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SPuL™ 04-22-04 05:54 PM

SPuL v.s $$upreme
 
Aiight, here are the rules:
10-20 lines
No D/r, B/s or hate votes
You spit first.
I'll spit 30 mins after I see yours.

$$UPREME 04-22-04 06:59 PM

U Can't Just Set Up A Battle Without Letting Me Know......
Fuck That....
You Got That Shit Pre-written

$$UPREME 04-22-04 10:54 PM

Fuck It I Aint No Pussy'
Lets Go....
Check In...

$$UPREME 04-22-04 11:15 PM

Bitch I Got This Battle In The Bag With An Air-less-seal Cuz No Ones Feeding Off Spul Like A Careless-meal*
I'll Knock You $senseless$ Like Bad Tariff-deals, Cuz You Couldn't Spin The Web With A Modem Box In A Farris-wheel*

Spul You Know I'm About To Expose Your Flesh, Hoe*
Cuz Your Flow Wouldn't Be Ill If You Drank Water In Mexico*

Your Text-is-slow, I'm Bringin That Perpetual-flow, Expect A Easy K.o*
Cuz U Couldn't Cum Sick Having Sex-with-hoes*

Spul's In A Gridlock, I'll Make This Bitch-walk While I Watch Him Shit-rocks*
I'll Be Quick To Secure This Script Like A Zip-lock

You Lack Smart-scripts, Once You Read My Shit You'll Have To Restart It*
You Aint Holding "beat" So I'll Be Kind And Remove Your Heart Kid*

This Kids Been On The "toilet" 4 Hours Trying To Start-shit*
You Wouldn't Be Wreaking A Heat With Farts Lits*

SPuL™ 04-23-04 01:10 AM

aiight, I'll post my verse in 15-20 mins. PEACE

SPuL™ 04-23-04 01:37 AM

Aiight, here I go:

What the fuck you tryin’ to establish… by callin’ me Michael Jackson?
You “Beat It” wit little kids… that’s the only way you contract action

You boast a gun in yo sig… and you think that makes you a G?
Man, Supreme size fries are more gangsta, than you’ll ever be

You gotta be more specific… cuz it won’t get you very far
Cuz you will see yourself dissed about it, in the very next barIn yo location,

you jus say California… man, you’re pretty wack
You go to Burger King and jus ask for a burger… man, lay off the crack

I’ll have yo ass aggravated… and I’ll leave you wit a L-oss
Cuz my rhymes make classes sic, they make ‘em green like tree moss

Your rhymes are so annoyin’… jus like Daffy Duck
The only thing Supreme about them, is the way they fuckin’ suck

You put the money sign in your handle… cuz you don’t have any
You’ll have a nickel after this battle… cuz each vote for me gives you a penny

I’ll be servin’ more aces to you… than Andy Roddick does to Mandy
You’re correct that your career is full a bars, you jus forgot to say they’re candy

Aiight. I never PRe-write my shit, and I also told you about the battle. You challenged me in my battle thread lol. Not my fault if you didn't check back. Uppin' for votes.

Willa 04-23-04 03:11 AM

vote spul he simply had better punches
ss work on ur vacb structure floow and personals nice multis
spul work on personals and vocab pretty good battle

LyricalMethod 04-23-04 08:09 AM

as soonas yall both spit i'll drop a verdict. meanwhile vote on my thread:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114038

Enygma 04-23-04 08:18 AM

Alright, here we go. $$upreme started off pretty hard wit some good punches, then fell off wit some shit that made no sense. It seemed like all you were worried about was the multis and forgot the punches. Plus you came wit some old played out shit. Spul came OK but he had some pretty original punches. Originality will always beat played out punches.........

Vote - Spul

Enygma 04-23-04 08:20 AM

Ohh yeah, Thanks for the blacklist............................$$upreme.

$$UPREME 04-23-04 12:04 PM

^^^^you Must Got A Whole Bunch Of D/r..
That Shit Was Looking Stupid Compared To Mine....

franchiZe 04-23-04 12:23 PM

yo dis battle was aight not the best i've seen from u two
ure flow and structure were good spul and u used gud vocabs comin with some original punches. ure punches though were not that hard and they didn't have as good a connection as they shud.
$$upreme ure flow and structure were good and u put up a good spit as always. u lacked a little on originality but unlike others understood ure entire spit and ure punches were good and u had better connection than Spul.
Both of u had spots that were better than the others but my vote goes to $$upreme basically cuz i felt his spit better and he had harder punches.
Vote - $$upreme

Immense 04-23-04 12:58 PM

not a bad battle,supreme had nice punches and nice flow,spul had some nice punches but i thought u cud av come better spittin second.decent battle though

my vote:supreme

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Immense 04-23-04 01:04 PM

k,in case they try an cancel here how it goes

FLOW- SUPREME
PUNCHLINES-SUPREME
VOCAB-SUPREME

nice battle guys

iamthatdude87 04-23-04 01:05 PM

yo this battle was ok both u had decent punchlines and had decent multies..flow was good for both of u but imma have to give this to spul i voted on this return the favor drop an honest vote on ecko vs shady the links down there\/

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SPuL™ 04-23-04 05:36 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by $$UPREME
^^^^you Must Got A Whole Bunch Of D/r..
That Shit Was Looking Stupid Compared To Mine....

yo, I thought the same about urs too. So shut the fuck up and stop bitching.

$$UPREME 04-23-04 05:57 PM

yo this battle was ok both u had decent punchlines and had decent multies..flow was good for both of u but imma have to give this to spul i voted on this return the favor drop an honest vote on ecko vs shady the links down there\/
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SPuL™ 04-23-04 06:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by THUGZY
not a bad battle,supreme had nice punches and nice flow,spul had some nice punches but i thought u cud av come better spittin second.decent battle though

my vote:supreme

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PoLiFicK 04-23-04 06:16 PM

damnn good battle

supreme came strong 2 start off and had sum descent punches and nice structure 2 keep him alive and some ite vocab nice drop on yo flow homie

spul wat can i say homie u came at him like it was yo last time at a battle kid u was hungry as hell 4 it u had a crazy ass start i was feelin dat wit some tite punches and hott vocab and good structure.....nice drop

spul-

yo flow was da best but u kno wat got me????yo start

bestline-
What the fuck you tryin’ to establish… by callin’ me Michael Jackson?
You “Beat It” wit little kids… that’s the only way you contract action

^^ omg dat was sick wit it

worsteline- again nun here 4 da man spul yo personals was off da hook

supreme-i seen better verses from u but check it

bestline-Bitch I Got This Battle In The Bag With An Air-less-seal Cuz No Ones Feeding Off Spul Like A Careless-meal*

yo start also caught my attention

worsteline-This Kids Been On The "toilet" 4 Hours Trying To Start-shit*
You Wouldn't Be Wreaking A Heat With Farts Lits*

^^^^ no no no

overall in ite battle

heres da tallies

supreme-
start-9/10
punches-8/10
flow-9/10
personals-9/10
vocab-8/10
structure-9/10
closing-6/10
overall-8.8/10

spul

start-9/10
punches-8/10
flow-9/10
personals-9/10
vocab-9/10
structure-9/10
closing-9/10
overall-9.7/10

his start was hott and end
supreme u wouldve had a better chance wit both

winner-spul

Triple_N 04-23-04 06:37 PM

Good Battle....supreme you had a few punches but half of them mad no sense as usual, no wordplay or vocab, a few multies that were forced, the punches you did have were good about 5 years ago really played, need to elevate.
Spul...wasn't a great verse but at least the few punches you had mad sense, the weren't that hard but they did connect, an had originality, vocab was decent, no multies, but flow was good, your opener was best line of whole battle that why I give you vote. Its not a hate vote, just a honest one
Vote: Spul

$$UPREME 04-23-04 06:41 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^dick Rider
Triple N ........i Won Our Battle......
Look At It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
4-4 ....and Koopa Troopa.....vote 4 Me.......but He Clicked On Yours.....
Just Look At It

$$UPREME 04-23-04 06:44 PM

Koopa Troopa
Light Weight



From: 7o7 VallyJo
Status: Online



ooo i liked the vampire line callin that kid a biter ok here it go

preme: nice flow punches vocab and word play need to work on ya structure thow nice spit

Triple: nice flow word play and structure but i think ya punces need a lil good spit

V=Preme

Triple_N 04-23-04 06:47 PM

Supreme u are the biggest biitch alive, what kinda real thug blacklists people, I bet u got a order of protection out against all the catz beating ya ass daily, u lilltle pussy, punkass bitch, an it don't really matter cuz u losing this one too. You need to just leave this forum cuz you keep putting ya foot in ya mouth, Bitch!!!!!!

$$UPREME 04-23-04 06:50 PM

Read Our Fucking Battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bitch'..............
And C Who Fuckin' Won!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~$$upreme....<<<<<<<<<<<<<

$$UPREME 04-23-04 06:51 PM

Fucking Dick Rider~~~~~~~~~~
Damn Right....
I Got U On Black List Voter~~~~~~~your The Biggest "hater"---
On Here I Bet You Had Your Verse Pre-written.......
Mines Was A Freestyle...... Homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

{D.N.A.} 04-23-04 07:20 PM

The strucksha wasnt as good as it could have been but...i think that supreme came out and stayed the most consistent through-out the whole battle.
Also had a lil betta punches too.

vote supreme

$$UPREME 04-23-04 09:17 PM

ALL YOUR VOTES DON'T COUNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"No D/r, B/s or hate votes"-SPUL
^^^^^ YOU SAID (NO) DICK RIDER'S......

$$UPREME 04-23-04 10:25 PM

No Dick Rider~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~

SPuL™ 04-23-04 10:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by $$UPREME
ALL YOUR VOTES DON'T COUNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"No D/r, B/s or hate votes"-SPUL
^^^^^ YOU SAID (NO) DICK RIDER'S......

Yea, I kno that. And dude, chill the fuck out. Really. And fuck all that "Your verse is pre-written". Really, by sayin' that you're jus admitting you think my verse is good, and that I had to put time into it. Well I didn't. I didn't even plan on battling you. I put up a thread, and you replied. You called me Michael Jackson lol, and you said you wanted to battle. So shut the fuck up, and jus upp this shit for votes.

Vc 04-23-04 10:38 PM

i gotta give this battle to ssupreme yall both ahd nice abttles but it seemed like spulw as begininning to lose me with some of the stuff he was saying it rhyems everything DID rhyme but they didnt make sense tho..

but if i was to give it based on wordplaya nd precision id ahve to say a tie in all honesty.. but due to content and the flow and actually understand ing i give this one to ssupreme

YuNG TiLT 04-23-04 10:44 PM

my vote is for $$upreme. This was an koo battle, lots of tension, but i think $$upreme juss got it by an inch.

SPuL™ 04-23-04 10:53 PM

^D/r fasho!! Good thing the nigga can't vote.

$$UPREME 04-23-04 10:58 PM

Bitch....
My Verse Was A Freestyle Kid'~~~~~~~~~~~
I Merked U 4 Real!!!!!!!!!!
Lol,...
U Lucky 4 Dick Rider's 4 Real'..

SPuL™ 04-23-04 11:00 PM

yea, same here. Mine was a freestlye too. And I don't care if you think you won the battle. good for you.

E Looch 04-23-04 11:34 PM

man this shit got some tention just rematch and you know i dont dick ride so check it

opener- supreme nice shit and spul dont know where you got off on michael jackson i didnt see that shit no where it was a good opener but not even realated

closer-spull pretty nice punch and personal i was fealin it and supreme it was good wordplay but i wasnt fealin it

punchs and personals- im a say supreme they were pretty good and spul you had some good ones but they mostly played and some lol i dont know wha you was tryna do with them but yea they was ight

comes down to me fealin spuls verse more supreme you better then that you had like hlaf a tight verse an half a below supreme verse and spul stayed pretty consistant so thats what it came down to close battle just rematch it

vote spul


and no im not furiuos flows so dont cancel this vote

SPuL™ 04-23-04 11:42 PM

aiight, thanks to everyone who voted. 4-3 me, uppin' for votes. Also, votes. Also, the Michael Jackson line was because he called me Michael Jackson in a bitch-slapped thread.

Shadows edge 04-23-04 11:50 PM

Spul won, but I bet $$upreme has me as one of his 50 blacklist voters so I'm not even going to bother.

$$UPREME 04-23-04 11:58 PM

Blacklist Voters.......
Enygma...d/r
Triple N....d/r
Shadows Edge...d/r.......
^^^^^^ If Everybody Would Know How 2 Vote.....
There Would Be None!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shadows edge 04-24-04 12:09 AM

Drop a link to one dishonest vote I have ever made, and I will promise to stop fucking your mom.

E Looch 04-24-04 12:10 AM

lol damn some more entertainment


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