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SevenThird vs. X - Destined 2 Rhyme Vs. Hypnotik Strategiez
10-20 Lines... No Crew/Hate/D/R-- My verse will be up tonight...
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um this is my check n and make it 10 lines..Sorry no 20 lines im busy and have smething to do..LOL and learn how to set rules..Noobs like you
10 lines no d.r no hate no crew no feedin no bitin no recyclin you spit first becuz im busy I would but I have a life |
Checkin in... Its funny how you wont spit first and you challenged, but whatever Im still gonna destroy you. My verse will be up in 20
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Becuz you was so of a noob nobody wanted to battle you so I felt sorry and battles you..Up comming murk just like king solo murked T Storm thats in ya crew..Well my record is better then yours and I will murk you..Straight up..Now mines will be down when yours is
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You Stay Third-Grade-Turd-Face- You as Dumb as Your Friends How you gonna elevate -Can't Even spell "above" or "ascend" The head of ya crew's Massively-fake- Just Like You Cuz ya rhymes as reality based- as Chucky-2 Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This -X-ing out this bitch Fast As New York Lottery Tickets Ya Flows Broke at Best- You couldn't Vomit-Fluid-Lines Afraid to Battle TonySelf- But Still Commited Suicide I am "SevenThirds the Greatness Ya crew will Ever Be" 2.3 Times or 200 plus percent-- thanks for mentioning Quote:
Yo I took a Couple Quotes directly from a post in The Destined 2 Rhyme Crew Forums where X tried to Diss the Crew... Its really funny if you like reading Kindergarten Jibberish, You should check it out.... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...61&page=4&pp=15 You Been Merked- Goodnight |
lol I forgot the quote where he complements TonySelf more than once.... lol just read the verse its really that funny.
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lol first of all...The Quotin ish is old so get rid of it..Only noobs type that
so its like that aight..Im about to murk this herbish bitch aight check it... This nigga is so played if he tried to be president he still wouldnt be on dolla bills Becuz its really easy to murk someone who still rides his bike with trainin wheels Murked this guy seventhird so much left him homeless so hes tryin to stay on a grime Quote:
Yo can tell hes like 6 years old, Look at the bottom of his spit, its his bed time The Quotin things is pretty old to the site why dont you wake up to ya reality SevenThird is on the site 24 7 and now I juss murked him and left him with no personality I will Switch ya name so instead of ya record being seventhird more like fivethree So hes being so horny he beats his meat to his avatar becuz he has no creativity he admits hes not ready for elevated Becuz ya record is 5-3, not betta then mines I shouldnt battle noobs like you becuz ya still askin how do I set it up in front lines SHould have got the 6th lines about his name..D2r has messed up now you have to take a murkin do to ya crew..Next time watch who ya battlin..so GoodNight that herb |
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why would u say the quote ish is old then follow up with it lmmfao ok goodluck!!!!!!!!!!!
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LMAO-- E-Z Knockout...... VOTE ON THIS SHIT PEOPLE
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lol ya it was ez..Becuz ya just got murked by me and you need nooby people to vote for you so thats why you setted it up in front lines and this beef is ova im through wit ya..next victim becuz for now on im just uppin my battle so you can talk ish if ya want..im juss going to keep uppin and getting votes
nuff said |
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good battle yall good battle. this one goes to X because her shit actualy rhymed as aposed to seven thirds. good battle tho, no hate.
VOTE= X Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin this for some real votes here people........
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here we go..
You Stay Third-Grade-Turd-Face- You as Dumb as Your Friends
How you gonna elevate -Can't Even spell "above" or "ascend" ~kina like it..creative The head of ya crew's Massively-fake- Just Like You Cuz ya rhymes as reality based- as Chucky-2 ~didn't really hit too hard..saw where u were goin tho.. Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This -X-ing out this bitch Fast As New York Lottery Tickets ~aight.. Ya Flows Broke at Best- You couldn't Vomit-Fluid-Lines Afraid to Battle TonySelf- But Still Commited Suicide ~came personal...nice I am "SevenThirds the Greatness Ya crew will Ever Be" 2.3 Times or 200 plus percent-- thanks for mentioning ~nuttin special This nigga is so played if he tried to be president he still wouldnt be on dolla bills Becuz its really easy to murk someone who still rides his bike with trainin wheels ~kina weak...& SSTTRREETTCHH... Murked this guy seventhird so much left him homeless so hes tryin to stay on a grime Yo can tell hes like 6 years old, Look at the bottom of his spit, its his bed time ~kina liked it but...ssttrreettcchh The Quotin things is pretty old to the site why dont you wake up to ya reality SevenThird is on the site 24 7 and now I juss murked him and left him with no personality ~terrible I will Switch ya name so instead of ya record being seventhird more like fivethree So hes being so horny he beats his meat to his avatar becuz he has no creativity ~again bad he admits hes not ready for elevated Becuz ya record is 5-3, not betta then mines I shouldnt battle noobs like you becuz ya still askin how do I set it up in front lines ~Blahh VOTE/ SevenThird..seven had an ok verse,,wasn't really the verse that won it but more like the other dudes was jus terrible...No rhyme scheme..no wordplay..Stredhed like crazy....elevate..1 |
i think Seven thirds won this, his wordplay and creativity was really good, some alright punches and good flow
best line: Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This -X-ing out this bitch Fast As New York Lottery Tickets X your spit was good, although i think it kinda lacked flow best line:he admits hes not ready for elevated Becuz ya record is 5-3, not betta then mines I shouldnt battle noobs like you becuz ya still askin how do I set it up in front lines Vote Overall: Seven Thirds |
iight 2-1 me... Uppin for votes.................................
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Uppin This for votes still.... Leave a link and I'll drop a vote in your battle.
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D/r'er they know I murked you and you know it.....Stop tryin to sway for votes..All I have to say.im still going to win watch
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I think X won cuz his closure really did finish the other dudes. so my vote is for X
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X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores Structure wasnt too stratched. I also liked his closure Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything needs work..keep elevatin v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please X-Came with everything including multies..and similies Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores Structure wasnt too stratched Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything needs work..keep elevatin v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please X-Came with everything including multies..and similies Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores Structure wasnt too stratched Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything needs work..keep elevatin v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I gotta be the dumbest. I meant to copy my link for my battle not my own shit lol. Yo return the fvors both of yall.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128390 |
Uppin this for more votes...... 2-0..... Lets end it
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Aight
Aight 7 3rd keep them votes comin dawg lets show these bitches what we made of
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LMFAO So why did you do it???? |
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nice spit 7................murdered him.....UPIN 4 ma boy..................................
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uppin 4 my boy X
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My boi won this shit uping some votes for my boi come on peeps.
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Well, Severn Thirds had a mediocre start, but the line about X ing out faster than NY lottery tickets was hilarious and wll placed. The rhyme structure was descent. Flow cool. Vocab okay.
X was cool, rhymes aiight. The start, like Seven Thirds was mediocre, but she hit with a lot of personals which was good. v/Seven Thirds Return the favor Lightshift vs CaliCollegeGurl. |
Uppin this for them votes... /`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`
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what the hell....Stop swayin people to vote for you....I murked yo bitch ass so you setted it up in front lines becuz elevated people vote fairly so you had to get some noobs to vote for you.....and T storm you juss got murked so sthu...O yea sevn I murked you get over it...evryone tellin me I murked you but I told them dont vote..I murked ya wack self.....
This nigga is so cheap he even took off the avavatar so my punches wouldnt hit....Thats why he switched his avatar...He kno he lost so he switched it up..Fuckin cheater....do anything to win.... uppin for some real votes not instead of getting these Dqed |
Really come on now ya know x won this battle im not just saying that because he in my crew really come on ....ya know he won this battle he just getting some ( 50% )D/R votes
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Vote when i get bcak wait ill vote now
Seventhird had a decent verse but ur punches did not coonnnect as much X ur verse was great Personols realli nice and punches connected Break Down X Flow 8/10 Rhymms 9/10 Punches 8/10 Structure7/10 32/40 Seventhird Flow 7/10 Rhymez 6/10 Punches 6/10 Structure 8/10 27/40 V/X good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
okie dokie X takes this easily for a better verse and usin a decent quote in the rite place.. SevenThird your verse was good but you used quotes in the wrong place. you used a quote at the start of your vese big no no..
so X takes this for a better verse.. |
ok flows goes 2 seven
stucture seven balence seven overall seven vote-sevin third Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin this for votes again.... /`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`
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punches:7 personals:7 vocab:6 creativity:5 structure:5 7third~ punches:7 personals:9 creativity:4 structure:7 vocab:5 overall~ X: 30 7third:32 i vote 7third cuz his punches hit harder, was blunt with it, didnt use played lines or punches came, over all decently good.... vote:7 third Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
You Stay Third-Grade-Turd-Face- You as Dumb as Your Friends
How you gonna elevate -Can't Even spell "above" or "ascend" The head of ya crew's Massively-fake- Just Like You Cuz ya rhymes as reality based- as Chucky-2 Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This ^^ haha...rhyming similar to my style...nice (lol, yes patting myself on the back)...kinda imature punches...but shit made me laugh...so it works well enough I am "SevenThirds the Greatness Ya crew will Ever Be" 2.3 Times or 200 plus percent-- thanks for mentioning ^^ Nice personals there... 22/30 This nigga is so played if he tried to be president he still wouldnt be on dolla bills Becuz its really easy to murk someone who still rides his bike with trainin wheels Murked this guy seventhird so much left him homeless so hes tryin to stay on a grime ^^^ Not feeling your opener...where's the diss..? how is him being on a dollar bill or not a punch...? Yo can tell hes like 6 years old, Look at the bottom of his spit, its his bed time The Quotin things is pretty old to the site why dont you wake up to ya reality SevenThird is on the site 24 7 and now I juss murked him and left him with no personality ^^ Good attempt at personal...but needed to be worded better Improve upon flow 20/30 Vote: 7/3 |
Uppin this for my man SevenThird..................
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Uppin this again for 7 3rd and other crew battles goin on in my sig check D2R's forum to find out who's battlin who
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