Deser Eagle vs Dark Illusions
 

10 lines
usual voting
i will spit first
30 min time limit

check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'm gettin off, i'll spit asap aight?............................................ .................................................. ........................

its on......do what u do and ima do what i do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ill Bust Shots At Ya Head And Fill Ya Mind Wit "Empty Hints"/
Saturate Your Brain Wit Ammo & Metal From "Hollow Tips"/
My Scripts Hit This Dim-Wit Darkening Vision Like His Eyes Had Tint/
You Could "Spit Flint At Septics" And Still Wouldnt Be Able To "Spark Shit"/
This Battle Is A Walk "Waisted" Like Bein "Cut Above" The "Legs"/
Your At A Loss Kid "Face it",Like Parapelegics Getting Head/
I "Spit Classiscs","Keyin In" Hits Like A "Pianist"/
"Committ To Celibacy" Kid Cause Theres No Way Your "Beatin This"/
Stick To "Cliff" Notes To Make Your Scripts Seem Suspenseful/
Commin At Me With A Pencil...This nigga Gotta Be Mental/

iz u gonna spit or what????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................ ...

nice verse i'll drop in a min............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ............

yo this guys rep is like a "black magic trick", he's a "dark illusion"
like "defective viagra" nothin bout this nigga is "movin"//
i've broken his verse down bar for bar. every line was bitten. those that weren't were fuckin pre-written.//
this nigga "pussy" like a "litter of baby kittens". his verse is "foul" every line "stinks"//
nigga could never be "all over the streets" even if you "dropped from the roof of a buildin"//

this is kinda elementary for me, but i couldn't thinka anything so...here it is. fuck it w/e

yo people start votin on this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...

anyone gon' vote on this shit?............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

Yo im uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

aight both were alright

opener:DE
flow:DI
structure:none
pounchesDE was harder
close: DE

overall: DE

i took the time
look over this battle of mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=94913

peace

Yo If I could vote I'd vote for Dark Illusion cause his was tighter and he came with harder punches. Desert Eagle,.........My challenge is still up if your down

yo uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .....................................

honest vote=
Breakdown
punches=dark
flow=dark
sutainment=both
metas=dark
creativity=both
syructure=dark
multis=dark
enjoyment=both
vote=Dark...deser step up the game mayne..this guy
knew wot he was doin pz

MAKE SURE YA BOTH HIT THIS UP PLZ...HONESTLY NOT IN HATE PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94945