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Un... vs. Chem
Alright 8 linez?
Post by tonight and i'll be happy |
I forgot how short 8 lines was...oh well here's what I got fur ya......
I hope Chem dont come like his name and remain- Half-Assed Cuz I know Chem-is-try ing (still) to remove his head from his avys ass crack This kids dropping Light rhymes that couldnt harm the Dark Hes an electric loser, I hope your ready to watch this kid spark In fact- I wanna put your words and your sole in touch Cuz with your foot in your mouth ya ass wont be spittin much This kid is serious about posting hot rhymes but I dont know why he even pretends Cuz like the last 4 lines of his every verse- this faggot only cums hard in the-ends |
Dogg feed on my lines, but ill make you bleed on your rhymes~
Cant 'shatter my window' of opportunity so u jus 'beat on the blinds'~ First ill remove your esophegus then replace it wit your eyes~ You like 'crack wit a telescope' your visions through pipes~ Chems immune to you like a ship bitch i aboard your flow~ Hit every branch on tha ugly tree "UN" couldnt score wit a hoe~ What future forseeable made unemceeable think he could win~ Nigga youll check out quicker than 'tourists' at a Bin-Lad-'inn'~ |
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damn i gotta go wit unemcee.....ddint ne1 ever tell u to respect ur elders chem? haha wun.................hit up this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94086
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Ima hafta go wit that boy umceeable cuz his lines just hit wayy harder............................................ ............................................
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Wtf kinda vote was that 1st one .... Aint gonna try and sway but blah ^^^^^^^^^^^^up^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6
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Un took this batlle... the vocab, wordplay, metas, etc.... Chem, my advice is just to elevate a lil bit more. Ur gettin there. I know u have tha skill to let out whachu wanna say y'know. But yea. UnEmceeAble took this. VOTE - UnEmceeAble
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METAPHORES - UnEmceeAble
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - Chem STRUCTURE - Chem CREATIVITY - tie PERSONALS - UnEmceeAble OPENING - tie CLOSING - Chem MULTIES - tie FLOW - Chem OVERALL - Chem (4-2) Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94104 |
My vote goes to UnEmceeAble because of his nice thrown punches that hit the target. Chem also had nice punches, but UnEmceeAble's was more direct and had more streangth to it. Good job both of you. Keep it up.
Vote: UnEmceeAble |
un came harder wit his punches and was more complex
he also had more personals my vote - un __________________________________________________ _______________ |
I hope Chem dont come like his name and remain- Half-Assed
Cuz I know Chem-is-try ing (still) to remove his head from his avys ass crack This kids dropping Light rhymes that couldnt harm the Dark Hes an electric loser, I hope your ready to watch this kid spark In fact- I wanna put your words and your sole in touch Cuz with your foot in your mouth ya ass wont be spittin much This kid is serious about posting hot rhymes but I dont know why he even pretends Cuz like the last 4 lines of his every verse- this faggot only cums hard in the-ends OPENER....6 punches..7.5 flow...6 multies...7 wordplay...6.5 vocab..7.5 CLOSER...7.5 overall....48 Dogg feed on my lines, but ill make you bleed on your rhymes~ Cant 'shatter my window' of opportunity so u jus 'beat on the blinds'~ First ill remove your esophegus then replace it wit your eyes~ You like 'crack wit a telescope' your visions through pipes~ Chems immune to you like a ship bitch i aboard your flow~ Hit every branch on tha ugly tree "UN" couldnt score wit a hoe~ What future forseeable made unemceeable think he could win~ Nigga youll check out quicker than 'tourists' at a Bin-Lad-'inn'~ OPENER....7 punches..6 flow...7 multies...6.5 wordplay...7 vocab..7.5 CLOSER...7.5 overall....48.5 UN...I WAS UNIMPRESSED BY UR LACK OF PROVIN 2 ME UR 10-0...I THOUGHT U WHERE OVER COFIDENT....AND JUSS LACK'D WAT U SHOULD HAVE BROUGHT...OVERALL A PRETTY GOOD VERSE chret...i was impressed by ur sense of comin at him even though he was unbeaten....i think ur confidence and showin no fear and juss doin ur shit...made me like ur voice juss a tad bit more.... OVERALL VERY CLOSE...shouldnt have been wit a 10-0 verse 0-1...but in my eyes..how it goes... vote..chret |
^^^^^^Word... but haven't battled since like May so ...it takes time...........
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omg ur alive
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