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Status 04-15-04 12:52 PM

kingz vs. creativitie
 
look kid this is a crew battle........

no hate
no d/r
no bitin
no crew
25 min blind spit.
most of all no prewritten

may the best man win
CLASS SIC (creativitie) vs. U.E (kingz)

Status 04-15-04 12:53 PM

once you check in you spit first...you got 25 min...check in

Kingz 04-15-04 12:59 PM

ok dog. i didnt even kno i was battling you. its ok tho
i gotta go offline to go shopping but i will post within 45mins ok?
u got to decide the rest of the rules
i'll post a message wen im dun, then we both drop verses at same time

Kingz 04-15-04 01:40 PM

son r u finished yet......................................?

Status 04-15-04 01:51 PM

aye yo...im at school.....but i said you spit first...i no your finished wit your prewrittin shit so just drop it...........this aint my checkin.....and i wont feed off your verses

Kingz 04-15-04 01:55 PM

drop as soon as u see this
i aint got much to dog

Status 04-15-04 01:56 PM

is this a blind spit.....i thought i told you to spit first. cuz im tired of the noshows....

Kingz 04-15-04 01:57 PM

ok im's spit now. u spit str8 after..............................

Kingz 04-15-04 01:58 PM

‘king’ jokes are played…not effective….you’ll never take my ‘crown’
can’t believe ‘classic’ sent a vet…that can’t even spell his hometown
(lol @ sacrawmento)

Im gonna take over ‘Sacramento’….cos it’s the home of the ‘kings’
Keep ya hood as my memento….cos you aint got any nba ‘rings’

I remember you son…aint you the one that deranged-the-game?
Oh yeh! Aint you dj em sce?…but you’ve jus changed-ya-name

Stop with all the lies….changing you name don’t change you…as it implies
Cos everyone knows this guy’s…. a pussy wanna be MC in disguise

all your votes will be haters…so we should call you ‘hate-tivitie’
but from what I’ve seen before…you wont have much voting activity

Dog there was no need to change ya name…cos like you it was shitty
That was the worse name change…since Puff Daddy to P Diddy

Creativity, I will wipe out you dog, and your whole crew Classic
HA when im done you will all be extincted….we can rename you ‘Jurrasic’

On ya sig….’candlestick’?…but you aint ‘creative’ enough to light one
step to an Undestructable Emcee?…u aint creative enough to lyrically fight one

son you cant compete…with the ‘eight elite’…even if you cheat
your rhymes are ‘corny’…like you sed your ‘tuffa than African feet’
(check his title)

Kingz 04-15-04 01:59 PM

blind spit. so spit dog....................................

Status 04-15-04 01:59 PM

aight if i can....cuz like i said im at school...i no for a fact i can spit in about 50 mins...cuz next period the teacher is hella dumb........but i will try to.......plus got some crew shit to handle...brb

Status 04-15-04 02:00 PM

oh shit........already had shit written....aight let me see wat i got in the head pieces...remember i got 25 mins........

Kingz 04-15-04 02:02 PM

dog u sed blind spit!! why are u goin back to write ya shit? i posted cos sed u wud spit str8 after!!!! u scared of losing yeh?

its only a battle, jus spit. it aint life or death.

no wonder u got such a good record

Status 04-15-04 02:03 PM

coo spit,.....i give you much respect......but sacRAWmento..meaning that sacramento is raw....coo spit....

Status 04-15-04 02:04 PM

check in................................................

Status 04-15-04 02:15 PM

if you reached your apex you still couldnt exceed my versitility//
lyrical creativity to surpass the cosmos is my only responsibility//
its not an optional decition to lacerate these edible opposites//
king set many opsticals so i cant levate as an incredible apocalipse//
im fuly equipt to make you suffer wit elepisy when i make advancements//
this synthetic mc wil neva elevate,so thers no need 4 my enhancements//
look king could neva excell wit an adolecent style so basic//
wile he proceed 2 a certain extent,i defy da laws of science wit my fisical matrix//
this kid should have known im restricted to looses in this textin section//
when i get in this textual territory i leave m.cs shell shocked in deception//

sorry got o go...i just got in trouble..i will get on next period

franchiZe 04-15-04 02:22 PM

This was a sick battle wiv Kingz spittin out some of the funniest shit i've heard.
creativitie u had a few good lines in there
if you reached your apex you still couldnt exceed my versitility//
lyrical creativity to surpass the cosmos is my only responsibility//
its not an optional decition to lacerate these edible opposites//
king set many opsticals so i cant levate as an incredible apocalipse//

Kingz, ure rip was non stop sick from start 2 finish
u started wiv a solid punch, threw some good ones in between and finished with tha knockout blow.

Vote=Kingz

Vote on my shit so i can free up a spot and battle some ova bitches
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

Kingz 04-15-04 02:50 PM

uppin............................................. .

Status 04-15-04 03:03 PM

aye yo kid.....i wasnt finished..i just got caught up by the teacher,,......i still had to perfect my shit..and fix structure...and make my punches hardeer.........and i wall also gonnin to make a few lines longer but i can tnow...owell.....
....................................uppin for some votes.......................................

EyeDEA 04-15-04 03:12 PM

Nice battle but creativitie knida got a little stuck and he played off your name change and siggy and stuff kinda koo but no crew vote but nice shit

JPoll 04-15-04 04:08 PM

yo good battle...you both came with really different styles...i liked them both...but do think king came with better...more punches personals and such so here's the break down

kingz
bestline
Im gonna take over ‘Sacramento’….cos it’s the home of the ‘kings’
Keep ya hood as my memento….cos you aint got any nba ‘rings'
worst...all the liines were above par

flow...9/10
punches...10/10
personal....9/10
humor....8/10
extras...7/10

overall....43

Creativitie
bestline
im fuly equipt to make you suffer wit elepisy when i make advancements//
this synthetic mc wil neva elevate,so thers no need 4 my enhancements

worst line
ook king could neva excell wit an adolecent style so basic//
wile he proceed 2 a certain extent,i defy da laws of science wit my fisical matrix//
i'm not big fan of this right here...wording...the meaning was aight
flow...7/10
punches...7/10
personal...6/10
humor....4/10
extras....10/10 vocab
overall...34/50

v- kingz

Status 04-15-04 04:10 PM

look this kid is dick ridin,..rite afta king voted for jpoll and his battle jpoll voted for him...thats strictly d/r........

JPoll 04-15-04 04:11 PM

actually i was writting the whole time and i didn't know who he voted for....you came sick too though....i wish your teacher wouldn't have caught you cause it would have been tight...

Kingz 04-15-04 04:12 PM

no it not because jpoll verse was better. i only drop honest votes. i think i deserve to win this one too.

JPoll 04-15-04 04:20 PM

hey both you guys voted for me against strreetsweepa and only one of you voted...could the other person please vote...thanks...respect to both mc's

Status 04-15-04 04:20 PM

see jpoll knows its adick ride vote thats why he tryn to give me compliments and shit....fuckin d/r i hate that shit

Kingz 04-15-04 04:23 PM

creativitie wot u mean d/r? u vote for him too! he clearly had the better verse
wot u buggin for?

Status 04-15-04 04:27 PM

nah i think if i would have voted first for him i would have this vote ......fuc it.. i aint trippen.....may the best man win......

Gunit101 04-15-04 05:38 PM

creativity was ok but Kingz got the name he had sturcture, rhyme, ending, and punches thats it he wins my vote

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Shadows edge 04-15-04 05:49 PM

^^ this dude is a mad herb voter. that shit doesn't even start to count. uppin people... serious fucking votes, this was a good battle.

Kingz 04-15-04 06:11 PM

uppin............................................. .

Kingz 04-16-04 03:10 AM

uppin.............................................

Status 04-16-04 11:14 AM

...............................................upp pin............................................... ..............

puertoricanelly 04-16-04 01:33 PM

ima give this shit ta Kings..... Kingz had NON stop flow and punches. yur stuff was hott yo keep on spittin i wanna see whatchu got instored for uppin opponents.

Creativitie yo shit was koo and you had a couple good lines but there was Too many complex wordplay and it sounds to poetic. its koo when you use a couple here and there but yur whole spit was based on complex wordplay so i would just try and minize the big words and focus more on structure and Punches.

My vote goes to KINGZ for those killer Punches & Flow

Status 04-16-04 01:54 PM

my vocab is to great for these infantile m.cs..........i guess you want some funcin immature punches.

puertoricanelly 04-16-04 02:01 PM

Funcin??????? Man u need ta relax. i would like to see you win a battle face 2 face with that wordplay cuzz. its all fake and if i saw you and you were battlin someone in front of eachother i would laugh atchur College bound rappin ass

Status 04-16-04 02:03 PM

calm down kid..........i murdered you wit it..didnt i.....

Enygma 04-16-04 02:35 PM

I gotta go wit Kingz on this one. Both verses weren't as good as I've seen from these cats. Kingz had some nice wordplay and clever punches but it didn't really flow right. Creativitie can definately do better than what I saw from him. The shit was hard to follow and obviously wasn't finished. But the fact still remains that it was his submitted verse so I gotta say it was wack...........

Vote - Kingz

Kingz 04-17-04 07:12 AM

uppinn............................................ ..

Kingz 04-17-04 05:33 PM

uppin............................................. ...


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