Angry~Cracka v. ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
 

aight 6 lines, due 10 min from your check in

Checkity Check............................................. .................................................. ............

aight due by 12:03, lets do this
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DING DING!!!!.....


CarNage bout ta hand lyrical bruizingz, an' get under ur skin like blood "tranzfusionz"/
1-1..rec AngryCraka only excelz at losen', u'll get hit wit tha mic till ur left wit evalastin' "contusionz"/

Don't worry kid I'll give the word to yah "Momma" about how u died from this verbal heat "TRAUMA"/
leave your faggot ass "6 FEET DEEP" like that "HBO DRAMA"/

fINISHER

Your bleed’n like a virgin, hurten, gettin penetrated for the "first-time"/
Ya best is my worse-rhyme, I’m spitt’n sciptures with a "cursed-mind"//

U the Weakest Link goodBye....lol

WAITIN FOR CRACKA......dONT TAKE TOO LONG CUZ I DID IT ON TIME.............................................. .................................................. .........

fuckin telephone modem kicked me off, wtf....

Hold up, yeah kid, you know I can bust ya open/
Let the bitch post first so he cant say his fingers broken/
You must be a speed bag cuz I'm always landing punches/
My lines cut up ya stomach more than doing crunches/
Only time he got some, just put his hand in his pocket/
Just quit RB now, fool, cuz ya know that ya just lost-it/

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^^ yeah yours is decent too, mines aight i guess...hungover as hell right now. lets get some good votes in on this shit ya'll..........

Wus up wit peepz not votin on battlez Man............................................... .................................................. ................UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

uppin for votes................you voting on other peeps' battles too carnage?....................................

flow: Angry~Cracka
punches: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
structure: Angry~Cracka
creativity: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
metas: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
enjoyment: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~

was anaight battle

peace

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ..........................

my vote is exactly the same as Rap~Jesus~. Crack had flow and stucture. but ~©Ã®Ñåg€~ had everything else.
my vote. ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
keep elevatin.

Carnage:

CarNage bout ta hand lyrical bruizingz, an' get under ur skin like blood "tranzfusionz"/ (<nice punch)
1-1..rec AngryCraka only excelz at losen', u'll get hit wit tha mic till ur left wit evalastin' "contusionz"/
^coulda refined this, made a "sharper" point, but good line

Don't worry kid I'll give the word to yah "Momma" about how u died from this verbal heat "TRAUMA"/
leave your faggot ass "6 FEET DEEP" like that "HBO DRAMA"/
^Structure suffered here, but decent line.

fINISHER

Your bleed’n like a virgin, hurten, gettin penetrated for the "first-time"/ (<nice- good meta)
Ya best is my worse-rhyme, I’m spitt’n sciptures with a "cursed-mind"//
^Strong closer. Nice verse.

Angry Cracka:

fuckin telephone modem kicked me off, wtf....
^ This was ya best line...lol j/k

Hold up, yeah kid, you know I can bust ya open/
Let the bitch post first so he cant say his fingers broken/
^ lotta filler, no REAL punches tho.

You must be a speed bag cuz I'm always landing punches/
My lines cut up ya stomach more than doing crunches/
^good bar-decent snaps

Only time he got some, just put his hand in his pocket/
Just quit RB now, fool, cuz ya know that ya just lost-it/
^strong first closer line, but the last one lacked the punch needed to take it.

Breakdown:
Open: Car
Close: Car
Meta's: Car
Creativity: Car
Flow: Angry

Vote: Carnage

Here's tha active links: fa REAL, Return tha realness, come poll an honest vote, cuz YOU KNOW how fucked it is to have ya shit SLEPT on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95464