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Aight check it

Ill "telepathically break your esophagus", so when you "read" this youll be "left breathless, gaspin for air"//
Ill make you "electrifyin" like "sittin on electricity" or diein from a "electric chair"//

Ill "stab you in the stomach" wit a "rusted knife"//
Im "lethal like toxins" im the "rust you digest thatll end your life"//

Ill "leave your body like the exorcist" after "my gat leave you possessed"//
Ill "inject poison in your heart" leavin you like "cops" but "critical in cardiac arrest"//

Ill "slit your wrist" like "eminems wife kim" and let the "blood excrete"//
Ill put a "carton of dozen eggs in your bed when you sleep", that means when you rollover "more than twelve shells will be in your ass" when you "wake up and you look under your sheet"//

you can write your "saved 1-800 collect prewritten shit in your palm" and it still "couldnt be hand written"//
you can "feed off my verse" and "starve and my rhymes still couldnt be bitten"//

Ill stick my "gat down your throat and clog your windpipe" and rip out your "left nostril" so you "breath half the air in your right"//
your "punches dont connect" like a "man wit no arms" gettin into a "arm wrestlin fight"//

you "losin this battle" is like "Al Gore losin his presidential campaign"//
Ill leave a "infill red dot aimed" in the "middle of your crane" ready to "separate your skull from your brain"//

My "gat will lift" you so "high" youll be "elevatin wit the birds"//
My "punches will leave your mouth redirected" so when you "talk youll be lost for words"//

Whose This Wackass Rapper By The Name Of Vinman/
If I Come At His Chest Hell Be Just Like The Tinman/
Fuckin Wackass Prick Hope Nobody Followed U/
U Coulda Been Nice But I Made Ya Mom Swallow U/
Fuck Is A Vin, I Spits Venom/
Lil Buggin Ass Nigga, I Shouldve Repelled Em/
U Aint Really That Nice And Rhymin Is The Thing U Best At/
When I Shit On U Rb Should Call Me Exlax/
U Sittin In A 94 Honda, Im Rollin In The Bm/
I Couldve Multiplied Every Last Cell In My Body And U Still Couldnt Be Him/
I Remember It Was About 6:00 Pm/
Lookin At The Board Noticed I Had A Pm/
Dude Wanted A Battle I Replied Yes/
Then This Bitch Started Talkin Reckless Thru The Net
Talkin Bout How I Was A Punk And He Was Gonna Teach Me A Lesson/
I Could Prolly Hook This Kid And Break His Jaw Wit No Effort/
But Instead I Jus Bitchslapped Dude In Bitchslapped/
On The Net While His Girl Workin The Track/
He At Work Tryna Nigga Breakin His Back/
She At Work Gettin Bitchslapped Cuz She Aint Gettin Paid From Niggas Breakin That Back/
Nigga Stop Stalkin Me Ridin My Cock/
After This Stay In Hiphop Lounge And Hiphop Talk

This Was My First Battle Against Streetsweepa..i should have wn check the battle out some funyy shyt lol


ayo im gonna murder this shyt talker before he kills himself/
street u better slap a condom on ya lips to protect ya mouth/
i got tha thirst of a thoroughbred so watch where ya steppin/
the weapon im gettin sick of holdin so its gettin thrown in ya direction/
:all males refrain from steppin near street: is what im warnin men/
cuz the only time dis nigga will see pussy is if he's born again/
punches killin you..ya couldnt be sik if u snorted 6 lines of anthrax/
ya skills couldnt see mine if i was inches away and u was sportin contacts/
im crazy..this nigga street never heard of me but he wanna murder me/
but im crazier than a japanesse dude walkin thru germany/
room for improvement..im startin a lethal movement..i'll prove it/
cause street got 10 seconds to live..na, make it 5 for being useless/

Thats decent for a FIRST rap

bullshit those arent you first raps. I will have to go back to my old site to find mine.

well I open my mouth to spit and out come flamez//
u could light you ass on fire just by sayin' my name//
you say you better then Em well you gotta get past me//
just by pulling out my gat you scream and then flee//
you can rhyme all the fuck you want just know you won't win//
unless you got a ill rapper relative who happens to be your twin//
don't get it twisted I ain't against all of the wiggaz//
you can pretend to be black or something just by pulling a trigger//
my name will come in handy right after this battle//
unless you plan to quit and go to the farm to round up the cattle//

praise me!!!!!!!! at least I elevated a little!

Check it... my first rap was about.... oatmeal! lol... Fuck, I was bored as shyt that day!



When ya wake up in the morning just how do ya feel?
You wanna get up to a good hot bowl of oatmeal!
You put on some clothes; throw on some socks
Reach in the cupboard just to get that box
You get the pot and then some water and ya let it start to boil
Can't find the pot top so ya use some tin foil
Can't wait to eat ya oats; ya turn the stove up high
That's when ya thinking to yaself, "How can I make time fly?"
Ya think about a minute, Watch the telly for five
Ya come back, the water's bubblin' and it's kickin' live
Ya open up ya oats and then ya just start pouring
Then ya say, "What the hell! I'll just put a little more in!"
It takes a whole 5 minutes then it's finally done
You don't walk like normal people you just haul off and run
Ya put the brakes on at the sink and then ya rinse ya bowl
and cry, "I gotta finish quick before my oats get cold!"
Ya eat the pot of oats because the pot of oats was blazin'
When ya finish then ya thinking, "Man, I shoulda added raisins!"


There's a singing part to it... but I ain't even gonna try and go there!...lol

^we should team up I made a rhyme about chocolate!

my first battle
I'll remove you with the delete key, he had to make up fake personals
His Played rhymes while my punches and disses come in military arsenals
Your lines are stretched up, lost points in your structure and your flow
He a flyweight, his rhymes still sucks and he signed up a long time ago
Say he a hurricane, he can't reach me cause im the highest mountaintop
Already this fake MC choking in the battle, get this nigga a cough drop
My words and lyrics has got your mouth so dry that you can’t even spit
I’m going to KO’ you like what Eminem did to Papa Doc and Lickety Split
I know that you be ghostwriting your verse, this kid trying to fool me.
Because if you can't look through your lines of rhymes, then M can't C.
This kid claim he a hustler, cause he smuggling to many porn pics.
Because it’s like I'm eating cereal, because this fruit is just trix
MC.CM keep saying he's dope, so I'm smoking him to get higher.
And that is why I'll be burning Cm, like throwing rulers in fire.

that probably mite be my first rap all the others have been deleted

Dam son that was the hottest shyt i ever read lmao shyt was funny and well written laughed all the way through

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=64908

3rd or 4th battle.

It's a shame, you had to look in my profile to get a thought in ya brain so you could beat me,
that's ok, you a dame right, we dont even need a mic and you can "beat me,"
and i know my shit, who cares that i'm a middle school fuck up,
i'll bet that when you get done reading this flow, you'll shut the fuck up,
watch ya mouth, you'll fuck around and catch an STD over the net,
I dont care if you a bitch, I'll still slip the fishin wire under ya neck,
~First battle vs Jixi. won 5-1(D/R vote. the igga said he loved her in the thread but anyway)~
tell the truth, after readin my profile, you in love wit me right,
I know that you is, cause if not, you must be a dyke,
I'll sing you do sleep, then after that, i'll take ya neck and ring you to sleep,
so get over it ya dumb broad, ya loss, the genius is me.
it's duke 14 years lived, but im twenty years old,
so dont find yaself butt naked, raped, and in a ditch in the cold.

aight this was my first ever battle and it was on this site......


yo, i even dropped first, and still he didnt hit me where it hurts
cos hes jus fake....like an antheist kissing bibles in a church
no doubt hes a kon....cos he thinks he can bite for free
shit! the faggogts like low fat drinks, hes too light for me
you bring shame and disgrace on your fucking proud nation
i mean, ive battled better `cats`....in the stray kitten foundation
son i know you retarded.... so i`ll drop this half hearted
you jus like shite builders....ya never finish what you started
you may merk fakes daily....like that takes balls, go get a tutor
never stepped to a vet before....now hes getting neutered

props to the oats guy. you are now my new god.

if you guys actually sitll have your first verses........................................ROFL MFAO!.. lmao..
my first rap was about a roach named billy.. he was my pet :(..he died.. wrote it in 1st grade:


my best friend..roachy/
he broky'd/

These people are crazy.
They really dont phase me.
They just act like a bunch of babies.
Its ignorant, yea i know.
Thats just how people are anymo'.
I aint the one goin around screamin fuck the world.
I guess that's just way to act boys and girls.
You aint even half a man.
Now im sittin back laughin.
I dont know what you have labeled me as but personally i dont give a fuck.
I just step back and holler fuck um'.
I wait for the fucka to step with somethin cuz i aint fearin nothin
And never gettin down to my knees and beggin pleaz.
HELL NAW.Clockin G's with power,money and pistols,
Clockin them for when they come and get you.
Perfection is what i seek.
That is my ambition but i still haven't reached this mountain peak.
But no matter what you still hear me shoutin, talkin shit.
I am sick of people,i dont wanna earl,
It's just me against the world.

that was my first shit.....shame aint it? i thought i was the shit too....i thought no one was better and i look at it now and am like i sucked....lol i know i had my 1st before this but this was closest to it....the first started

When you look into my eyez you get hypnitized
You realize that i aint a perfect guy
Aint a goodie goodie two shoes
Don't believe me, i'll show you fools
I'm like a kite, i never go down without a fight
I float simular to a boat
Never knowin what kind of guns i tote

and a whole bunch more bull shit....thought i was the shit.....but atleast i elevated alot from then

calam, im feelin ya on roachy... in 2nd grade i had a pet ant... ... i ate it.. ...

fuck i cant even remember my first battle, i was pillin...
i remember i did alrite tho..

damn i wish i had my first spits written down somewhere--- i lost all my notebooks from highschool-- heres the verse to the first shit I ever recorded-- then had the tape eat it in the car later on---

It's a Massacre- Grab the Mic Chord and Strangle-Ya/
Amatuer Swordsmen- Get Caught up by this Marksmen/
Darts-Spin off Finger-Tips-- Hit Ya Carcus/
Corpses Lost in Darkness- Kill The Heartless/
And Ill Artist- Who Eats Opponents Regardless/
Terminate Ya Fate- Gamble? Odds is Im the Largest/
ENERGY- Kinetic Melodies-
Kill Thine Enemies- Sick Minded Tendencies,
Who's Testin Me?- Stickin Sharp Objects in Ya Chest where a Vest- Should be/
Wild Child- Fire All Weaponry-
I got the Illest Arsenal Possible- Stomping You- Knockin kids out Just like Apollo-Do/


lmao- and I can't believe I still have that shit memorized.

Yep, even though I went to battle stats, searched myt name, and found my first battle. I have no life at all.

:rolleyes:

Good lookin' out Forsaken, Flow Intelligent, and One Man Band! I wrote that shyt like ...well it was a long ass time ago!!! My peoples still like that shyt for some reason. I'll just say that it's at least 10 years old. Hey man... whenever anybody wanna do a collabo or sum'n I'm down with that!

Holla at the kid...
D.I.G.z aka Ill-Grammatix!

Yo OMB, who da kid in the Brooklyn shirt? He kinda look familiar for some reason. (I'm originally from the spot he reppin on his shirt!)

my first was so sorry i aint even gonna spit it, but it was about playin basketball.

nah thats just a friend of mine that gets me instrumentals n makes beats.. and nah he hails from SD... but hes wearin brook wear..lol

my first rap on thi board was vs. XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

yo here i go

you think you rappin material//you sound like you read yo rhymes off tha back of a boxo cereal//i aint here ta fool around//im here ta make sure dis battle dont turn around//when da dawgfatha grabs tha mike you might as well go ramble//cause when i rock that mike i rock it unobjectionable//you might want to grab a dictionary for tha words i impose//when i leave you 6 feet deep i wont need to be poised//dolja at my side and my buds in tha corna//ta make sure ya dont botha//i dont got no krew//i dont have to//jus 100% real hardcore//bitches underrated me before//now they get kicked out tha door//yo dont waste my time i got things to do//i leave you now im celebratin 4-20 without you//so take yo leave or make a cumback foo

E-yo, I'ma newbie on this site but I got vets challengin' me
It must be my karma, but no worries, I'll merk this guy, see
This guy doesn't really understand the true essence of rappin'
Sorry dog, u have no future in rhymes, but u got talent in actin'
Cause you sign on to Rap Battles actin' like your ass is real hard
I'm a basketball man, not football, but even I can punt ur ass far
Normally, I would spare this wack shit the pain of badly losin'
But I'm in a bad mood, so I'll fuckin' merk those of my choosin'
Deep down he wants to shock the world, but all he can pick up is static
Right now I ain't even thinkin', merkin' this muthafucka is automatic
I can understand your reasoning by wantin' to battle every newbie
Cowardice, but battlin' me? You might as well scream "school me"
Why are you even on this site? Your only interest is basketball
I can't really understand why this wack shit is in rankings so tall
But that's the way the cookie crumbles, I'll just have to eliminate
I got about as much respect for u that from heaven on u I'll ejaculate
I have fighting talent, enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my Brethren
Here comes thy father, time to perplex ur mind, better go grab ur Excedrin.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114810

I posted this in Open Mic, first drop on RB


Its the return of that nigga wit rhymes, lines like broken glass tear apart your limbs from your spritual mind. Light'n em Up from my tongue like T.N.T. and guns, words come'n off amaze'n, ingulf'n niggas in flame's...n...ways you can die is left up to the mic that I hold in my left and the pen in my right. When I write, words flow and give life to my verse, for these incupedent souls that were lost at birth. Some didnt know who the prophet was, until they heard that this young boy who spoke gave birth to words. Cause I was sent to unleash rath and bring straight pain, to these known wash-ups for this new rap game...

Cause I was sent to unleash rath and bring straight pain to these known wash-ups for this new rap game. Light'n em Up from the top to the bottom of this page, Given them more of my words till they blow away...

Yo, how much shit does it take, to get your name at the top of my hit list, just keep off my dick. Believe nigga I'm a ride, wit my crew by side. Blast ya head on the paper, read The Star through your eyes. The next page brings a whole new chapter, the climax and the end for these so-called rappers. The Deuce, is what you here when they call me on the speaker. The "G" for the first, Guetto Grim Reaper. My shit gets deeper, as these lines go, and flow from the mind of invulnerable soul. Lett'n know, whos the slayer of men and drag bodies like ice to the desructable cold. Bury them, that stand in the way of a well known killa, like a model, i eat rhymes just to keep my figure.

Cause I was sent to unleash rath and bring straight pain to these known wash-ups for this new rap game. Light'n em Up from the top to the bottom of this page, Given them more of my words till they blow away...

Yo, Your The Only Butcha I Know That Aint Got A Meat Cleaver, And Your
Ass Is So Pussy Ill Call You Mr. Beaver,
See I Put Bone In Your Girlfriends Mouth And Made Her My Golden Retriever
See I Know You Used To Love Hip Hop, But She Had To Leave Ya
Cuz Your A Fake Ass Punk And That Shit Aint Debatable, Plus The Only Bitches You Get Are The Ones That Are Inflatable
See Vango Is A Freestyle Champ Kid And Thats No Mystery, See Butcha Your Out Like February, Black Your Ass Is History!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

See Ya Beaaaacchhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

^That was horrible.

thats why it was a first drop you faggot, i'd love to see your first drop twilight.

Aight, check it...
What the hell? Spittin' that, thinkin' you might win some?
Oh, I get it, ur one of those guys who get merked for fun
I feel you though, dawg, I know you have the drive to win
But your battlin' me, now you've just committed a holy sin
Spittin' the worst bars I've seen on RB in a while. They do exist!
U know... Those wack newbies with no style. Not fazin' my gist
I ain't even tryin', dawg, I'm merkin' you with will. Time to Kill Bill
But there ain't gonna be a sequel wit room for ur garbage lines to fill
I guess your flows are always gonna be wack. It's inevitable, mate
If ur gonna battle here, at least find out the meaning of "elevate"
It's time for me to go, and end to this quick merk, your outta luck
Next time you think about a battle, remember just how much you suck
Later
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now thats a quality drop, ha ha, especially like your closer darklight.

^Hahahaha, show him how we do In da N.A.P. nigga!!!!!!!!

yo g-deuce remember that cat butcha who got banned?

yeah I remember, why?

that was my first drop against him, that i dropped earlier. pretty wack, but he was pretty wack if i remember right.

He gave me my first lost on RB, when I sucked, he couldnt stand a chance now

yeah he was the original madrapper. then came back as someone else and was voting on butchas battles. herb, ha ha.

heavly-enchanted, plunge you in ceptic-tank, ya thougths transmit/
impale forks in ya throat, so they look like you were born-implanted/
like the hulk in jail, i will internally destroy ya bars/
like you a jap in the U.S, ima new threat, like instant sars/
3-0, missy how you feel being my first win/
like a record, all you do to ya rhymes is flip,scratch and spinn/
treat you like a bad skateboarder, have ya face-planted/
this bitch so ugly she need a half-mask liek the phantom/
im bout to leave you disabled like a soldier with no arms/
and like a dog wit no teeth, ya *bites* do-me no harm/
kissin you is prolly a story id like untold/
kinda like stickin ya tounge in opra-winfreys asshole/
girl you aint got no verbal sawed-off, ammunition is long lost/
heres a remedy for that small *cough*, get ya claws mauled off/
^ i think that was my first battle verse lol on here lol.. and i lost :(