Enygma Vs DisasterPeice420
 

Here's the rules.....

10-20 lines
No crew, hate, dr votes
Blind spit (no feedin)
drop whenever (reasonable amount of time)

Good Luck :evilgrin: ..........lol

Ohh.......... I upped the amount of posts to vote from 10 to 100. Just to get a few more experienced votes in here.

Ahh, Playa I Told You To SPit First' ... Just Do That Shit' I Wont Feed Off Your Shit' .. Basically I Think Thats Disrespect Right There, And I Have Never Feed Off AnyBody's Shit..

So Can You Spit First?? Is That Cool With You If Not ... Then Its Aight

Thats Cool No Worries

I'll spit first......... sorry bout that. I'm just used to settin the rules up like that. I'll spit first.

Alright Cool' ..! :)

What a Disaster...............lol

My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked//
I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic//
I Shatter And Bruse, called out Disaster cause I was sick of Battlin Newbs//
I Had Her Confused, she must have thought I was just sick of Battlin Dudes//
I Burn Em Out, she's from ATL where they produce shit like Word Of Mouf//
So Would You Please take some Summer's Eve and clean out that Dirty South//
I Maul And Stompin Her, she'll need the police, go Call An Officer//
Aw fuck...... Someone beat me to it, I came to beat the Balls Off Of Her//
Avi says Still Matic, but ya Skills Battered, Rappin? you should Stop Or Pause//
Looks good on the pic, but said herself, In person she recieves Lots Of NAs//
I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me//
Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace//

Just a quick 12 lines........... you can come wit more or less, doesn't really matter.

Alright Playa Checcckin In' ..

& Droppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im Going To Go E'z On Ya :)

Trying To Battle With That Weak A$$ Raps You "Bring-Through",/
The Only Ice In Your Life Is Cracking "Beneathe-You",/
Nobody Believes You, Cause You Admit I Got 'Game',/
Save Your Live, Back Off The Mic An Just Hang Your Head in 'Shame',/
No One To Blame Except Your Self For 'This-Shit',/
Picked A Fight With Tom Green And Got 'That-A$$-Whipped',/ (lol)
I'm The Verbal Alpha-Rappa Dominating This Bitch,/
Pt The Rock Down For A Minute And See,/
My Flows Burn You Worse Than Your 'Venerial-Disease',/
You Damn Right I'm Sick, But You Just 'Got-Fucked',/
My Disease Is In My Head, And Your's In 'Your-Butt',/
I Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/
The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/
You Can't Defeat This, Better Call A 'Mountie-You-Bitch',/
This Real Americana Mofioso Pimp 'Slappin-You-Trick',/ (LoL)
Damn It Seem Like You "Burnt-YourSelf-Again",/
I Got More Green In My Name, Than Your "Life-Ever-Did",/

Just Some Shit' .... Wasnt Puttin Much Effort Into It' ... lol

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this battle was close as fuck..i enjoyed both ya punches and personals but im going with disaster piece on this one..i felt it flowed better and i like the style...

Creativity:enygma..

structure N flow:DP

punches:DP

Vote:DP

Tight battle ya'll.....keep droppin....

dawg i dont got enuff posts......aight battle tho......................................

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420 - good spit didnt ryme at some spots but had some sweet flow and good punches.

Best Line - Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/
The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/

Worst Line - none

Eny - liked your shit it flowed well, close battle.. liked your punches and flow was alright.

Best Line - My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked//
I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic//

Worst Line - I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me//
Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace//


OVERALL - I gotta give this to 420 cuz her flow was better, punches were almost even, and 420's multi's were better. Work on your flow E and step up on the multi's.

Vote - 420

can you hit up this battle plz..http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118405 only need 2 more votes ofr the DQ.

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This battle was close but this is how it goes down

Enygma
structure 8/10
flow 7/10
punchlines 8/10
creativity 7/10
word usage 8/10
total - 38

D.P. (sorry, had to shorten it)
structure 8/10
flow 7/10
punchlines 7/10
creativity 8/10
word usage 7/10
total - 37

Very, very close battle. BP would have had this one but she 'fell off' her creativity from the middle towards the end. Nice try though babygurl. Good and consistent flow, enygma.

v - E

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ENYGMA- opener was great. im ill enough to make her class sick. nice punches throughout your whole verse. structure was okay but it had a good flow to it.
you had personals that was good thing. so it was hard to tell if this was prewritten
your biggest problem is wordplay and multies.

DISASTER PIECE- ppener passed for satisfactory. cuz it wasnt as personal. and there was a few mistakes on your typing which made it hard to understand at times. this tells me u rushed this. your structure i think was a lot better then enygmas and you had a few punches here and there. but u wasnt consistent throughout. I agree with what u said. you must of havent put much effort....cuz i seen better from u.

v/enygma

honest vote.
 

ENYGMA- opener was great. im ill enough to make her class sick. nice punches throughout your whole verse. structure was okay but it had a good flow to it.
you had personals that was good thing. so it was hard to tell if this was prewritten
your biggest problem is wordplay and multies.

DISASTER PIECE- ppener passed for satisfactory. cuz it wasnt as personal. and there was a few mistakes on your typing which made it hard to understand at times. this tells me u rushed this. your structure i think was a lot better then enygmas and you had a few punches here and there. but u wasnt consistent throughout. I agree with what u said. you must of havent put much effort....cuz i seen better from u.

v/enygma

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My Vote
 

ok heres the whole thing....

My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked//
I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic//
Okay nice multi's in it...u had a nice personal...and it was a decent punch 7/10
I Shatter And Bruse, called out Disaster cause I was sick of Battlin Newbs//
I Had Her Confused, she must have thought I was just sick of Battlin Dudes//
Okay another bar with nice multi's...punch was aihgt, it didnt hit too hard 6/10
I Burn Em Out, she's from ATL where they produce shit like Word Of Mouf//
So Would You Please take some Summer's Eve and clean out that Dirty South//
Nice punch, personal, and multi's 9/10
I Maul And Stompin Her, she'll need the police, go Call An Officer//
Aw fuck...... Someone beat me to it, I came to beat the Balls Off Of Her//
Ehh i didnt feel the punch, "balls off her"? i dont get it but u had nice multis again 4/10
Avi says Still Matic, but ya Skills Battered, Rappin? you should Stop Or Pause//
Looks good on the pic, but said herself, In person she recieves Lots Of NAs//
Nice personal, multis, and a hard hitting punch 10/10
I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me//
Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace//
An ok closer not to hard hitting...decent 7/10

OVERALL YOU GOT A....
43/60

Trying To Battle With That Weak A$$ Raps You "Bring-Through",/
The Only Ice In Your Life Is Cracking "Beneathe-You",/
Nice punch, some ok multis, pretty decent opener.... 6/10
Nobody Believes You, Cause You Admit I Got 'Game',/
Save Your Live, Back Off The Mic An Just Hang Your Head in 'Shame',/
Nice multis in there, hard hitting punch...was def feeling this bar 9/10No One To Blame Except Your Self For 'This-Shit',/
Picked A Fight With Tom Green And Got 'That-A$$-Whipped',/ (lol)
I'm The Verbal Alpha-Rappa Dominating This Bitch,/
Nice punch with the tom green line i def liked that, ok multis in it...didnt help ya flow with the 3 lines that rhymed...fucked up there 6/10
Pt The Rock Down For A Minute And See,/
My Flows Burn You Worse Than Your 'Venerial-Disease',/
This line was an ok punch, no multis....5/10
You Damn Right I'm Sick, But You Just 'Got-Fucked',/
My Disease Is In My Head, And Your's In 'Your-Butt',/
Not really a hard hitting punch...ur verse is starting to fall off 4/10
I Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/
The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/
lol nice punch this helped your sustainment...10/10
You Can't Defeat This, Better Call A 'Mountie-You-Bitch',/
This Real Americana Mofioso Pimp 'Slappin-You-Trick',/ (LoL)
Nice hard hitting punch...8/10\
Damn It Seem Like You "Burnt-YourSelf-Again",/
I Got More Green In My Name, Than Your "Life-Ever-Did",/
Ok closer...u needed a hotter one to take the battle....5/10

OVERALL YOU VERSE TALLEYS UP AS...
53/80

My vote goes to enygma for a harder verse....disaster u didnt come as hard as u usually do n thats why you didnt get the win....nice battle tho...
no hate just a vote, nice spits yall :thumbup:

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DisasterPeice420:
i was feeling ur lines more
structure and flow was strong
vocab and personals were really good
punchlines i thought they were really strong thats which got u the win
9/10

L.I.:
structure and flow was pretty good
vocab and personals were ok not that strong
punchlines wern't that great
8/10

My Vote: DisasterPeice420

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It's Cool But I Didn't Go Up Against L.I. I Went Up Against Enygma' ...!! Playa' ...

lol Dapz Though.. Thanks For The Vote And Uppppppppppin This Shit

^^^WHAT IM NOT IN THIS BATTLE DOGG^^^
funny shit right there

fuck it, i just did a bar by bar analysis of the battle and my computer ate it.. fuck that, basically DP gets the vote from a slight edge in punches and for better flow, enygma got the originality vote, tight battle both of you..

vote on shadows edve vs limited edition...

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I'm guessin that it's 3-3 wit me and you and 1-0 wit you and L.I..........lol.

Disaster-I don't know, but I think you might've took it soft this battle compared to your battle against Siz, but this, I dunno, maybe Eny was too proficient observed to you. I dunno.

Enygma-Like always, he came with the sufficient and consistent multies, combining with meritorious punches, which really took down Disaster's liability of victory.

Punches-Both, Enygma came with hard-hitting punches, and not to mention humourous, while Disaster came with intellectual and conscious punches. Both takes this catergory.
Multies-Enygma, came with BOUNTIFUL multies, so did Dis, but I spotted more and BETTER multies intiated by Enygma.
Vocabulary-Enygma's punches were good, but the words weren't as phrenic as Disaster great use of words and intelligent punches combined, Disaster takes this catergory for her nice use of words.
Metaphors-Both, both emcees had metaphors spotted in their verses, almost about the same amount, so both take this catergory.
Flow/Structure-Again, this catergory was evened out, as both emcees gave their best, with a whole lot of structure and flow in both verses, both emcees get this catergory.
Humor/Creativity-Both had humor and creativity, but Enygma edges this catergory out by a cm., he had nice lines with abundance humor and creativity, keeping me reading.

Vote-This battle was actually very evened out by BOTH emcees, both gave alot of nice verses, but ENYGMA takes this by a mm, he had the punches that were just murdering Dis, sorry Dis, but you also had a nice verse, but Enygma takes the Win in "My Honest Opinion".

Oh shit, my bad Didn't notice this was elevated frontlines or something, cause I got lead here by a link.....sorry for clogging, please delete my interrupting post.

No Need To Apologize... I Happen To Like Honest Votes' .. And If I Did Not Win This Battle...!! No Hard Feelings' ...!!! Or Worries' ..!! :)

Yeah, If she didn't win this battle, No hard feelins, No worries........lol

Lol You Made The Shit Out To Be You Had To Have (100 Posts) To Vote On This Battle So' ... I Guess You Don't Get That Vote' .. Or Some Shit Like That