Chronicclown vs lilrenegade89
 

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IGHT YO/
CHECK IT/
TA BEAT CHRONICCLOWN/
U NEED A LOTTA LUCK/
LIKE WHEN VANILLA ICE WAS IN HIS PRIME STIL U GON SUCK/
LIKE SADDAM SILENTLY YOU'LL SURRENDER/
YA STYLE IS LIMBER/
ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO ME/
LIKE WARM WEATHER IN DECEMBER/
KIDNAP LILRENEGADE FROM THIS MENTAL WARD/
KNOCK SOME SINCE INTO HIM WIT A TWO BY FOUR/
WIT NINE INCH NAILS/
POKIN THROUGH THE BOARD/
THIS LIL BITCH HAS BEEN OFFICALLY WHORED/
i NEED TO PULL OUT THE GLOCK/
AND HAVE SOMEONE SHOT DIS BITCH DEAD/
YOU PUT SIX FEET DEEP NIGGA YOU BE DEAD/
CHOKE YOU OUT WIT A PHONE CORD/
AND BANG YO HEAD AGAINST THE WALL/
I COULD SNAP YO NECK FASTER WIT PHONE CORD/
THEN U CAN MAKE A COLLECT CALL/
TRY TA HIT 911/
BUT I ALREADY BROKE YO FINGERS/
YO YOU RAP YO RHYMESLIKE U WAS JA RULES BACK UP SINGER/


IGHT SPIT

Ight Dawg I Spit My Shit Do Yo Verse And People Start To Vote

dis clown neva fuckin been on chronic
this little bitch, run from weed so fast u should call him sonic!/
knuckles or tails all his ryhmes gunna fail../
dis mutha fucker spit so slow it's like 2 words pa hour./
rite now he probally raisin his hand screamin white power../
im just sitten here waitin for dis panzy ta flower//
for this rap im probally gunna wait for an hour/
ill take ur fuckin fone cord n hang ya from a tower/
i spit my ryhmes a hundred miles a hour/
what u talkin bout u ain't got the balls ta pull out a glock/
i don't even think ya bitch ass has a fuckin cock/
im bout ta pump a slug in dis homo thug/
all he want from me a kiss n a hug/
a yo da only g u b is a fukin gay bo/
wait all deez ppl neve seen a homo /
b u better watch out ima bout ta blow a gasket/
if i do peeps find u layin in a casket/
bitch i knew ya ass was gunna fail/
so y don't u go play suckie suckie with sonic n tails/

uppin #1

Ight Ya'll Start To Vote.. And Vote Honestly Well Ya'll Priobably Will Ne Wayz.

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uppin#2 comon ppl vote please

what a very wack battle....typical and herbish..still lil renegade took it in every category.....and CC you need to fix ur damn format....it sucks...you both need that lovely word called...ELEVATION.....yes...its required..\\

v/lil R.

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damn... I've seen some shitty battles but this is the moldy frosting on a burnt cake...
Chronicclown's verse was wack as fuck, so bad it wouldn't even be able to get him into the WEC... Plus his flow was way the fuck of anything
lilrenegade sucked too but his had a trace of meta's and a flow...
VOTE-Lil' Renegade 89...
Elevate motha fuckas

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ightt LIL was alittle better and has shown some elevation...but needs a little work on structure and stronger punches
flow:LIL
punches:LIL
structuer:both need work
wordplay:both need alot of work but LIL had alittle better wordplay
my vote-lilrenegade89

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Uppin. We Need Votes. Well I Need Votes. Lol. So Vote And Holla Atcha Boi Wit Anything I Can Change On My Rhymes

uppin

Yo that was one of the worst rhymes i've ever heard no question battle goes to LilRenegade

if i can vote, id give it to Renegade, his flow was consistant.
For the most part a weak battle, not that hard of punches.
My vote: Rene89

ya'l r a bunch of fuckin dickriders. what the fuck ever

no i am not a dick rider im just better than u get it thru ur head
im'a murder dis fag
his rhymes startin ta lag
all ya gunna c is meds carryin the body bag
he open a fourtion cookie n the scripture said
watch ur back u gunna b dead
full fledged homo walkin new york streets
askin for money n head from every man he meets.
lookin for drugs n cocks
livin in a cardboard box
dis clan member born in texas
pull a drive by in my mother fuckin lexus
my words are infectious.
but dis gaybo ain't layin in da grave rite next-ta us
dis nigga layin in the water six feet deep
i don't think ne one will find him in this bloody creek
but the dog ill catch his smell he hasn't bathed in a week
renegade roll w/ a switch blade
slit ya throught n gush out kool aid
this corruptable mc follow me for lyrical aid
in the rap game he a duce a spades
me im the ace ill put this bloody knife in the side of ya face
dis mutha fucker is a lyrical retard
u better take ya ass ta bosten school yard
u won't know a good ryme if it hit u in da face
dats y ima make ur ass a discrace
ur bankrupt debt to the floor
ur so broke u can't even afford a front door
bitch im a tell your ur style is a failure
so go the fuck back to ya dirty ass trailer
ur ice is fake u got it for a quartor
with only 50 cent ur cash flow getin shorter
MY flow is ill it's been known to kill
chronic got fucked up da ass in his jail cell
now he gay n on his way to hell
o well now they ringin a bell for him to eat
the platter of shit thrown at his feet
is this mother fucker black or white
i can see his eyes filled with fright
in fear that he mite get merked tonite
this kid is fuckd up on acid
ill kill this mutha fucker and dump his ass in lake placid
layin in da lake his ass fuckin blasted

Man Shut The Fuck Up U Peace Of Shit. I Aint Wastin My Best Shit On Yo Ass Hoe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is how u need to vote and give a reason y in each catagory
Flow - xxxxx, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - xxxxx, some were played by both cats, but i felt that xxxxx had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - xxxxx, had alot more, and were alot better, yyyyy's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion xxxxx you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously xxxxx, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses

this is how u need to vote and give a reason y in each catagory
Flow - lil renegade's shit was structured better, which made it flow better. And Don't CAll me a fuckin' dick rider or I'll own your sorry ass Chronic.

Punches - Both of ya'll had some okay hits, but no one really stood out. Renegade had the better punches.

Personals - Negative. Not really any good personals in this battle.

Multies - Again, none really stood out.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate. REally, you both do need to elevate. Renegade had better Vocab.

Originality - Both VErses sucked real bad, and ya'll need to visit the WEC, but Renegade was a lil' better with his Originality.

VOTE-Lil' Renegade. This battle sucked but I think if ya'll spent a lil' time tryin' you could elevate and be good.

BUT I CAN'T FUCKIN' POLL VOTE CUZ SOMEBODY DONE FUCKED THIS SHIT UP. If someone could help I went back to express my CORRECTLY (Down to the fuckin' format) explained Vote, but IT DOESN'T FUCKIN' COUNT CUZ I CAN'T FUCKIN' POLL VOTE.
Please Help.

ok im uppin ag yo

uppin\

close it close it

clsoe this battle please

i have never seen worfs repeated this much.take it back. lil john uses his words over and over and over and over. but shit man lets take hour renegade used it 3 times. not back to back. that would have a better affect for repetitive word use. fail twice. shit. the homo thing is played. i'm sure we have all heard don't use it. don't get into long battles if your vocab cants support it. w.e.c we havae to mc's needing 60 cc's of webster's thesarus. by default i have to go lil renegade since his actually rhymed

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111138

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132

uppin uppin

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uppin

vote on thios shit fa heezy

Daymm...You both sucked serious Cock dread...LMAO

(am i aloud to say that) :P

uppin

um since u disqualified everyone that voted can i up ne more

yo i need votes homies uppin 1

ok im uppin agian casue u cancelled the votes that i did have so its like a new battle w/ out the battle

Uppin

THATS fucked up this has been slept on 4 ever i hate when votes get removed 4 stupid shit G' luck tho nigga........................1

uppin 1

ChronicClown, dont write in caps, very fuckin hard to read. If you need to that to get your point accross, you dont have a point. Plus, you had a shitty open and close.

Renagade, you rhymed hour with hour, like 3-4 times...weak shit. You had more punches tho, and a better flow, so I'ma give it to ya.

Vote Renagade

uppin

vote-lilrenegade.. the other cat was just way too simple it took all the concentration i had to finish his verse.. no punches weak disses and a horrible simple repetetive flow.. lil had some kool disses, a decent flow.. some creativity, much better than clowns verse.. return an honest vote plz ur cyclone line is whack, u forgot to thank 8 Mile
next time u step to me, get ur own style http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113774