FlowzLuCiouS Vs Rule
 

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Good luck
peace

ill drop my vote when both yall check in n spit ya verse aight???????????????????????????????.............. .........

o yeah hit up the battle in my sig Vs Irv its 3-0 rite now im lookin to KO his ass 5-0 since my rules wus 3-0 is a KO but i gotta have 5 votes for it to count we gettin slept on ZZZzzZ

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ..it's 5 30 so i'll post at 5 50 iight man...

and............ Ill poll my vote on here when i reach 100 posts this gay ass rule wont let us vote until then so until then Peac3........

Checcin in!!............Good Lucc!!.........its 5:40 ill post in 10 minutes = 5:50...aiight ...... ~1~ ......

aight yo ill post my vote when yall to drop yurr verses untill then um? can u please vote on my battle its slept on.... Peac3.....

Rule?!....u "rule" nuttin u as "fake" as dey come/
take it n run dont try cuz den im "breakin~ya~thunbs"/
makin it fun as we "laugh" at dis dude/
im takin da "whole~meal" n have u askin for food/
i already killed dis kid what more do u want from me/
make him have sum "nightmares" but look i dont haunt "dumdies"/
it's a "wrap" man dis cat "choosin~to~lose"/
he's ready to clap,stand like im "amusin~dis~fool"/

aiight uppin!!

you still havent checked in what the fuck.............................................. ....................

I'm introducing this kid to a battle for some entertainment
Claims he's from queens but he's locked in the basement
Unactive so how's he suppose to keep up a lyrical athlete
oh i c you were just spittin....

He's diggin a hole must be comfy in'a bed six feet deep
Im'a take it easy on this hoe like a tight horny virgin
One RULE use a CONDOM thats a lesson worth learnin
But you failed you accepted my answer in your thread
Glad you made that grave cuz after this ya good as dead
Unimagionable the torture and humilation you could adore
You lost like Hitler tryn'a attack before a declared war

oh shit im an ass i didnt realize you checked in...meh...lets get some votes............................................. ................................

uppen for some votes............................................. ....................................

Flow-rule
Multies-None Really
Structur-Rule I hate those * ~ them
Punchs-Rule
Personals-Rule
Volcab-Rule
Wordplay-FlowzLuCiouS


Overall-Rule

This was an Alright battle From RUle But FlowzLuCiouS wasnt that great

go rule, its ya birthday.....were gona party like its ya birthday.....
{that filled up near nuff 100 characters} :P

nice battle....but like, erm, MC Uski sed....them ~ things am not good on the eye!

good flow rule, as usual....:: thumbs up ::

keep it up man

uppen
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