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kautious vs phil.m.up
10 -15 lines
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i'll spit wen i can which will be soon pz n good luck bra __________________________________________________ ___ |
aight fuck it..keyed..
Breakin contacts like Kautious is still Mourning T.I.C I was thinkin ya were John Lennon the way I Let ya Merkin Be!! Jus like the Beatles..each one of your Punches will eventually Fall.. ...ya just a Labelled up Herb... Compared to workers in a Mall.. your face i Maul..coz this is like a Lion on A Cowered Gazel... ..this bitch is Related to Satan...Still he couldnt Bring me Hell... Jack shit...jus like the new owners,Noone respects your Presence ....Its like a Hardcore Rap Award..Going To Evanescence.... no doubt you Fake...like Spanish Gold Sold For A Kilo A Dollar.... its a Scream Not A Holla...coz i got this mutt Bitch by the Collar... *John Lennon sung Let It Be blah blah blah..pz |
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~My Verse~
It’s gonna be a quick assassination when I’m “aim”ing with “lyrical Cyanide”
Slide the edging off my verse across your thought to know it was why you died Rip you from outside~to~inside only to leave on ur streets of a “man(s)-chest-here” Cutting u with split blade hits it’s sever especially when im a homophobe and ur a fucking queer No pink slips so it’s not a final frontier, call me sincere but I call you an embarrassment I’ll have your structure bent to an extent of torment to the rhymes created by you on 10 percent In real life it would be ur spine on cement to my intent, cut the vent from where ur words are sent A crucial end (determined fate) Kautious the match maker setting Phil- up with death on a date Only 8 now, 9, a heavyweight beating by a fatal design of text and this match is considered mine Combine this last line (a sign) -I define divine scripts- and collapse u on your own fucking time |
aight, shit i thought i was gonna drop first
nice verse uppin for votes now ..................................... |
Ok... First off Phil's was more LLL style crisp clean, nice meta's punches and word play...
Kautious had kinda stretched lines and no that many hard punches... close but punches and structure took this Vote: Phil http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2034#post942034 drop a poll vote here.. |
ehh Kautious go and post a verse in out battle ... im waiting on u.. .................................................. .................................................. ................................
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yea i mesed up on the strucure i tried to edit it to be alligend or sumthing but i can't edit , thats tupid but any way
upping for votes |
yo and can the voters please vote on catagories
flow- structure- punches- personals- metas- multis- creativity- also paradox you say i didn't have punches or the structure but im sure i had alot more of other things like personlas and multis but a votes a vote so lets get em in |
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flow-phil
structure-phil punches-phil personals-= metas-kau multis-= creativity-phil vote:phil yo return the vote here plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94638 |
^^^wtf? get outta here kid...
no personals we both had a lot multis...kautious def took that.. i hate wack voters pz...... 2nd_________________________________________ |
flow=k
structure=p punches=p vocab=tie overall=p both yall nice spit! i liked k's flow and didnt have bad structure! p came alot harder and had better punches and good structure! vote=phil.m.up rtn fav! PLZ hit this up with honest vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(its like a week or more old) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92962 |
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vote P hit this wid 1 last vote http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=94913 peace |
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