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.:DurmiL (I.I.) vs. The~Star (HWC):.
In case ur wondering...
I do actually have five wins even tho under my avy says 4...i beat GEE 5-0 but it didn't tally under my avy and administrator is fixing it.. Rules: THIS IS FOR OUR CREW BATTLE ...5-6 barz ...No Crew (I.I. or HWC), d/r, hate votes ...explained or broken down votes from everyone ...I spit 1st (Star have ur verse posted shortly after mine) |
Crew Battle Verse
You a joke, my lines will have ya dazed so go home and tell ur folk/
Now watch as I leave this *Star* out of sight like a cheap telescope// U gettin ya ass kicked, a 5-0 loss will leave ya behind like the past bitch/ u could sneeze during "4th period" and ya still wouldnt be "class-sick"// Slut, you "blow more cock" then "chicken fuckers given oral-sex"/ Havin more "nuts goin down your throat" then "obese squirel-necks"// I'm bein' pretty honest though ya corny and also ya reps weak/ The only way this dull bitch gon "excel" is by makin "spread sheets"// I got rhymes for days, so ill keep hittin u wit heavyweight punches/ Ur a wannabe star, so ill leave ya straight lookin like a brady bunch kid// Goin toe to toe wit me bitch ur bitch your bound to regret this/ STL? no im leavin u a-lone *Star* like the whole state of Texas// Durmil, .:Ill-Intentionz:. |
this aaint for the crew battle dumbass you cant just add people to the crew battle...she wasnt under the line up and either were you our line up was
State Capitol E Looch Marv and Lethal Lunatic Sire Hoops |
why the fuck not??
ive made 3 posts about it in the crew battle discussions nobody has opposed it...its a text battle between an emcee from ur crew and my crew...and our crew's are in a crew battle right now...makes perfect sense why wouldnt it count...just cuz gurly got murked ur all shook....but hey w/e |
naww dumbass...if you want to be in the crew battle you wont be battling her you'll be battling someone else..you cant decide my line up..wtf.!!!
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Hey hey hey,don't go speaking ya tongue so fast.We'll see who gets murked. |
show em who he messin wit star ^...................
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yea.. you cant chose who you battle.. you guys put up your names and shit.. and so did we.. from there, the line ups were made..not tryna beef or nuffin.. thats just what it is
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lol.. i say ya'll battle.. but not for the crew battle.. na mean ? lol.. this is gonna be good ^_^
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patiently waiting....and ight whatever dont add it too the crew battle records then w/e...assign me sumone else from ur squad to battle sounds like a plan
just no more free-posts...uppin for star's verse and votes |
He had the idea about the crew battle,I'm just battling
Weak link, surprised you 5 and 0, spit ya best against me, still don’t reach my level
Need to get your crew, so y’all can dig a hole, to reach yo level of the devil Sneak up on you with my skill, caught you off guard as if you discovered you had Sars My words leave you with scars so bad, that you wish you could disappear to Mars You think you spiting fire, but you mistaken, betta stop drinking that hot sauce But don’t call me a liar, when I leave you shaken, from what? I think this loss Don’t underestimate, cuz I’m a female, I’ll leave you stupid like a dog chasing his tail I’m the hammer, you the nail, Cuz I’m beating you in, leaving ya face pale Wouldn’t believe what you was reading, maybe thought it was stole But my incredible flow, flows smooth, like the blood from my hole Defeat is coming for you, cuz Its murder you wrote, I’m just giving you a warning I know its tough for you, so let me put it in quotes, “gather yo crew to start the mourning” Use This\/ MULTIS: FLOW: PUNCHES: PERSONALS: WORDPLAY: CREATIVITLY: OVERALL: |
almost an hour later lol....
VERSUS IN UPPIN FOR VOTES...and fuck that scale break it down if possible |
^Whatever,it wasn't that long.Watching tv,eating food,typing the verse,u know.
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lets get sum votes on dis................
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uppin.....
and in my last bar i say ur bitch after me bitch....disregard that ur bitch...cuz i was typin outta my haed and fucked up but yea vote up |
uppin on this battle.. dont sleep.. leave your links..
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See this why I never post battles in here.People never vote on ya shit.It takes twice as long than in the other one.Let's get some votes plz.I've probably voted on ya shit b4,so....
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Battle been up for like 3 days now and hasn't got 1 fucking vote.Bullshit.Can you pople wake up and vote.
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Star told me to use this....so w/e
MULTIS:Star (durmil didnt have any) FLOW:Star (because of the metas made the flow better) PUNCHES:tied (it was pretty even) PERSONALS:Durmil (closer was nice) WORDPLAY:tied (it was close) CREATIVITLY:tied(again it was pretty even) OVERALL:Star ^I really hate using that^ i feel like im not explaining it well... |
im just letting you guys and gal know..there no poll to vote....
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o i see now..i dont have 5 wins...so i cant vote...sorry...anyway star i did what i could now poll vote on my battle...
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Damn its not,thanx 4 letting us know.Durmil dumb ass don't know how to set up shit.
BXP you can keep explaining. |
haha of course u dont have 5 wins u dont understand what wordplay is...haha tie my ass....and there is a poll u dumb bitch are u stupid???
uppin for some actual voters wit more then 5 wins and know what they're talkin about |
^Shut the fuck up cuz u know I murked you
I took every thing.U had no multies and I killed you in punches. Just go line by line & you would see I killed you. |
pshh hahaha.....
u think u took punches...."flow like the blood from hole"...."leave my face pale" haha ohhhh no look out for the hard hittin punches....ur punches were half as creative half as effective and got fuckin murked....bitch ass....ur a fuckin joke can we get some votes leave a link to ur battle and we'll drop honest votes |
MULTIS:Star...
FLOW:Both... PUNCHES:I felt Star had a tiny tiny bit better punches... PERSONALS:Durmil... WORDPLAY:Both... CREATIVITLY:Both... OVERALL:Star... v/Star |
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:laugh2: You better take a second look at your lines.And you gon say I got murked after I already said you did,come on now.Your lines were stupid,not creative.We'll let the votes show ya. U P P I N |
I'll never battle again in here 4 a while.Battle been up like 5 days,got 1 fucking vote........bullshit
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This makes no damn sense
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Durmil- your verse was good........You beat her on punches......ya structure was kinda stretched.........flow wasnt that good becuz ya structure was stretched
Star- your verse was good too.......it just lacked the punches that Durmil had.your structure was kinda stretched too. |
^I won in punches,u just don't see
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honestly ur punches were mediocre at best....why do u think ur the shit?
UPPIN... |
^Fuck U
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MULTIS: - no real multies i could see..
FLOW: - star PUNCHES: both PERSONALS: Durmil WORDPLAY: Durmil CREATIVITLY: Durmil OVERALL: very close.. but durmil had a few funny lines.. v/ durmil One |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuck.... cant vote on the poll... oh well.. lol.. guess mine was just an opinion
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Battle been a whole week and we have two votes.Come on people.Wake-up.
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MULTIS:Durmil, i didnt see any from star
FLOW:ehhh...tie, both had stretched lines PUNCHES:Durmil by a mile, he came wit more creative ones in his verse, while star was lackin, and the only real good one was the one about her period, but them shits is played PERSONALS:Durmil, star had none WORDPLAY:Durmil, the closer was ill along wit other parts of ur verse CREATIVITLY:Durmil, already been stated...he took played lines, and added something extra to them which made them better OVERALL:Durmil, he had better punches, personal, he had multis, creatvity, took this with ease. |
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