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PaYce 12-26-03 12:42 AM

PaYce vs. cRooklynite
 
10 lines
blind spit
drop 20 minutes after we both check-in



checkin in............................................

PaYce 12-26-03 12:56 AM

ummm...crook, u gotta check in man............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....................................

cRooklynite 12-26-03 12:58 AM

Checking IN... Had to finish up with Profit

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cRooklynite 12-26-03 01:08 AM

Oh Great I Batlling another little boy\\
But I'll bless this bitch nigga with a 9-inch Christmas toy\\
Send your ass back to your Maker cause you way off Pace\\
You better spit some hot shit, if you trying to save face\\
Even though I'm new to this site, I'm a veteran in this game\\
I'm a fucking Champion nigga, you gon' remember my name\\
There comes a time in every young Man's life\\
Where he has to live by the sword and not the butter knife\\
I'm so sick and tired of trying to keep all my lyrics guarded\\
Your Stupid Ass Grew Up To Be Just Like Dad.... Fucking Retarded\\

PaYce 12-26-03 01:12 AM

my first opponent, first win, first one to lose the race
Cuz u can't keep up with me...im too fast of a payce
You have 20 posts a day!!! Rapbattles like ur dentals
fillin the boards with posts that are rottin and mental
Missin raps essentials...So you'll never achieve fame
You have the really big mouth...but ur missin a brain!
dam thats a shame...you suck, givin you chillin feels
So i can Ride you crooked more than cars wit wheels
just like torquiose...you have RB.com green and blue
Cuz ya verses have us all sick and gettin ready to puke

cRooklynite 12-26-03 01:16 AM

Good shit yo...

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gizzard 12-26-03 01:19 AM

payce won if i could vote i would but i need 100 caracters to spit so hera is a lil vs from my head.
Slay that bitch drop his corps in the ditch cause when gizzard battles don't take it personaly becasue its just verbaly .

cRooklynite 12-26-03 01:28 AM

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cRooklynite 12-26-03 01:42 AM

Uppin' #2 --- For Votes
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~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~ 12-26-03 01:48 AM

This was kinda close i think but I think Payce took it by a bit
i liked his flow better and some of his punches too
structure was good .......so vote:Payce

PaYce 12-26-03 02:15 AM

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cRooklynite 12-26-03 10:36 AM

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cRooklynite 12-26-03 01:20 PM

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cRooklynite 12-26-03 01:41 PM

Can Y'all Vote Please So That We Can Go On To Do More Battles?
We Can Only Do Two Active Battles At Once, The Rules Say.

UPPIN #5 (FINAL) - FOR VOTES
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PaYce 12-26-03 04:44 PM

New to RB


Posts: 69

Joined: Dec 2003

From:

Status: Online

Battle Record: 0-0





IP: D917 C89A


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PaYce 12-26-03 05:05 PM

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PaYce 12-26-03 06:34 PM

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PaYce 12-26-03 10:47 PM

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wre both outta uppins...and not one vote polled...come on people, help us out here...

cRooklynite 12-27-03 11:16 AM

[Mods]... Can You Please Close this Battle... We are both unable to "UP For Votes anymore" and no one voted even after we begged and pleaded with them to... so please close this battle so that we may open new ones... Thanks.

lil' tagger 12-27-03 01:33 PM

crook took this shyt badly..................................no doubt he won*********************************************** *************************************************

cRooklynite 12-27-03 07:19 PM

Close Request 2 - [Mods]... Can You Please Close this Battle... We are both unable to "UP For Votes anymore" and no one voted even after we begged and pleaded with them to... so please close this battle so that we may open new ones... Thanks.

cRooklynite 12-27-03 09:51 PM

Close Request 3 - [Mods]...

I know y'all are busy... and I'm not trying to freepost... but I have sent an PM requesting that battles be closed and it still hasn't so this is just a reminder.

"Can You Please Close this Battle... We are both unable to "UP For Votes anymore" and no one voted even after we begged and pleaded with them to... so please close this battle so that we may open new ones... Thanks."

Kost 12-27-03 11:25 PM

payce won

i aint really feelin crooklyns hole gun shit

payce had pretty funny punches
battle didnt suck to read"

cRooklynite 12-27-03 11:54 PM

LOL... Okay Kost...

My reference to a 9-inch Christmas Toy was not about a gun... funny you would think that though... Were I'm from people often dis each other saying "Eat A Dick, MF" or something like that... but it's all good. Not that you would appreciate that anymore... but just thought I'd clarify. It's funny, I'm a very versatile MC... I can rhyme in all types of moods and modes (from Common Sense to Xzibit. My style on RB is what it is because this is where I felt every 1 here is. This was the type of content I read in verses when I first visited. So I was doing my Chameleon thing and Adapting to my surroundings... but it's all good... Thanks for Voting... and being Honest about it.

cRooklynite 12-29-03 10:21 PM

Close Request 4 - [Mods]...

I know y'all are busy... and I'm not trying to freepost... but I have sent an PM requesting that battles be closed and it still hasn't so this is just a reminder.

"Can You Please Close this Battle... We are both unable to "UP For Votes anymore" and no one voted even after we begged and pleaded with them to... so please close this battle so that we may open new ones... Thanks."

Token 12-30-03 12:41 AM

Just vote on other battles and leave links.. If it still doesn't work.. Then pm me and I will close it.


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TheUnderRated 12-30-03 01:18 AM

yo i thought PaYce took this...
punches pace....you really didn't diss him at all in this battle crook..if you think that 9 inch toy was a dis it is definatley nota dis its more like played sexual language kindof shit......
personals.......You really didn't have any crooklyne....you talked about him as like lil kid and shit but you gotta play with his name and just sayin his name is not a personal......but payce really didn't ahve much either so its a tie.........
flow...definitely payce you cut some of your shit too short and made some of your shit too long......strutcture threw your flow off...
opener..........gotta give it to payce but crooklyn its good to see you came out of the closet and admited you like to give little kids dicks for christmas.......you dissed your damn self....watch that..
closer......they are BOTH AWFUL <----PAYCE I SHOULD KICK YOUR FUCKIN ASS YOU HAVEN'T COME HARD IN ANY BATTLE EXCEPT THE ONE VERsES ME YOU SON OF A BITCH.........tie...........
overall........payce took it ............by far.............crook..........whackness emergency center awaits...........

Token 12-30-03 02:42 PM

Ok you both have 3 more uppins..


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PaYce 12-30-03 03:00 PM

uppin for more votes plz............................................... .................................................. ...............................................

Crooked-Comical 12-30-03 03:06 PM

Payce took this with ease man

every category

peace


repay the favour man i know what it feels like to get slpt on nd need votes .. its happening to me!

Invalid vote due to inadequate feedback. See this thread on what constitutes a valid vote.
-Kalvin

cRooklynite 12-30-03 03:25 PM

Yeah OK Crooked... That vote was Comical. That doesn't qualify as a vot enymore... or haven't you read the rules... You need to explain it... Just because we both want this battle closed, don't mean we won't D/R or even worse Favor votes.

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repay the favour man i know what it feels like to get slpt on nd need votes .. its happening to me!


And when you were saying that you were talking to Payce huh?

Yeah OK son... I won't be below 100 votes for long, remember that.

Anywayz --- UPPIN #6

dw. 12-30-03 03:27 PM

payce took this wiv beta flow punches n gud structure........both need to elevate but keep it up!

vote-payce

will ya vote on my battle wiv goofy in front lines.....honest vote plz n hit the poll....thanx!

PaYce 12-30-03 03:51 PM

uppin for final vote so we can finally close dis crap.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

Crooked-Comical 12-30-03 03:53 PM

YEAH OK FAG

I wasnt talking to anyone particular .. why havent any of u 2 repayed the favour yet

whatever

Crooked-Comical 12-30-03 03:55 PM

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Originally posted by cRooklynite


Yeah OK son... I won't be below 100 votes for long, remember that.




WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN BITCH ? IS THAT A THREAT OR SOME SHIT ?

That ok .. ur an idiot .. now u wont be aloud to vote on my battles cuz it will be considered a hate vote ... ill keep this and show mods if u ever try to vote on my battles bitch

nam_208 12-30-03 03:55 PM

YALL BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE WITH BETTER MULTIS AND MORE FLOW.
nOT A GREAT BATTLE..................................

Yu Bin SunD 12-30-03 04:00 PM

Crooky=he needs to elevate verse wasn't nice i didn't like it seriously son ima be real with chu elevate or just stop this shit

payce=his verse wasn't nice either but he came better he needs to work on his shit too

vote=payce

vote on this battle please respectfully if u got 100+posts


the batle vrs me and critizice 1

cRooklynite 12-30-03 04:03 PM

My man... you are WAY Over extended son.... First of all... I always vote HONEST.... Always... and I may vote HONESTLY on one of your battles some day... this ain't about me sending you a hate vote bruh. I mean for real... you want to call me a bitch and shit... but you breaking fool over something you don't even understand. I'm not even gonna waste my breath strokes son...

Bottom Line is: A lot of people on RB in my opinion will favor vote... I have seen it time and time again... and that's what the rules are here for. I'm new and don't have 100 posts yet... so I can't "return the favor". Whether or not you did or didn't give a favor vote... you still need to Vote Properly.

And BTW, Save the Beef for the streets of Canada son... You don't want any of this.

cRooklynite 12-30-03 04:06 PM

I don't feel like this wa a dope battle for the record... I'm not believing that this was some hot sh*t by far... but I appreciate nam_208 and Yu Bin SunD for keeping it real... This shit was wack on both our parts... Anywayz

UPPIN #7
Let's close this shit

PaYce 12-30-03 05:27 PM

yea really...Haven't been in the battle mode lately...last person I came hard against was TheUnderRated...lately, just haven't been able to get that feeling again.

Uppin for final vote so we can close dis shit.


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