~©Ã®Ñåg€~ VS ~Rythmic Hints~
 

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same ol same...


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off da top on some quick shit...................holla!

Words Abusive,Each Verbs Serves This Herb Internal Damage/
Punches All Inclusive Since I Attack The Total Package/
Rappin Madness Like My Scripts Were Wearin Straight Jackets/
You Attack With Sadness Like Fightin Tears,Showin Ya Wackness/
Ill Turn Your Raps To Blackness When My Words Slash & Burn/
Then Return The "Body" Incased Like Ashes In An Urn/
The Thoughts Absurd,No Token So The "L" I Wont Be Taken/
You Got Me Mistaken,Ill Strip And Eat Your Lines Like A Side Of Bacon/
This Kid Is Fakin,Think Twice And Ill Still Beat This MC Squared/
He's Scared But No Deaths Needed So Like Extra Tires,This Kid Gets Spared/

MAn u tryin to rhyme wit ....all without no punches or personals ooh well easier for me dawg.....to finish ya..lol

--Keyed Verse...Check--

Rythmic Hints Is Known To "Blow For For Votes", Trust That This "Bitch Guzzlez"..
My "Winz Muffled", Ya "Lyrix Are Like Ya Sig"....Looks a "BIT Puzzled"!!

(All His Batles Look Like Old Batles Swiched Around..A "Bit Puzzled")..lol

5-2 Rec Sayin You Win? "Urine" Trouble, Like As If A Man Started To "Pee Words"
You Make Wins "Easy To Get To" Like "AOL KEY WORDS"..


Ive Been "Known For Holdz" n "SUBMITIONZ" To Damage The Fight...
So Ile Have Ya "Legs Popping Out Durring Christmas" Like "Santa In Tights'!!!..

The Depths of Imagination..??haha I Will "Stab~ya~Head" so you could be "Open Minded"..
lettin "Text" fade out your head so it could "Speak~for~Itself" while you try to "Find It"...lol

~Finisher~

Knave0ne Productions?? Breathin is Heavy - Rhytmic - I'll Leave U in Heaven - Wack Fucks -Arent Allowed to Speak in my "Presence"...
Your Busted - and ya Behind yo Pc is - the Closest You'll Ever Come to Being a "Legend"!! (Think About it)..lol


Aight...done deal............

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GOodluck Kid............................................... .......................................

Carnage gets this without a doubt...he had way more personals and direct hits.....Rythmic gets the flow and structure categories....but other than that a straight run with Carnage.....he also had nice metas....no need for a breakdown...Rythmic only gets flow and structure.....Carnage just overtook him a bit more in the rest.....good read from u both though..no hate...just a vote...

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Breakdown:

Punches: Ryhtmic
Flow: Ryhtmic
Creativty: Rythmic
Vocab: Carnage
Enjoyment: Both
Opener: Close, but Carnage
Closer: Rythmic
Personals: Carnage

Overall: Rythmic

No hate, close as fuck...hard ta judge, 'n I enjoyed both so much...but Rythmic takes it...tha fuckin Bacon line was funny as fuck...Carnage was dope overall too...fuckin nice, propz ta both....

Hit this up plz...thz dawgz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99213

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Gangsta's One vote is funny really funny...lol he gives me the punches and wut kinda catagory u check ..he checks openers check the whole verses kid...lol


UPPUN ON THIZZZZZZZZZ VOTE HONEST all am askin

i think this went like this,

flow=r
punches=r
personals=c
enjotment=c
creativity=tie
opener=tie
closer=c

close shit but car got this but try and work on ur punches man they usually help 2 win a battle. vote on this honestly plz as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99408 .thx....pz

both came nice, carn had nicer wordplay, good punches, and he hit very creative on the punches also, nicer flow

rh came nice to but i felt he did'nt really just stab at his opponent,
he was flowin but just did'nt hit with good punches, he had a creative verse but he lacked the disses

vote carnage

Carnage took this but both you need better structure..

NEVER use "s //s or any other .;'~`- type shit..
It messes up the whole flow and looks horrible..
Shorten your lines and take constructive criticism..
No hate..

Vote- Carnage for harder hitting punches and better flow..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99511

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