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KoNcEpT vs McProfit
6-10 Lines
You First No Feeding No D/r Verses Due : 12 Midnight |
aight bro checkin in................................................ .......fuckin' 100 characters....
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Iight....I'm In ....................................
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Koncept dont get it/ That he don't have a dick it's a clit/ 8-10 lines/ Watch where you steppin, you'll land on my lyrical minds/ This shit's is outrageous/ I'm fearous/ Drop the mike take a hike/ Get off the stage/ My rhymes so lethal you locked in a cage/ I'd hire you for Janitor but your not even worth minimum wage/
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aight checkin' bro............................................... .................................................
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aight bro let's go? It ain't hard to think of 8 lines that was all blind bro............................................... .....................................
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[I] You Suck Dude, I Dont Even Need To Try Cuz Ya Verse Is Shit.
My Punches Hit, And Call Me A 'Bad Company' The I'm Dropin This 'Profit'. I Got This Kid Silent, He Knows To Shut Up When Kon Speaks This Kid Reaks, He Couldn't Drop A 'Hard Spit' If He Ate 'Concrete' This Kid's Wants Me To Cum On, Well I'm About To Fill His Thirst Kid's The Worst, Cuz My Biggest 'Personal' Is.............. 'His Verse' I Didn't Need To Try In This Battle I'm Went 6 |
METAPHORES - KoNcEpT
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - KoNcEpT STRUCTURE - KoNcEpT CREATIVITY - KoNcEpT PERSONALS - KoNcEpT OPENING - KoNcEpT CLOSING - KoNcEpT MULTIES - neither FLOW - KoNcEpT OVERALL - KoNcEpT |
koncept took this Profit..........gotta step up your game.......i cant officially vote but..............you can...................
this is the link boys......check it out please,need votes..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95117 |
opener:koncept
closer:koncept punches:koncept methphors:tie enjoyability:mcprofit- all i can say is 'lol' structure:koncept overall:koncept mcprofit keep elevatin dawg, ur verse was wack as hell go to the 'wackness emergency centre' and elevate. in fact you need an elevator. koncept keep it up dagw. aiight please vote for the battle in my sig. peace |
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koncept took this easily i will come back and vote when i have 100 posts...'
check this battle and vote yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95594 |
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