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5hifty vs Walter Wall
8-9 bars (16-18 lines)
No-Hate No-d/r No-Crew No-feeding No-biting No-Recycling No-1 line votes you spit 1st, you have 20min after checkin i got another 20 after you.. All Votes Must Be Explained In Detail... Good Luck!!! |
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.........who the fuck do you think you are kid?
if you wanna battle me than your wack ass is spittin first |
what ever.. stop you bitching.. give me 20min....
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Walter Wall?, my punches land hard enough to make
texas three states. uppercuts will leave ya chest in v-shapes, as i hand you an L in a circle, like the winner of a lexus-sweepstakes, I'll even rip your eyes backwards so you can't look forward to this loss like contemporary priests I'm already bored with this Cross this bitch couldn't serve me fresh lines if he ordered some floss like porn vets in virgin roles..you're only Acting Tight, resurrect your life like Christ, just so I can come and kill you twice I'm always prevailin so every time you'll be failin its like trying to Crucify yourself, you won't get the last nail in im smackin this kid till his head is turned..360 degrees, ya strategy will never work, cuz ya loss record will be equivalent to the number of emcees that RB has registered.. (finisher) Verbally harassing walter I am forced to enforce his debt because this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating and battle the best I sever chests from necks and hips that are used for mad slaps and fag-biz, I could smack with jizz and FILLET this FISH. |
where i said:
"im smackin this kid till his head is turned..360 degrees" - look at his avatar where i said: "this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating and battle the best" - look and read his sig.. |
Call'n me out?............must of misheard your information
cuz here ure cum'n up shorter than midgit masturbation Checked ya profile, 57 posts a day? you must be joking The last time you dropped a hot bar, ure feet got soapy Im a laugh and relax as I take it easier than bake oven Cuz kid can't spell, whats he gonna show me 5umthin? Ya havent heard of structure vocab or multis apparently Got no chance of the vote, Im facing emcee alan keyes! So as I keep............my fly rhymes presidentially inclined U stay wack and 'matched'.......'taken out' with 10 lines! |
vote on this battle
and do it right flow - structure - multis - punches - wordplay - |
5hifty - That was a decent verse. You had I think about 2 punches in there that landed really nice. They wernt played or anything. The structure, and rhyme scheme could use a little work. But thats nothing time cant do for ya...
Walter Wall - I dont know if this is as good as you are, maybe a bad day. But I wasnt feeling ya verse to much, I felt things were forced to much. You had 1 really good punch in there. But alot of the time, it doesnt match with multiple punches. Your flow was good and all of that. Structure was straight, maybe make a better rhyme scheme... Because of the punches Vote - 5hifty OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
Personals- Walter
Punches- Tie Multies- 5hifty Flow- Walter Vocab- Walter Wordplay- Tie Overall- Walter Synapsis- Ok... Battle was ok... Looks closer on stone than what it really was... 5hifty you need to work on your structure cause readin' yer shit was a pain... but other than that... both of em were str8... Pz |
^fuck'n dickryders
I love frontlines, lol punches is one of 5 categories learn how to vote homie then come back |
that was directed at high class
wil getcha knows how to vote Personals Flow Punches Wordplay Vocab Structure Multis ^all should be in your vote |
shifty had an overall better verse, he had more complex punches and wrdplay. Walter had an aight spit, one or two good punches but nothing too hard or witty. Vote 5hifty
vote gone for this reason: the following message describes your votes credibility level: http://laer.nu/captions/chalkboard....g13%5Rabg+shaal seriously, go back to somewhere else. feeble |
flow - walter
structure - walter multis - shifty punches - walter.......just showed utter disrespect for shifty....made him look foolish......elementary punches that hit harder than the complex shit he spit..... wordplay - tie vote - walter............. |
hmm.. i think this could be a hate vote because of what happend earlier. Tech.. but its ok i respect your vote....let get this battle overwith today people..
Nice Verse Walter |
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