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Meters vs. Go_Todd_Go
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alright blind spit 10-14 lines due by tomorrow morning good luck |
alright, checking in. i'll post in about 30 i guess.
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hey, im checkin in
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go to bed, dont let the bed bugs bite
your ryhmes are wack, cant stand the fight it takes u 60 minutes to rhyme, who are you walter kronkyte all you do, is sit in your room challengin me, awaiting your doom ill put you in your tomb zip past you... zoom zoom blow you up like a balloon, push u off a cliff like you was a cartoon and all the while i be gettin major poon fucked your mom and your dad, turns out your dads a fag your mom be suckin his dick, while he be reading a homo mag just give it up, yous a bust, post ur shit if you must there really aint no reason, votin for you would be treason |
Have to exclaim Go Todd, Go! as you implode in menstrual flow/
But i'd resemble Vincent Van Gogh if you ever went audio/* Devour your rhymes like a sloppy joe, because your bars aren't aligned/ Fuck being the APPLE of your eye you FRUIT, chomp ya down until you're only RIND/ Entwined in the cryptic message i'm spittin, you're motionless and fossilized/ Couldn't get a vote to lean your way if they resembled Elton John italicized/ Plagiarized your verse, think it's time to reimburse the dry nurse*/ Not having flow doesn't make you terse, bitch probably thinks he's diverse/ You are reminiscient of the day time SKY, the way your fucking rhymes BLEW/ Ironic how ya seeing STARS 'cause this emcee KNIGHT just ran ya through/ * Vincent Van Gogh cut off his ear. Get it? Can't listen to audio without ears. * A dry nurse can't breast feed. Thus no *flow*. (btw, terse means to the point if you didn't know) |
upping for votes........
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Shit...haha. Any votes at all?
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yep....not a bad battle..cudda contained harder shit tho
BREAKDOWN-- Punches-Meters Flow-Both Sustainment-Meters Structure-None..tone it down lads Metas-Meters Enjoyment-Meters Overall-Meters MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97712 |
yo i hit up this battle so make sure ya hit up the link above plz pz________________________________________________ __________________________________
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upping for some votes please.....
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good battle i think meters murked you
vocab meters flow meters punches meters multis meters wordplay meters overall vote meters |
back to the top for a third go...
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Not a bad battle.......Still a bit one sided tho'....
Breakdown: Punches:Meters Flow:Tie....(both were a bit shaky at times) Metaphors:Meters Wordplay:Meters Complexity:Meters Multies:Meters Overall Vote:Meters....(for obvious reasons)...... P.S.........Make sure you return the favor and vote on this battle.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97369 |
battle was pretty lopsided........meters murked ya pretty bad...............his verse was full of punches, personals, good vocab and other shit........not to say that your verse was bad Todd but you gotta be less predictable and use a more advanced rhyme scheme........................keep elevatin.......
vote on this battle and the one in my sig please... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97784 |
Have to exclaim Go Todd, Go! as you implode in menstrual flow/
But i'd resemble Vincent Van Gogh if you ever went audio/* ^^^ favorie meters line fucked your mom and your dad, turns out your dads a fag your mom be suckin his dick, while he be reading a homo mag ^^^ favorite go-todd line i'm gonna give this to meters, he had better everything vote- meters |
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