.Deva.[V].Malcolm X.
 

Ha ..

10 lines
House rules
Due: 30 mins

:gfy:

lets do this...check ~1~........................
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Wow Ya Joined In December 2003, No Wins And 12 Posts
Are Ya Scared To Battle? Or Have You Lost Ya Fuckin Ghost? (writer)
You Must Be Half Asleep, Way Too Slow On Ya Feet
Just Call Me The Jap’ And This ‘The Pearl Harbour Defeat’….
No I Don’t Mean To Boast, Cos I Aint Won To Many
But This ‘X’ Couldn’t Win With A Double-Sided Penny
Herbs Like You Fuck’n The Site n Leave 1 Line Replies
So I Got 1 For You, “Ya Write Like A Retard With No Eyes”
Seen Some Names Before, But Yours Is Just ‘played’ Stupid
Ya Couldn’t Write With Meaning With An Arrow From Cupid
1 last thing to say that’s the real Malcolm X was respected
Your detested and word for word ya verse jus got molested

Dev will elope so not much longer do i gotta cope with this fag
Ya equipment sealed? & yeh, bitch told me he has tha dope in'a bag!
Kill him besides paintings .. leave him dead before creations
& women love you? GOOD! .. i'm in favor of lesbian relations!*
Public hates you .. never had it, or even sounded this good
& punishment for beatin round tha bush gets you pounded in wood!**
Not wrestling pac but you still got caught onto tha x-factor
Daze & leave you tryna catch tha stars .. like a fuckin press actor!
In this battle yuh get tossed .. believe, tha nazi's near you
& "lets do this" is not a typical response,
publicity is a no no .. when tha paparatzi fears you!***

* - Check his custom title .. "Women Love Me"
** - beatin round tha bush/pounded in wood .. trees/wood
*** - Sig says "i don't need publicity" .. he checked into tha thread with "lets do this"

VOTES! .. if you don't understand anythin, DON'T VOTE!!

Uppin for votes .. don't sleep

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pretty good batte i think deva took this..

Flow: Tie
Personals: Tie
Punches: Deva
Creativity: Tie
Opener: Deva
Finisher: Deva

Good battle but i think deva took this props to both of you pz

Blah @ you .. god, FL doesn't know shit ..

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Break down

DEVA - I liked your stlye easy to read good vocab and orginal shit like it was so fucking easy to follow props to yah

X- lots of force multies and child vocab but i like the line about actors and the tupca on

But overall DEVA just open a can right here. Props to yah hopefully i can battle you later for fun..

MY VOTE DEVA PLEZ BOTH OF U HIT ME UP HERE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98427

PLEZ VOTE THIER TO GET IT OVER PEACE

Blindness . uppin ..

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there we no multis - how wack are you voters.

Punches: Malcolm
Flow: Doesnt Matter
Enjoyment: Malcolm ..

I cant vote but malcolm obviously took this .. prolly voting deva cus he can vote.

Ha .. somebody with one post knows what tha fuck's up ..

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dev won this battle
x ...umm go back to sleep and think of some new shit
she got you on this one sorry

My vote goers to Deva.

This battle was better than most on here. The open about the Ghost writer was dope, and the personals were on point.

MalcomX dude came hard, but just not enuff. I liked his shit, but he didn't really connect on anything, but the wordplay was there, flow was aight.

Over all

Deva is my vote.

Aight Breakdown---
Punches-X..Deva had some played..Eg..The ghost one
Flow-Both
Structure-Both
Enjoyment-Both
Sustainment-Tie
Origanality-X..but you dont need to exoplain everythin..
Complexity-Tie
Vocab-Deva..Experience of Topicals etc
Metas-X..not bad..liked the finisher
Overall-X
dint contain too many hot punches but X did take this due to harder Punches n Origanality pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98704

Thanks B ..
UPPIN !

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