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LM Vs. Blak woods (HEATED)
10-20 lines of heat
all simple rules 20 min to spit/drop check in... |
Checkin in and thinkin of a verse. Am I droppin first.......who cares, I'm a just drop.....................................
Peace!!! |
Blah,blah,blah,blah dawg will you stop babblin...
Your talkin whack shit, but you think your battlin... What's happenin, some herb thinks he can beat me... I know I'm bored but this win should come too easily... He also told me eminem's a rapper he fuckin admire's... Shit, all his played 'stan' punches and jokes just backfired... And it was a ghostwriter he hired, that's why he has a win... But 3 losses, he's like a dolphin without a fuckin dorsal fin... So dawg contact your next of kin and say your bout to die... Coz your gettin murdered for the 4th time, still no-one'll cry... And why do you call yourself somethin stupid like blak woods... I know, It's coz your verses sound like there written backwords... I just wanna type this and afterwards see my wins turn to 22... Coz basically I know that no dope lines will ever come outta you... But who cares, I dont, you should just be fuckin I.P banned... You get pleasure form winnin, but more often from your right hand... |
OOOPS....last line was meant to say
'You get pleasure FROM winnin' .................................................. .................................. |
aight...
ayo.. this shit here ain't fa' niggaz like you bitch// this is real shit baby, unlike fake shit you deal wit// June 2nd, (huh) not the birth of a legend// matta fact, nigga you probably caught dik in 87'// ya see, you stood up to a man, but bout to get smacked down// we can see ya ass is fake, we can tell how you act clown// wanna write ya lil shit, and drop it agains me// this pimp be smackin lil hoes like you fuckin silly// 21-11 (huh), but that was the past though// ya lyrics coulden't shit on me, if they fell out ya ass hole// ya layin down trash, what has god brought upon us// you see blak woods nigga, middle da land dat was promised// <---*EBONICS* probably a nerd ass nigga, get stuffed in ya locker// i read ya profile nigga, you a bitch that plays soccer// you should stick to sports nigga, leave this rappin ta pros// mistakes can be made, but black woods who you chose?// one get at me... not great but i'm at work and was really distracted. get aktive niggaz peace... |
sup lm.ite gd battle.
this is how i saw this, flow=lm(blaks was off in places structure=lm personal=tie punches=lm(hit harder) opener=lm closer=close but lm(bit played but nice man) enjoyment=lm gd spit lm man...................lol......................bla k work on flow and punches, put an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8309#post998309 now.thx........................................... ..pz |
ayo lm murked that nigga............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........
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yea this IS my worst shit yet......
hard to be origanal and keep the boss off my ass for playin on the net. not suprised the vote fell that way.. good shit LM tight verse....... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............can't really be suprised that there are so many EmineM fans on this site either though... I think he changed his style so much that it's hard to tell what kind of career he is trying to purseu in rapping.... but a whole nother topic... keep voting |
Me and prostyles went at it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i thought this was quite a one sided battle, LM took this...saying that though,,,i thought both had some weak lines...so heres the breakdown.....
punches=lm vocab=tie structure=lm flow=lm[not by much though] opener=lm closer=lm creativity=tie enjoyment=lm when it comes down to it my vote goes mainly on punches and lm jus came harder so....vote=LM....pZ can ya hit this plz.... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=98248 |
LM came a bit harder with the punches and wordplay/metas.
Blak Woods was just too simple and straight forward. Some nice metas and comparisons. But not near enough. LM still needs to work on his filler... I just wanna type this and afterwards see my wins turn to 22... ^^^ No diss in that, all filler. But ya coming along nicely, my man. Better shots and nicer wordplay win this for LM. Peace |
a think LM took this easily....in every category, even tho sum where close, he still took them all, even if it was by a small margin....
'So dawg contact your next of kin and say your bout to die... Coz your gettin murdered for the 4th time, still no-one'll cry...' that killed it for me.....u jus know that blak woods feels hurt with that line! vote = LM hit this up honestly please y'all.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=99723 thanks laterz |
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Peace!!! |
one sided battle dudes.... punches and flow went to LM, and thats what decided the battle... blak woods wasnt that bad, but his flow was slightly off and his punches didnt connect as well... both were creative and had some nice vocab.. but LM also connected some decent multis, while blak woods had none
punches = LM flow = LM vocab = tie creativity = tie multis = LM vote = LM |
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Peace!!! |
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