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Me Vs Ladylyrical
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No D/r No Haters No C/r(idk If U In One But Who Gives A Fuck) U Spit First......fuckin Kid Swallower |
((LoLz))....YoU DumB And Dont Come At Me With Those Lil Female Jokes ((LoLz))...n i thought i told you to spit first...if you cant come off the top then you wack so spit...But If You Gonna Be a bitch lol holla at me and close this cuz i peeped one of your old battles n your not worth the tyme
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ayo lets be honest this aint no chick, this a fag in the closet/
im the god so theres no way in hell u a fuckin godess/ look that was juss one bar, she bout to collapse/ she aint wanna go yesterday, cuz she had to get out on that track/ already u want no more/ watch ya mouth cuz the same nigga u battlin is the nigga u gettin that dough for/ she aint gotta cook crack, jus look at ya mirror refelction/ you aint gotta buy wonders, she can make bread wit her nasty ass yeast infection/ i dont need a multi or a fuckin vocabulary/ ill kill this bitch, wit the fuckin disses in my adversary/ why battle nobodys ever heard of ya/ shes the gulliest on this site, she swallows, shes a kid murderer/ you prolly fucked all the dudes on rb fir those lines u took/ and for the one in ya sig, you ate out the best bitch in ya hood/ i jus came off the top, no prewritten practice/ she got hit up more times than 50 cent...cum shots that is/ |
Aiight just peeped your verse will drop later tonight or tommorow 1nEZ iight verse stay up
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im known to distort ya optics and verbally torture...
this kids a nobody thats why he HAS NO SIGNATURE// this pussy~get ~penetrated more then the victims of the nicca in his aviator...(micheal Jackson) beyond Reasonable Doubt this niccaz lines is more played out then the BluePrint....(he said he would be jayz if any rapper in one other thread) de~sounding your vocal cords wit ya own hands to leave no fingerPrints// reclinin ya spine back to pop ya spinal cord so you could really say you bent over backwards to win.... rippin this niccaz words but the only time he come hard is when he staring at men// this nicca must be retarded cuz his words have no lyrical meaning... diction lost when he registered cuz i thought his verse made sence til i read the beginning//(he cant spell) meeting ya death and takin an "L" is the only time he could say he fallin to heat... this nicca PMin me is the only time he'll have a female privately// aiight something quick sorry had others things to do stay up people vote!!! |
Eventhough she beat me in a battle, i must say my vote goes to her. She comes out swingin wit a beast like style that i was feelin more than asswhoopin...
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iight thats coo dalyricalvillian 1-0 Lady stay up people and vote
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uppin
and im gonna let that vote by villian slide.....until i start losin...then im reportin it SO FUCKIN HOOD!!! |
LoLz Whats Wrong With His Vote?.......Cuz Me And Him Battled and He Lost......
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gotaasswhoopin4U gets my vote b/c his verse was more lyrically sound. ladylyrical your verse was all over the place. you need to put more thought into your verses. stop stretchin your lines for punches.gotaasswhoopin4U step up your lyrics yo, nice personals and decent punches. return the fava
vote=gotaasswhoopin4U |
Im Votin Ladylyrical For This Shizzle, She Had Better Punchlines. Asswhoopin Keep Doin Your Thing Cuz, Just Keep Working On Harder Punches. I Liked 'this pussy~get ~penetrated more then the victims of the nicca in his aviator...(micheal Jackson)' From Ladylyrical Alot, Nothing Special, But Just Had Me Crackin Up.
Vote=LadyLyrical |
LadyLyrical had more punches, although they were all over the place and messed up her flow, they were still good so I'm voting for her.
Now vote on this dog http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125881 |
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Breakdown
*she aint gotta cook crack, jus look at ya mirror refelction/
you aint gotta buy wonders, she can make bread wit her nasty ass yeast infection/ i dont need a multi or a fuckin vocabulary/ ill kill this bitch, wit the fuckin disses in my adversary/ why battle nobodys ever heard of ya/ shes the gulliest on this site, she swallows, shes a kid murderer/ ^^^best lines of gotasswhoopin’4you had me dying laughin’ and they all rhymed… Structure could have been fixed up a lil’ bit… Breakdown: lady lyrical *im known to distort ya optics and verbally torture... this kids a nobody thats why he HAS NO SIGNATURE// this pussy~get ~penetrated more then the victims of the nicca in his aviator...(micheal Jackson) ->NONE of those words rhymed they all end with ture/tor but don’t rhyme… The second line is feedin’ cuz u call him a nobody after he says “nobody’s ever heard of ya… It was stil funny so u get some props huh?... this nicca must be retarded cuz his words have no lyrical meaning... diction lost when he registered cuz i thought his verse made sence til i read the beginning//(he cant spell) meeting ya death and takin an "L" is the only time he could say he fallin to heat... this nicca PMin me is the only time he'll have a female privately ->I actually liked these lines BUT meaning and beginning don’t rhyme as well as heat and privately don’t… just because they end with similar letters don’t mean they rhyme… i jus came off the top, no prewritten practice/ she got hit up more times than 50 cent...cum shots that is/… the fact that it seems that he came off the top of his head make it more interestin’ and funny as hell… my vote: gotasswhoopin’4you |
uppin 4 votes.....................will return the favor....
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shes the gulliest on this site, she swallows, shes a kid murderer/
right there sums this shit um man nice job with the punches you merked her and i liked it the punches metas and word play were all there i like this piece alot lady you need to work more on you strucher it will convey your word play allitle better and make your punches hit harder v/ gataasswopin |
yo return the favor link is in the sig
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my vote goes to lady hot flow good punches everything was hott good battle
gotaasswhoopin yo shit was hot but her's was hotter v/lady Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
iight 4-3 Lady umm that person on the front still aint poll his vote so thats why its 4 and miss the first two lines ryhmed then the last one was another bar which i just put by itself if you needed me to seperate it then whateba and i aint feed cuz i aint even read his verse and it only made sence to call him a nobody if you look at his sig it was just a personal so ppl understand and then vote 1
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Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh.......u Bitter Ahahahahahahahahahaha
Im The Most Respected In A Hood Near U...come Get Me...sexy... |
Muh Fuckas Vote.............ill Return Favors..plz Vote
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->LadyLyrical, No matter how you try to explain it, it didn't "rhyme" ya shit was alright but the vote stays... get at me.
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Ma Just Plz Close ya mouth and dont post in my thread Cuz Thats Why Ppl dont vote cuz they look and see madd replies 4-3 uppin people 1nEz....and like i said i aint even read ya verse to this day...so how the fuck am i a bitter
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I Said U Were Bitter As In Mad...not A Biter...crimpet....uppppiiinnnn....will Return Favors
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both verses were aight but i would have to go wit Lady on this one
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gotaass had decent lines, flow was a lil off, the ending was weak, and you had some nice personals, but the flow was a lil off. You gotta come with the harder punches, I said the personals were nice, but they played so Im not gonna give an example....cause there isnt one good enough to show...sry i mite be a lil hard on you.
k not by much, but the girl took this for the following better flow and vocabulary....therefore, making the verse more complex. you didnt have that many punchlines but these two were nice and prolly won you the battle, but please avoid like the only time you hard is watching men cause that is played out.....thanx....good battle...peace no hate....hope both are satisfied with what I said reclinin ya spine back to pop ya spinal cord so you could really say you bent over this nicca PMin me is the only time he'll have a female privately// |
iight........................i had to get rid of those
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I Suck......shut Yo Gay Ass Up And Battle Me, Soft Ass Nigga...that Vote Is Gone...u Fuckin Idiot....dont Come In My Thread Dumbass
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okay this battle is and was already done wtf is it open again for and thanx for the vote
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i got 2 votes deleted...and that last one is gonna get deleted too
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ummm gotaasswhoopin4U u came weak on diz battle, i hav seen betta from u b4
Flow-gotaasswhoopin4U u flow was wack, u had some good ideas in their but u were missin like multies and bunch of other good stuff. Lady came the whole time nice flow their was a couple of places where u slipped up but it was fine Punches- gotaasswhoopin4U u had some weak punches, really need work here, Lady nice punches... Orlignality and Complexity-gotaasswhoopin4U ur still like a newb, u r betta then dat, elevate dawg, lady strong as ever Overall-Ladylyrical took diz battle wit ease, if gotaasswhoopin4U had brought it would've been a way better battle. Vote LadyLyrical |
iight im gonna have to say lady won this battle she just beat ass in all places in this battle...she just came wit better though into the battle i bet ass really did not know wat to do yet...so all im gonna say is think ya shit out before u write it down ya lines could have been nice if u would have thought them out more....
Vote-Lady |
Lady = 32/50
Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 7/10 Humor 7/10 Got = 31/50 Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 7/10 Humor 6/10 |
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aight im votin for gotaasswhoopin4U. the verse was better, flow was on lock, and the rhyme was off the chains so imma give this one to you brotha. i think punches where a tie in this battle. no hate lady, good battle girl. but this one goes to gotaasswhoopin4U, good job dawg.
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