e wow

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uppin

Theo Ginn 11-24-03 03:31 PM

:noob:

lose the bolds...-.."..~ all that shit and the played lines

youl stand more of a chance

Cyphilaids 11-24-03 03:37 PM

F.A.T had this kid beat-but he stopped......u had 8 decent lines

angelicR had 20 half-way decent lines.....but more meti's multi's personals'..........

FAT crushed AngellicR in wordplay.....no doubt in my mind FAT's better....but kill the ~.."b...garbage and go to the max amounta lines.....

Angelic....nice drop-gettin better.....MY vote...ANGELICR

dw. 11-24-03 03:43 PM

angel took this, breakdown-

punches-tie
flow-FAT
multis-tie
metas-tie
enjoyment-angel
structure-angel
most played lines ever-FAT
overall-angel

close but FAT ya lines were too played man be more original but not bad, angel some gud shit but alot of lines n not that much eye-catchin stuff keep it shorter its more effective, pz!

angel i've jus gotta finish 1 of my 2 battle then i'll set it up!

[-!F.A.T!-] 11-24-03 03:52 PM

ehh w/e idc

3-0 u lol
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Provoked Images 11-24-03 09:43 PM

lol, glad to see that u ain't pissin ur pants n moanin like most noobs when they're down...w/e though...no beef...

UPPIN TO CLOUD N9NE HOP ABOARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Da_Legend 11-24-03 09:56 PM

Fat's shit seemed force....wack opener
needs elevation

Flow: Tie
Punch: Angel
Metas: Angel
Struct: Tie (angelical feel off later down da verse)

vote = angel

Provoked Images 11-24-03 10:08 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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