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shady1132(vs)..ILL.. -Rematch-
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Nigga,you know you are a bitch.Just cause I forgot to post the dot's,you started a new thread.NOw I gotta ask to get the other thread closed.
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no....If you dont spell my name wrong I wont get the win or the lose....Stop gettin mad becuz Im tryin to battle fairly....now check in...and spitt first
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Nigga,you call urself ILL............like you've never been near A dolllar bill/
Make ur mom wish she taken those abortion pills or gotten killed/ My raps are hot,cause I got the magic potion,while yours cold like artic ocean/ All my raps cause a huge commotion.....yours seem to go in slow motion/ You in text,cause u talk like a asthma attack,after one line you hit a fatigue crack/ So for you to talk...............you gotta give a giant warning of attack/ Because of all the bacterial plaque,which gives everyone a heart attack/ Battling me is like going to detention,except when you leave,you gon get pension/ Because you gonna become handicapped,while ur papa's cum's on ur lap/ Cause you see.........Being retarted is less embarrising as ur family tree/ Your whole raps aren't worth a Pakistani rupree,I'd win this by saying "A.B.C"/ |
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You cant even spell my name right..so lets stop and pause.. This bitch is wack and I get more hoe hoe hoes than santa clause Shady man uppins uppins for more of dicks..... But bitches rhymes is soft and packed together like Deoderant sticks All he talk about is how he goin to be in the future is so seen... Nigga you so stupid I can robb you blind and say im ur cousin Ugean.. Hes a homo goth nigga he gets more butts shined than the sun.... You faggot you want to be a girl so more breast inplants than pamela anderson Dont battle me again,be smart dont do drugs and dont be in dangers... Nigga you just lost so go home and dont talk to strangers.. |
ill damn shit was sick playa nice shit you droped and fora second battle shady you didnt wanna win this time very much if you won lasttime i dont know but you didnt come at yo opponent right you need to work on creativite punchs an personals work on makin peopel say damn and ill u had some nice shit i liked good drop
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thanks,,Very much ill hit up your battles later becuz Im gettin off.....I was sick right........Just another victim...Ill hit up yours aight.....
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Flow:shady
Personal:shady Punches:shady Structure:ill metas:ill Shady won this because of the flow and punches... ill just work better on ur punches and youll be set Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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heres my breakdown:
shady: Nigga,you call urself ILL............like you've never been near A dolllar bill/ Make ur mom wish she taken those abortion pills or gotten killed/ ^^first line made no sense but second line was nice ok opener 6/10 My raps are hot,cause I got the magic potion,while yours cold like artic ocean/ All my raps cause a huge commotion.....yours seem to go in slow motion/ ^^nice wordplay and multies some filler 6/10 You in text,cause u talk like a asthma attack,after one line you hit a fatigue crack/ So for you to talk...............you gotta give a giant warning of attack/ Because of all the bacterial plaque,which gives everyone a heart attack/ ^^worst bar u used attack 3 times ok wordplay but bad bar 3/10 Battling me is like going to detention,except when you leave,you gon get pension/ Because you gonna become handicapped,while ur papa's cum's on ur lap/ ^^another dumb bar wasnt feelin this...u got skill but didnt show it 4/10 Cause you see.........Being retarted is less embarrising as ur family tree/ Your whole raps aren't worth a Pakistani rupree,I'd win this by saying "A.B.C"/ ^^ ok closer good wordplay once again 6/10 overall: 25/50 ill: You cant even spell my name right..so lets stop and pause.. This bitch is wack and I get more hoe hoe hoes than santa clause ^^il opener had a punch and a personal in there nice 7/10 Shady man uppins uppins for more of dicks..... But bitches rhymes is soft and packed together like Deoderant sticks ^^lol another nice punch feelin it 6/10 All he talk about is how he goin to be in the future is so seen... Nigga you so stupid I can robb you blind and say im ur cousin Ugean.. ^^good first line second line was wack 4/10 Hes a homo goth nigga he gets more butts shined than the sun.... You faggot you want to be a girl so more breast inplants than pamela anderson ^^ok punch nothing too good 5/10 Dont battle me again,be smart dont do drugs and dont be in dangers... Nigga you just lost so go home and dont talk to strangers.. ^^ lol a good closer nice bar 6/10 overall: 28/50 vote: ill.....good shyt from both but ill took this one with harder punches..shady had better wordplay and multies but ill had a better verse overall ~!1!~ |
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uppin this yo.....no sleepin in it.................
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hmm,dis was a sick battle.shady,some really good shit but some really elemantary stuff too in your verse with stuff like:Nigga,you call urself ILL............like you've never been near A dolllar bill/i found that one quite dumb.but a solid battle nonetheless.
for ill i saw a worse battle than shady for dumb lines such as All he talk about is how he goin to be in the future is so seen... Nigga you so stupid I can robb you blind and say im ur cousin Ugean.. that is quite dumb.but you had some good lines like You cant even spell my name right..so lets stop and pause.. This bitch is wack and I get more hoe hoe hoes than santa clause but i still think you lost cause shady was more solid. |
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opener/ill closer/shady verse/tie puchlines ill shady arent all oceans cold at least ill hoehoehoe was a good opener overall/ill |
yo this nigga shady is wack he just talk bout future.He needs to worry bout how his wack ass is now
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my vote
both were alright,shady gets a few marks for rapping something slightly different but its got to go to ill simply because the punches were funny,especially the cousin line.good shit from both though
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Damn!!!!!!!!!!!how long has this thread been around.I don't care who you guys vote for,just get this shit closed.
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ill got this he had harder punches and verse and
overall had a well constructed verse.Shady u came tight u juss need to finsh urthoughts and loosen up on ur fillers. My vote:Ill |
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Come on,I want this thing closed.
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Come on,one more vote and this battle'll be closeed.This shit been here forever.
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uppin .Damn this thread been here for so loooooooooooooooong
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