Guyver4mk VS CounTREE Jay
 

Infinite lines.
No Dick Ridin
No Hate Votes
No feedin
And No Crew Votes.

I'm checkin in, PM me when ur ready.

Well, I already pm'd you and you ain't online, but i gotta let niggaz in here know ain't no one duckin' your bitin' ass. BELIEVE THAT. Wheneva you ready bia.

First off, Fuck the words and the shit you spit/
Diss my verse, but you just shame the game, thats it/
You claim to be a rapper and you're rhymin's tight/
Your verses ain't shit so drop the mic lets fight/
You tryin ta playa hate me but weak hearts I tear/
I tear up ya lines and break ya spine, like a spear/
I even hate ya name, so when I play, i envoke fear/
I keep on gunnin while you runnin outa breath/
Got you jumpin while I'm shootin at ya chest, you need a vest/
Annihilated, go tell ya people I defeated ya, ya little dick/
5 verses spit nobody wants to see, Nor can they give a shit/
You past tense, so don't fuck around cos you ain't a real MC/
And you ain't ready for battle with me, you suck G's/
I tell you now that this shit is on for life/
So ConuTREE jay's gona die tonight, Aussie boy murdered on a sword blood spilt/
Keep fuckin around with me an you know ur gona get killed, u know!/
Enter ya car, when you see tha guyver/
No time to talk, cos he beats ya heart/
He dissed me, but the punk didn't finish/
An i'm about to fuck his mom any minute/
NIGGA I HIT YOU UP!!

Goodbye
 

First off, come at me, U wannabe G, talkin' about takin' it to the Streets,/
It's hard for me to C how you could take me, When U can't even handle the beats./
How you gonna try to bring shame to me and talk about what I claim to be./
'cause you shortened your name to guyver, cause you can't even begin to mc./ (I know you get that shit)
It's ok, this ain't tv, so you can't play HandyMan, cause you don't have the tools./
Guess you're old man blessed you wit a lot of thangs, just not the family jewels./
Damn you a scam, I never saw a man who looks quite as sad as you./
I heard you usually got shit in your mouth, but this time you bit off more than you can chew./
'Pacs dead, and no lil' nigga like you could ever fuckin' fill his throne./
You just typin' away you keyboard thug, U should leave the game alone./
Should known from the gate that, not to come at the nigga you love to hate./
No votes, You can only give yourself a hand, like a friday night witout a date./
That's right nigga, that CounTREE boy just put you in your place./
Maybe you should start a coin collection, it's the only way you'll save face./
Damn, ever realize as you spittin' that this shit's already a rap,/
That's he's just another generic emcee talkin' about makin' guns clap./
Nigga your tryin' to come on here, talkin' hard like you a big timer,/
Heard from niggaz in your "hood" you was a nickel and dimer./
And you just an undercard, Wanna be big, but Jay the Headliner,/
Now let me show you the way out the game, you can call me your path finder./

Yo, str8 up, you a lil' nigga to me. So shut the fuck up, stop tryin' to pass off pac's lines like you wrote 'em, and learn how to mc, cause you fuckin' suck. I thought you "had sometin' for me". IT'S NOTHING YOU BITCH ASS NIGGA!

This is one of the better battles here and a close one.

For personals, I wasn't really feeling either one.

Punches: Jay wins easily. "Only way to save face is collect coins" (you know what I'm talking about) is an ill line, and the closing is really good. guyver's is just kinda random.

Flow: Close. Both of y'all went way too long with the lines not to have multiple rhymes per line, or some worldplay or something in there.

Overall winner: Jay.

Vote on my battles:

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...617#post1223617
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118472

countree murdered this kat...and why was guvyer basically spittin his own version of eminems quitter....

Vote:counTREE jay...

return the favour on Rollin_Deep Vs Ecko296

Yo son, I did have multiple rhymes in quite a few, y'all gotta read this shit closely, but good look on the love, suggestions and votes. RESPECT

That was the surprise :) (counTREE jay knows what i'm talkin about).
It was actually a mix between quitter and Hit 'em up.

Uppin

Oh yea, Rollin_Deep, that don't count as an explained vote. u gotta give reasons. :)

I can see that, but the fact of the matter is, You still got shitted on, and you couldn't even come wit your own shit. Why don't you just hang your head in shame. You got murdered dogg. You the fuckin' equivalent of a lip-syncin' rapper. YOUZ A BITCH! Say it str8 'NUFF SAID!

1 Up
 

ACTUALLY, this may come off as cocky, but you can write another one, anytime you want, in this same forum, and i'll just let mine stand. I mean, you should prolly hurry before someone votes, but you can write another one, cause i want a victory against your best stuff, cause now everyone can see why you got called a biter I ALWAYS SPEAK THE TRUTH BITCH. So come wit your best shit, cause i fuked your whole world up, I know.

you really want me to come again?
Well Here goes. Just for you man.
re-written for the fool from N.Y who can't spell "THE"
here goes....................

Re Wrote Retail Verse
 

I see you wanted me to set ya mind free/
But you never could be anything compared to me/
You call me a tramp, on the side of the pave/
But its 400 years oppression that made you that way/
Nigga you'sa joke and all you do is fuckin choke/
When you step to the mic you fizz up like a coke/
Now don't go actin silly comparin me to milli vanilli/
Cos I got people who'll kill you from bagdhad to philli/
Vanilla ice is ya role model, I ain't got no throne to fill/
It's weak ass coments like that, that make me prone to kill/
My name is the GUYVER 4MK's where I'm from/
I'll come back next week and I bet your ass'll be gone/
I'd rather eat shit than dick, but you bin chokin on mine/
Release ya grip got the white round ya lips, an all u get is a dime/
This is prime time but this ain't for the tv/
Fuck the media and paparazzi all I need is me/
I ain't no hanyman and I don't need any tools/
But i know that I'm more blessed compared to you with regards jewels/
I'd go to throw a punch and maybe try to connect/
But you can't hit back with arms like a tyrannosaurus rex/
I'll break you like a twig and then bombard you with stones/
But you said words would never hurt but that ain't what it said on ur tombstone/
I'll try to refrain an leave you to collapse from the pain/
I could hit you again and just waste you from the game/
Leave you in shame, with you head so far down, it should be in a drain/
You believe that you're stout but in reality you pout/
I lay this shit out so you don't have to keep on believin/
I'm the master of this, and this game you should be leavin/

yo CounTREE Jay, go easy on im dog, thats mah bro and he try way to fuckin hard to impress. i was gonna vote but i seen the first post an mah bro don't want no crew to vote so i say goodluck to both ya'll
PEACE

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C'Mon people. Vote on this bitch man. We're waitin for your votes.

Yo, I said to spit original shit, and you comin' wit this shit that D-12 spit at Ja and Benzino?

I'd go to throw a punch and maybe try to connect/
But you can't hit back with arms like a tyrannosaurus rex/

Man, you can't fuck wit me in this rap game, and you just a str8 biter. I'm done wit you lil' boy, you just fuckin' suck man. Go fuckin' suck dick to support your crack habit, because you must be on some if you think you can come at me, and this rap game definately ain't gettin' you no money to help you out wit that habit. So stand down lil' bitch, and pursue some other shit, cause you weak.

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HA HA HA HA HAH HA
what the fuck. Just because I said arms like a tyrannosaurus rex I copied the whole fuckin verse. What the fuck else has short arms like yours man. I bet ur just a punk ass white boy hidin behind his key-board. I brought it and you can't handle the heat, so you make some lame ass excuses to hide behind for these people. Nigga u nothin but a fronter and I'll tell you that to ya face cos u ain't nothin to me bitch.

No one said you took the whole verse. I said you borrowed a line, which you did. And son, you got beaten. And you had a second verse to try too. But you still ain't touchin' this shit nigga. And read the Profile: I'm the best of both worlds. Half black, half-white, and still got more in my pants than your lil' limp dicked ass. And what nigga? Tell me to my face? DO SOMETIN' KEYBOARD THUG. You lip-syncin' ass rapper. Get your own fuckin' flows and stop tryin' to rip otha niggaz shit off. Peace bitch. :laugh: :flipoff:

I told ur Milli Vanilli ass. I said Tyrannosaurus rex hows that copyin a fuckin line bitch.
Fuck you. U ain't nothin to me but a bitch made, lame ass cunt. Who finds excuses outa shit to make him win battles. soon as u come up with some good enough combacks i'll start listenin to ya, but till then u just a bitch with a whole loada excuses. Fuck the niggas in ya sig. U probably fuckd them outa their mics too. U ain't shit man. I wouldn't even take a piss on u if u was on fire man. suck dick in hell.

Don't be madd cause you about to add another battle loss to your growing collection. And the sadd part is, you usin' professional rappers words against everyone, and STILL LOSIN', AND BADLY I MIGHT ADD. Put two and two together nigga. You ain't nice, not even a lil' bit.

hey man. Nothin add nothin makes nothin. An thats all u gona be. I don't need professional lines to help me win battles. How u gona win anyway when no one's votin ya dumb ass noob. I don't try to be nice to twats like u. I took this as a joke at first man, then people like u an butcha come along and fuck up the game for everyone. You wouldn't know tha other nigga cos u a noob. so leave the real rappin to the vets of this game. cos a noob is all u ever gon be.

No more talkin', ima just sit back and laugh. Let the votes speak, homeboy.
And whoeva wins can say i told ya so. How about that shit?

see. no more lil sly comebacs, so ur lips are sealed nigga. why u laughin at yaself, ya dick suckin ho. no one likes you, so why don't you just crawl back into the little hole you came out of and die man. no one will care. just one less punk on the welfare to take this nations tax money.

Uppin for votes. Any votes will be appreciated.

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Okay people. We Need some votes on this. Vote from my second verse not the first. Any votes for either of us will be repayd with an honest vote on ur battles.

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Jay have you realized sometimes people use the same words to rhyme with others as pro's do, i mean look at the section every week in xxl where "pro's" bite each others shit...anyway jay yours flowed a little bit better but you didn't come at him like he did you therefor... vote goes to guyver4mk

homeboy admitted to bitin' the whole song, and if you knew anything about hip-hop, you'd see he used the EXACT words. Run along newb

I never admitted to bitin the fuckin track you dick. I admitted to re-writin the shit for fun u ass lancer. Get your facts right. before you go runnin ya mouth bitch

Much love for the votes, Keep 'em commin peeps.

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VOTES PEOPLE!! WE WANT AND NEED THEM TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE!!

(remember to vote from my second verse)

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HA HA HA HA HA I used the EXACT words? ha. I just noticed what u wrote. Now I know you a liar. How the fuck did I copy the entire fuckin song man. Em's verse was about everlast and 2pac's was about biggie. You are more retarded than I thought. An if u were talkin about my t-rex line, the D12 one was...

A bitch made man, now how u gona connect/
With them short ass arms like a tyrannosaurus rex/

How in the name of fuck is that the EXACT of what I wrote. You a lame ass nigga with problems. Get ya eyes checkd before steppin to me again boy.