EyeDentdy V.s. HORUS(thetruth)
 

no limit to how many bars
atleast 100 post to vote.
No crew votes, no biting, no recycling shit, no feeding off my verse, no dick riding votes.
5 Votes to win
spit around 30 to 45 mins after check in.
as U said, I'll go first.
Good luck nigga.

i'm here

Check in, Im writing my verse right now,

I'll watch U break down, from the heat that I bring/
It'll melt Ur teath and have U lookin like a Ying Yang twin/
Cuz ur whole styles benieth me, like short ass chinese people/
Niggaz who vote for U'll have the moderators thinkin, " were the fuck did he find these people?"/
cuz "the truith" is, U lost Ur first battle cuz U "Horse" shit/
so now U bitching cuz U cant spit or flip shits even if U fell in the toilet/
U wak like if some one from Mafioso caught U sleeping/
U saw so many bullets flying in da night, U might as well have been dreaming/
cuz U not even a portion of the rapper that I was when I first started/
so I'll punch through Ur most vital organs just so U could say that Ur heartless/
cuz U agree wit me so much, niggaz would think U giving head at the coarner/
the only booth Uv ever been in, involved U spending Ur last pennys and quarters/
Dissing me is a conflict involving guns, knives and missles/
If the pen is mightier than the sword, make sure U bring one thats straped to a 9 mm pistol/
watching as Ur ear drums pop from the bullets when they whistle/
My punchlines split Horus pressice in pressure points just to make sure they hit U/

good luck kid.

Lets see if Ur first lost was a fluke or not. Spit Ur shit nugga. I wanted to add more but I was running out of time.

yo eyedenty go drop a vote on ma battles me vs theone and me vsrapmaster and i'll vote on this one when he drops sorry i forgot tha links pc

two more min. i'm on a different browser

I'll do that if I got time, but We need some fair votes. I aint trying to win or lose under fucked up conditions.

yo i drop honest votes if u got a hot couple of barz then i vote for tha betta person but i'd apreciate it if u would drop a vote on them two

Fuck this, Check it,

you could barley win a battle huh? the shit is a shame/
and the only way you'll get votes against me is if you sign in under different names/
i've seen your battles yo, all the shit is the same/
your sweeter than lemonade, and "EyeDentdy" i'm living "proof" that your shit is just lame/
i've seen you in action and your tallent isn't massive/
as a matter of fact, it couldn't be attractive if it were a magnet/
i'll put your face in the mud, murder you and begin tastin your blood/
you have tallent out the ass? why are you makin stuff up?/
you are the whackest, the shit is just shameful/
even inanimate objects notice it, stereo's malfunction and refuse to play you/
get off of the stage, you don't belong there like the chairs and seats/
you deserve to watch me rock it like comet, while you stare at me/
and don't bite my style coz i do shatter enamle/
I'm tight that in a real spit Vs me, you'll still clap for me after the battle/
rattle what you got, your the reason i attack people/
your about as popular as Bush is to black people/
your rap's feeble, your hard but your not bringing a message in/
your a bitch, and don't even belong in the "streets", like pedestrians/
so let's begin, i'll cut off your fucking feet for "steppin in"/
to talk tough and i guess you like violence/
but to me, when i'm laughing at you is the only was that you cause a "riot"/
so why test, i'm a savage from the west, a beast/
your whole flow is dead, just let it rest in peace, let it be/
step up and i'll crack your spine and fuck it up like extacy/
so next time don't be underestimatin people/
that's why my verse "exposed" yours, like it took a pic of some naked people/
i roasted you good, i should even make a sequal.........

Clarification. "i'm tight that in a real spit" should of been, i'm "so tight that in a real spit vs. etc........

i wish that i could edit.

what's up wit the votes ya'll?

Yeah, we need votes in this piece, Yo Horus, that shit was tight kid, U in a group dawg?

yo go drop a vote on them two battles i said then i'll drop one here

hahahahahaa :roll: :
rattle what you got, your the reason i attack people/
your about as popular as Bush is to black people/
^omg... lmao... funny shit, cause i hate bush!!!...8/10 for humor

you could barley win a battle huh? the shit is a shame/
and the only way you'll get votes against me is if you sign in under different names/
i've seen your battles yo, all the shit is the same/
your sweeter than lemonade, and "EyeDentdy" i'm living "proof" that your shit is just lame/
^no... that was weak ass opener..good think ur shit got much better as i read..4/10

over all that verse was hott... 8.1/10

eye:
cuz U agree wit me so much, niggaz would think U giving head at the coarner/
the only booth Uv ever been in, involved U spending Ur last pennys and quarters/
^first line wack.. but last line was nice.. 6.7/10

watching as Ur ear drums pop from the bullets when they whistle/
My punchlines split Horus pressice in pressure points just to make sure they hit U/
^ok finisher

over all even tho i hated that opener horus.. dont ever do that again lol... the rest of that verse was hot like soup... he better wordplay and an flow..

v/horus....eye ur verse had lots of potential, so it wasent like you got murked or nothin..you did ya thang

fuck lol.. damnit sry... for got all i have is 72 posts,, an forogt i needed 100.. scratch that vote then.. or u can jsut read it and look at it as audience response :x....

Thanx Eyedendty Proof, but naw, i ain't in no group.

bump

return the favor =O

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130918

These were two hella koo verses in my opinion.... BUt the line in horuses shit about bush to black people...Damn that slaughtered other dudes whole verse....Being black i was like damn... Eyedentity yo shit was hot too... i was feelin the line about if pen is stronger than swords than yours better comer strapped to a pistol.... But HOrus got this based on humor...1

HIT up my TWO BATTLES vS:

FEMCEE
rAP MASTER

Yea, Proof, you have a lot of tallent also, but Horus said some crazy shit yo.
i think he said something like, "i'm living "proof" that your shit is just lame".
hence your name "proof". that was clever, i caught it, he knows how to work with what he has.

Only criticism i have about you Horus is that, you will be pound for pound the best that i've read on here if you structure was just on point. otherwise you just rip people by what you say.
V=Horus

And in your first battle you took that, but you lost because of crew votes.
and the last guy that voted for you neglected to put it in effect and click on the vote now. just work on the flow though, you got it.

oh, shit, you need 100 posts? i thought that it was 20. what kind of rules are these, it's discrimination.

I guess that I can't vote yet then.

Its to keep niggaz who dont know how to vote from here,

example:
wow, eye Ur verse was like, oh my god. so U get my vote ok. now vote on my battle and I'll suck ur dick, tee hee.

keeps this from going on, nothing personal though.

my rapname is just EyeDentdy though, the proof is just part of the sig to keep niggaz entertained. but yo, Horus, holla at me if U wanna join the crew Im in. so far we got 3 ill niggaz and one dude that my homeboy let in I guess cuz he's his naighbor or some shit, but im planning on fixing that shit. anywayz we trying to bring the illest niggaz together into a group, wetha I win or loose this one, U got my respect dawg. let me know watz up.

I'm interested cuz, just holla at me and tell me whassup, i'm open.
you could give me a Private Message or something or just tell me whassup here.

bumping this up too, can we get some votes ya'll?

votes please

bumping up

yea, i don't have enough posts either

Please give us some votes

you need 100 posts for this, damn...

Damn, i liked this battle, i wanna vote

EyeDentdy, i was really feelin yo shit like around in da middle and da last verses. dat line- U wak like if some one from Mafioso caught U sleeping/
U saw so many bullets flying in da night, U might as well have been dreaming- was good. You had some good punches dat connected and I was feelin da flow. Structure was good, but when you started dat shit i couldnt understand it. Not Nockin yo rap but overall ya shit was tight.

But my vote gotta go to Horus cuz he held dat shit down wit- i've seen you in action and your tallent isn't massive/
as a matter of fact, it couldn't be attractive if it were a magnet- and -your a bitch, and don't even belong in the "streets", like pedestrians/
so let's begin, i'll cut off your fucking feet for "steppin in"/
Man dis was a good ass battle. You had all yo shit on lock and basically took dis shit.
Punches-Horus,Personals-Horus,Flow-Horus. Both waz tight

Vote =Horus

Ay vote for Me vs Plustwo

Fuck, When i get 100 posts ill come back to dis shit but for now im out.

Can we Get Some Votes in dis shit

I think that a lot of people don't vote on this because they don't have 100 votes, ya'll shouldn't of set it up like that

bumpin this battle up

bumpin up

we need votes, I already explained why U need 100 posts, Im aware that its why and shit but, I have my reasons.

This needs votes

Yo Horus nice punches. I was feelin that. Overall good verse. Easy to read nice structure. Eye you had a couple of iight punches too but not as maney or as good as Horus'. Vote - Horus

Actually return tha favor. Don't read this and blow it off. Link in my sig.

So why didn't you vote, we need them, what you want me to vote on yours first?