Aisle 5 Vs Dominator
 

I'm posting this in elite because I don't want his herb DR friends to vote. Only real voters. So fuck it.

Rules

10 lines
Blind spit
Due by friday
Check in first


This is my check in.

whatever.... i dont know why you posted it here but im checking in

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wow friday...damn Aisle 5 needs a lotta time to right
and plz dont say you got shit to do...........................
jus a pre writer huh? your bad..good luck to both pz

Lmao... Stfu its called being with your family on thanksgiving, you might wanna try it, but wait... you have no life.

Word... good call.... and I was making a site for someone yesterday that payed me for it, so i was busy.... friday is perfect....

Blah... quick key to get this over with. Check it...

Your in a crew with Brixton... Bitch your hardly worth the laughs..
And its either I smell a victory.. or you need to start taking baths!
Your fuckin trash! Like blockbuster home videos your career's in rewind
Its a known fact your not taking steps ahead.. always getting it from behind!
I'm plummelin this cat... surprisin this herb hasn't gotten slayed yet
And I'd put myself in your shoes... but i refuse to wear Payless!
I'm murderin ya whole. . Its a known fact Dominator is lame
Your verse was such a dissapointment. . . So I'll hang YOUR head in shame!
Didn't half ass your verse, still... it's just a bunch of bull
And The only shot you ever had... Is now lodged in ya skull
Prolly an ugly fuck, likely resembles the features of Mr. Bean
So when Dominator arrives... It's sure to be an ugly scene!

Post ASAP man.. I did an extra 2 lines. So match me.


No feeding, swaying, etc. etc.

Good luck.. peace.

Edited for typos.

Dude I totally forgot about this.... Brixton just pmed me.... I am fucked up right now....

Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:18 PM]: shit i forgot
LyricCyanide [8:19 PM]: fuck that jus keystyle summit and flip the script..surprise him
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:19 PM]: dude im fucked up right now
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:19 PM]: i have 20 beers in my on 2 hours sleep
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:19 PM]: me*
LyricCyanide [8:20 PM]: lol..its aight..the best shit always comes out wen ya bladdered..r ya english or american?
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:20 PM]: english
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:20 PM]: oops
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:20 PM]: american
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:20 PM]: im from usa
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:20 PM]: see.... im fucked
Xv RedSox Fan vX [8:20 PM]: lol

But yah.... people are coming over at 9..... which is in 40 min and I still have to clean a little :( So I cant spit.... its my fault tho, i shouldnt have forgot.... theres been so much shit goin on tho :( .... so you can either DQ me or let me spit tommorrow when I wake up at like 1

Just post up tomorrow then, just don't no show.

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Aisle thanks for extending this.... lol my parents went to vegas and lets just say ive been drunk since friday morning lol.... but hey here we go

::Keyin::


These voters would give me a ‘high 5’ but then they see my opponent
Weakest member of a dope crew, they know hes lacking components
After my verse is over they’ll be screaming, “Spill in Aisle 5”
Cuz my game will slit your skull in two, leave ya struggling to survive
Man your punches are all ‘missin the point’ like Shaqs free throws
This is like competing against a goth with no style, dawg, ‘change clothes’
Your rhymes are out of date, like kids who wear converse
And ya can’t type it right the first time so you need to edit your verse
5 couldn’t make a decent verse in 10 lines so he extended it to twelve
But this Aisle was still ‘bare’, like a supermarket with no shelves

Ill stay at 10 like we said origanally…. That’s all I need….


::Merkin Completed::

Thats all you need? lol I'm not even gonna comment on the thing above, I mean verse above me. I'll let the elite voters decide this. . .

1

Blaow..................

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Dominator was so overwhelmingly merked...

Eminem himself coulda popped in and written those two missing lines for him as a closer...

And Dom woulda still been cooked beyond belief.

The opener and the "Payless" lines were classic.

Harder punches, better wordplay decide this.

Dominator came weak as fuck...

Maybe he was still drunk.

Peace

Blaow! Lets get this closed niggers!

Up and away!!

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^^AGREE'D

^ i will personally wait until you have a massive number of posts and then delete all your freeposts. so have fun...

vote = aisle 5. better overall. punches actually connected unlike dominators werent directed as well.... aisles was more interesting also. average overall from aisle. below average from dominator for elite.