accomplishment versus Kuniva (about time)
 

aight yo 5-10 bars
no d.r. hate votes
no biting feeding or recycling
drop first verse due 15 min after check in i'll drop right after you
yo gettterrr dun

15 minutes, ok, i smell a prewrite but ok, plus its not like ur not writin the 15 minutes that im writen, i wonder why it says no feedin, cause ur already done, haha

p.s. check in

yeah ok i'm make this as personal as possible

yeah, but uve been waitin to battle me sence last night, dont tell me you couldnt have some up with a few personals in that time, o wait, its u, maybe u couldnt have

so regardless ur assuming i have pre written shit you pretty much detirmened you werent gonna battle me so i didnt write shit and i was playin ball since like 11 dis morn so i didnt have time to write shit

if their is a pointless beef on this site, u may see accomplishment
so im settlin it now, sit back and watch me stomp this bitch
he got pissed at me, cause i wrote FUCK CLASS SIC in bold
like poker, before you get ur ass kicked just fold
gettin mad at me, for makin fun of ur crew
but class has two s's, its like ur maken fun of em too
this guy really wanted to battle me, thats why he follows me around this site
goin in every forum im in, tryna convince me his shit is tight
it will be a true ACCOMPLISHMENT, if he can get enough dr votes,
to win a battle, but compared to his verse, theirs more rhyming lines in a barcode

shut up and spit ur pre-written shit

yo dawg that was quick i'ma key up somthin real quick gimme like ten minutes aight

YO Check IT

said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../

spit wit me, get ya dome-shook, yo losses got mo "numbers" than a fuckin "phone-book"
this wasnt realize by him cuz i'm takin his "limbs" like i'ma fuckin "bone-crook"

bitch retire,.Wannabe rapper, kuniva copy any emcee to aspire...
hawked a loogie on a dayton, bitch claimen he spitten through wires.../

A-1, get-out! Ya fake! Take Off! cuz ya crew seein mo "beef" then the fuckin "steak sauce"...
talk bout d.r.'s this kid got more alias's then "n. cage" in da movie "Face-off".../

yo bitch welcome to "ClAS" today ya learn how accomplishment whips fuckin ass.../
Im da "Sic"kest, if requirment was to fuckin loe, kuniva dawg you pass.../

Ill

accomplishments a FEMALE, pimp sellin is own pussy is his only street sales. u lyin like the tims beatin the kings its a tall tale. stillin s.c. hittion ma's pu. c. wish me well. haha bitch jus post your pre-writin shit already

your a fuckin joke quit wit yo freepostin bull shit and by da way NO CREW VOTES

umm... just so you know, by u sayin my loss colum has a phonebook, u dissed urself, because u have 7 more losses than me

kuniva: started hot, but then you fell off real bad, the "sight-tight" bar is waay too long and ruins the flow. did have a decent personal, good punches in the begining though. the close would have been good but again, no flow or rhyme ...

acc: good crew diss, only i seen that same play on words already today. your punches started hot and stayed hot, except the close was a bit weak and overused. even if i count the "a1" shit against you cuzz you mighta ripped it off someone else (not saying you did), i still think you win for the ill punches and better flow.

vote: acc

return the favor, honest votes on my battles.

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barcode

i hardly ever do a perfect rhyme, so i guess ur right, damn, i must suck, i never rhyme

Kuniva wins.... much better structure... came with some weak lines but a few nice concepts.... basically it was just a better ocntstructed verse

Acc.... work out your stretched lines kiddo... it ruins your verse, if you'd leanr how to word things and write them properly you may have some decent punches... right now you dont


Vote - Kuniva

Peep me vs Restricted
(it'll be open tomorrow as there is a couple bad votes)

its ok though we all know kuniva d.r.'s original r.b. members that vote can slide

wut? i am just commenting on how close this battle is, nice spit accomplishment, hope this beef is finally over...

Im Goin With Accom.Kuniva Started Off Ok But His Verse Got Weaker And Ended Weak.He Had Too Many Played Punches & Weak Disses.In A Beef Battle,Strong Personals Are Part Of The Key To Victory.Accom Came Strong With Some Tight Punches But Started To Slack Off In The Middle.He Ended Pretty Strong.

Vote-Accomplishment

Can Ya'll Return The Favor & Vote On This:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117642

^ try not to say the exact same thing other people say, it becomes obvious u didnt read the verse

ok it was an aight battle...expected more outa both of u actually.
BREAKDOWN
Opener - kuniva...his flowed more and i didnt really get accomp's...
Flow - kuniva...accomp ya flow was fucked up because of stretched lines..werk on that...
Punches - kuniva...he came harder than accomp...his punches hit harder...i didnt feel ne ya punches accomp cept for the face off one...
Multi's - neither had many multi's...
Closer - kuniva...barcode line was hot!!...
Vote - kuniva
accomp u came weak...need to elevate ya game...nice spit kuniva....u didnt do ur best but u did wat it took
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...201#post1225201

cmon man,class sic in bold, ass kicked just fold??? cmon man, good multi

Kuniva- You could of done better.. you had more personalz some aight punchz.. both ya'll had good structure..


Acc- I felt you had a better flow, straight punchz and metaz..an came harder... good creativity.. an everythin else


PUNCHZ- Acc
VOCAB- Neither
CREATIVITY- Acc
METAZ- Acc
PERSONALS- Kuniva
STRUCTURE- Both

vote= ACC

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

aight still uppin yo

A'ight...I enjoyed this battle...kuniva...you had a decent verse, you came wit some punches and a nice personal...flow was off though, which sorta ruined your personal...and you should try your hardest to use some other words that rhyme...

6/10

Best Line: this guy really wanted to battle me, thats why he follows me around this site
goin in every forum im in, tryna convince me his shit is tight

Worst line: it will be a true ACCOMPLISHMENT, if he can get enough dr votes,
to win a battle, but compared to his verse, theirs more rhyming lines in a barcode

Accomplishment...tite verse dawg...your structure mainly stayed consistent, and you had a punch in every bar...nice shit...all's you need to do is work on structure, to make sure flow stays intact...overall, you punches were hard...tite shit...the "ties to the street" shreet was fuckin' dope...

8/10

Best line: said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../

Worst line: yo bitch welcome to "ClAS" today ya learn how accomplishment whips fuckin ass.../
Im da "Sic"kest, if requirment was to fuckin loe, kuniva dawg you pass.../

Looks like both of your closers weren;t that great...but overall, I think Accomplishment gets this one with an overall better verse...tite shit thogh, no beef...

Vote- Accomplishment


Hit these up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

damn, this was a wicked good battle. Both of you goys had nice flos. I was feelin' both. You both also had nice punches. I also liked the punches by both. You guys were pretty even there. Your closers could use a little work, though. But overall, I think Acomp won this by a slight margin. Good job by both.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ya this battle goes to Kuniva much better structure and much better flow i just got one problem kuniva u put to much emphasis on multis. simplifie your rhymes hit hard and fast and keep them coming
accomplishment- u got crazy skillz ive seen some of your other battles u just didnt bring the game to Kuniva i know that u can rhyme better than that and also u gotta simplify your ryhmes as well use the K.I.S.S method its pretty childish but if u ryhme with that method in mind u will get the point across a lot better

i just feel multies make a verse flow better, and im good at them so why the hell not...

aight still uppin yo

Didn't really wanna vote on this, cause i don't want this nigga to think i'm hatin', but, here goes.

Multis- Acc
Vocab- Acc
Flow-Acc
Punches- even
Creativity- Kun

Accomplishment- You came wit it, I think you came wit some good shit. Overally, it wasn't very spectacular, but still a very solid performance.

Best shit:
said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../

I don't know why, that shit had me rollin' though, the sneakers on the telephone pole, it's just funny.

Kuniva- Just to let you know, even though you popped madd shit, If you had won, I woulda said so cause that's who I am, but you didn't. Like you said yourself, some of your shit was just a stretch to rhyme, but I think if they had a lil' better, you coulda taken this. Approximate rhyme is just a hard thing to pull in text. But you honestly wasn't that badd. Bigg Ups pimpin'.

Best Shit:

gettin mad at me, for makin fun of ur crew
but class has two s's, its like ur maken fun of em too

Just liked the play on the crew, it was hott.

RESPECT TO BOTH Y'ALL NIGGAZ, IT WAS AN AIGHT BATTLE.

V/Accomplishment

this sure is gettin slept on for bein two good, and known emcees on this site.

U to the P to the P to the I to the N

drop a fuckin link pussy's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

no h8 or nething, k, u got some wack shit....it was aight it structure and verse, but rhyming was elementary....accomplishment had better punchlines yo...i liked accomplishment's style too...it was a close battle, but yo, i think accom. took it.

Inadequate explanation. Removed
-strobe

i got whack rhyming?? nigga u must be frontin!

K dont worry bout it the vote aint gonna count anyways exp to short

i know i know, my temper when newbs vote, u shoulda made this 100 posts to poll

ok kuniva ur punches were nice good wordplay i liked the whole thing
good intro, there was a nice personal, on his name, but it looks like u prewrote this one
like dissing him before he even droped, that's a bit wack,
i liked ya flow alot, its always a good thing if its easy to read,
all and all 6/10

accom- i didnt like that one little bit, 1st it was too damn hard to read
+ do you expect voters to read twice, just to understand you
besides for your flow your punches were there, i found them
c i had to acctually look twice, i think your alot better, maybe your just trying
a new style...hopefully cuz i dont believe that it worked,
not tryna diss you, it was good but all and all 2/10

vote Kuniva

haha yeah i gotcha point k newbs haha

lol, 100 posts next time u battle anyone, aight?

yeah fasho i think thats halarious 2/10....oh well

wut does fasho mean??? R says it all the time, wut does it mean though??