J_Trooper vs KroNuz
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-28-04 at 10:56 PM

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KroNuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 10:28 PM.

J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 10:36 PM.

J Troop Gettin Rocked, Like Old People In Chairs That Move
You On'a Block?, You More Like Carlton From Bel Air You Fool! (Will smith old show)

It Dont Matta Ya Post Count But How You Make Ya Posts Count
And If Thats The Case N Its A Flow Bout', You Takin A L No Doubt

Got Troop Seein Stars Like Black Lights Lookin Up Ways
N He's Going Down Like Rv Lastnight For Upgrades

My Verse Is Hate Mixed With A Blunt Rage
And Ya Style Is Plain Like Rv'z New Front Page!

Ya Flow Is Wrong And If You Write Right Ya Blows' Might Miss
Plus Ya Style Is Like The New Rap Verse, Cuz Nobody Likes It !

ight let the voteing n shit begin.................

uppin

Voted For: KroNuz

Well not bad this was a close battle, KroNuz you have the wordplay down as well as the muliti's you could work a little on developing your punches but somtimes good wordplay and multi's really enhances a punch which yours seemed to do, you started off kinda bad with the opening bar but as the verse progressed you got better, it seems to me you realy build on your previous barz which is good to see.

J trooper you were kinda like + / - meaning you had a good bar then one i wasn't feel'n then a good one then one I wasn't feel'n the opener was a nice hit then the second bar was kinda bunk so on and so forth. You as well have the multi's down it's good to see makes things a nice read cause it enhances your flow.


Now punches win battles and this in this one it was almost to close to say, both of you came creative I liked how Kro brought up the current event's with the site and all, and J you just had some well thought out punches. However, J your two barz

Geletin resembles ya Interior im established respect ya Superior
Im Domination. U not even Nomination i peeped the fear in You


Neva will your Hopes and Wishes turn you into Competition
Quote my Significance Defenition's-ya punches aint Deliverin

These two bars didn't seem like much of a punch the first one I posted was more like 1 up'n and the second wasn't really anything. Because of that fact I have to say that Kro takes this, mainly because although J had some really sick punches they weren't consistent all the way through. Kro, your punches were average but consistent.

I think Trooper had better vocab, but thats about it-- KroNuz had stronger punches, and a couple lines were pretty funny-- Felt KroNuz's closer was the strongest bar in the battle- good wordplay, strong verse.... 1

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

yo im feeling this vote shit cuz now i can see a nigga verse.damn i hate voting aganist this nigga but he be battleing some hard hitting niggas.trooper ya shit is offical as it always is.good flow and wordplay and your vocab is good your disses were ok but not hard hitting but the way you say um makes um seem better you kinda like hov on that shit.i like your beginning and and but ill go with your oppenants verse again cuz he got more personal and he killed you on originality.still you got a good verse in

yah didnt poll it lol..... uppppppppppppppppppp[[[

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

im not voting, just one comment........................................... ............

J you was the tiebreaker vote against me a memisis and you said we both need to elevate.................................
well based on that verse you just post, if thats elevation.....
ill stay right where im at thank you

^- lol.......................upppppp..............

^- lol... why dont you to battle... i wanna see this haha... upp....

Voted For: KroNuz

this battle def goes to Kronuz his opener n closer were funny as hell n hit hard too. J-trooper was ight but his rhymes sounded forced like he was just trynna use multisyllable words to sound good
v= Kronuw
return the favor
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Voted For: J_Trooper

10-1 still standin glarein at ya fuckin entire Administration
my vote's.... over toppelz yours add up them Caculations

9/10

I'll piss on your Ambitions-side kick ya Remainings
Feel me- Kronuz aka Milli Vanilly bitch stop Faking

9.1/10

Neva will your Hopes and Wishes turn you into Competition
Quote my Significance Defenition's-ya punches aint Deliverin

9/10

Geletin resembles ya Interior im established respect ya Superior
Im Domination. U not even Nomination i peeped the fear in You

8.7/10

Im the best in Deleviring Threats the best in Particular
U couldnt feel true Lyricism if u held onto Nas's Testiculars

9.2/10

Overall verse 9/10

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

oK.. THE FIRST BAR IS OK, NO REAL PUNCH THO

2ND, NO REAL PUNCH, JUST INSULTS

3RD, COO RHYMES, JUST NO PUNCH..

4TH.. NO REAL PUNCH, AND IT DIDN'T RHYME

5TH BAR.. NICE CLOSER, THE BEST PART OF YOUR VERSE..

7/10

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kRONUZ WON THIS IN MY EYES.. HE CAME WITH A PUNCH IN ALMOST EVERY BAR.. HE CAME WITH MPRE CREATIVITY ANND HAD A GOOD STRUCTURE.. V/KRONUZ

It Won't Let Me Vote Anymore...

Voted For: KroNuz

Kronuz--I like ya flow on this one. good hitting punches, but a sorry closer. don't forget where you're able to post these verses for other heads to vote on em. you sposed to be battlin ya opponent not the board, anyhow I think you had the edge.

J-Trooper, stretched lines...the first line threw me off things. I laughed at the closer.....but yeah. I think you could shorten the lines a bit....and go for some multis in a verse.

oh yeah hit this up please ya'll.....

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thanks

Voted For: J_Trooper

J_Trooper
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

KroNuz
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice multis...wordplay was alright...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had some nice multis...neither had good personals...J_Trooper had the better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...J_Trooper gets my vote...

VOTE - J_TROOPER

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Voted For: J_Trooper

flow:i felt J had a betta flow 2 his den KRONUZ did his was kinda off
metas:J he didn't have many but KRONUZ had none dat i can see
punches:J didn't really get wut KRONUZ was tryna say
multi:neither
overall:J he had more punches n metas neither had multis but da flow were koo but J's flow was better
v/J_TROOPER

yo vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs 2h2l
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

ice pick
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137970
peace

lmao @ amaze saying i hade no metas haha .............

Voted For: KroNuz

yo J Trooper took dat shit but KroNuz yo shit was str8, but J Trooper took it, peace

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^- lmfao.... 2 things... one you didnt explain... lol 2 you voted for me on accident stupid.. haha...

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

i can't vote on this but good battle ya'll......... nice work

yo i voted for da rong mutha fucka J trooper took that shit by far da otha dude was no where close my vote got fucked up but J trooper took it so he winnin rite now

dis new votin shit is fucked up, but next time etha of u have a battle holla at me cus i no wat to do now iite? , peace

Voted For: KroNuz

u had sum nice simple but nice punches
ur flow was continous east 2 read
overall good flow good battle 2 both
j ur flow was good
but ur punches didnt seem 2 connect rite like u were battlin...
but u werent in da mood 2 write so u wrote bullshit no hatin though ive seen yo drops u got skillz but seem in dis battle u were lackin i vote:kronuz

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

I dont know if it was the time of night or the music im listenin to(people dont dance no mo) right now but this battle seemed kinda like ok. Both delivered some good punches. Imma give it to troop because i liked his flow a lil better

Voted For: J_Trooper

Yo, My vote is going to have to go to J Trooper.

1) You had more punch lines and more direct hits to KroNuz than he did to you.

2) Both of your structures were pretty good, they were easy to follow.

3) J Trooper had more of a rhyming status at the end of his lines, while KroNuz weren't really "rhyming"

ex:J Troop Gettin Rocked, Like Old People In Chairs That Move
You On'a Block?, You More Like Carlton From Bel Air You Fool!

Move and Fool dont really rhyme.

And also....

Ya Flow Is Wrong And If You Write Right Ya Blows' Might Miss
Plus Ya Style Is Like The New Rap Verse, Cuz Nobody Likes It !

Miss and It don't really rhyme.

J Trooper,

Geletin resembles ya Interior im established respect ya Superior
Im Domination. U not even Nomination i peeped the fear in You


Superior and You dont really match either...


But overall.........

My Vote is going to have to go to..

J Trooper

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Vote removed due to freeposting to 20 posts..