Quick Witted vs upfront
 

Battle Rules:

10 to 15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 06:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:27 PM.

u gonna accept battle

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:36 PM.

i'm here to leave upfront left out back in the yard
u ain't famous but u swear u got peeps so i'm clapping ya guard
check to see if ya bodies still intact put it back in the car
ya rhymes are nothing i done seen better shit before
lyrically my rhymes cut ya brain and have it split before it hits the floor
u claim to be shooting niggas but u ain't gripping nothing kid
blow u away with one bar like wind with a girls wig
u couldn't come sick if ya threw up last night's dinner
ya got ya hopes up high for nothing cause u know i'm the winner
my punches connect everytime like lennox lewis hooks
rednecks wouldn't even vote on ya battles if ya was garth brooks
i don't think bitchset is able to come to ya rescue *
i'll disband ya whole group you'll have to start on ya next crew
ya rhymes are fake i'm classifying them as a hoax
everyone knows u couldn't come 'nice if u was helping out old folks




*his crew dipset

ayo..

lyrically insane shoot words through ya mind like bullets through ya membrane/
u not even a lightweight ya lighter than cocaine/
erytime u start to get hot u rememba that i "rain"(reign)/

s0o ya names quick witted but u aint shit wit it i stay gettin m0 head from ya grl than ya "lidz" fitted/

ya rhymes aint nice all u do is descriminate ill put my shoe s0o hard to ya nuts u could call em ya soul mate/
i text tate then run ya ass round and debate on whose punches hit harder straight to tha face ill knock u to da south do u like tha sho me state?/
what happened to ya body ya bloods risin.. ridin ya heart rate if u ask me i think quick witted is afraid cuz he knows i can make his blood coagulate/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~closer~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well ima speed things up and try ta accelerate cuz after i murda ya ass ima celebrate/u were born in 1986 ill blow ya brains out like ya candles on ya birthday/

u a faggot who rocks nothin but khakki capries/
u swing on dicks u faggot like chimpanzees/
erytime i roll through ya hood my glock shines makes ya squint like ya chinese/
slice and dice ya like grated cheese show ya how to perfect ya craft wit my expertise ill leave ya wit this las line screamin i dont wanna die please ive touched ya wit da "rap plague" now y0o ass got da disease...~peace~////////

no beef or hate but i think u want a bit over

the limit on ya lines, that's what it looks like

This was feedback posted for Quick Witted
 

qiuck witted came a slight harder with his personals and puches with better bflow and strcutre

ya structure is what threw me off, reagrdless i guess we uppin

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Voted For: upfront

i think it was pretty close. both yall had a nice flow but upfront jus came out on top. he had jus a lil betta flow n vocab. his punchlines coulda bin better but he did pretty good n quik witted stay wit it jus elevate a lil more
vote=upfront

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Voted For: Quick Witted

Quick Witted - this was an alright verse. ur structure was good and ya punches were felt. good personals. (i don't think bitchset is able to come to ya rescue) niceeee. the only thing i would say u need to work on would be expanding ur vocab.

Upfront - this was a good verse with better vocab then Quick Witted. some decent puunches there and meta4's. didnt really feel ne personals from this one tho but what u do have was alright. the structure was poor.

nice battle fellas.

i vote for Quick Witted. i think he left upfont- outback. haha.

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Voted For: Quick Witted

Aiiight, witted got this...
ya structure wasnt as good on this witted, but thats cause its one of ya first battles, but u had better wordplay in this verse, some of the best ive seen from u...........
decent drop, nice mix of personals n punches, 8/10

upfront, ya flow was aight, not as decent as witted on the punches n personal side of the battle, ya finisher was siiiick tho, but ya other bars wasnt as consistant as witted, still a decent drop, finisher was your highlight, keep em comin yall

no hate

return the fave or i'ma e-slap yall (haha, jokes!)

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uppin uppin get dis kid anotha loss !!! nah but give an honest vote

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This was feedback posted for Quick Witted
 

scenario you clearly won but i cant vote cuz upfront will say im hate voting lol and upfront ill KO you scenario tell him i would scenario knows how good i am, upfront dont think i suck for my age i have beaten like 3 vets already and i mgith be beaten another one soon

Voted For: Quick Witted

Imma Give This To Scenario.......

Upfront: You Had Some Pretty Decent Punches. Im Afraid Ya Structure Messed Every Thing Up For Ya. I Couldn't Really Tell Where Ya Lines Started Or Finished. Really Hard To Read.
Which Meant Ya Flow Was Off Too. Decent Enough Punches But Hard To Read.

Scenario: Decent Structure.Real Nice Flow. Ya Had Some Pretty Nice Punches Here. I Can tell This Was One Of Ya Early Battles Coz Ya Improved Ya Wordplay And Structure Alot. Overall A Pretty Decent Verse Though.

Imma Have To Give It To Scenario Coz He Had Betta Flow And Structure.

Vote: Scenario