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Myth vs WildFire
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines Crew votes are aloud No Recycling No Biting Honest votes, and explained votes only g'luck man Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 10-17-04 at 11:01 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon..
battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven.. I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position.. I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition.. 3-0, thats a joke, you compulsivly spit lies and shit.. want proof? it says in dudes avy that this guys a myth.. Regardless of all that, I murder and Maul rats, and from good your the farthest.. Swallowin ex-lax and a gallon of margerine my shit still remains hardest.. with sadistic notions, I slit his wrists and tongue in a quick motion.. so he quits boastin, I freeze and chew mc's, than i spit foes and.. just so you guys know, this fag can't spit at all if his dicks frozen.. |
WildFire has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 11:56 PM.
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we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon..
battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven.. I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position.. I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition.. 3-0, thats a joke, you compulsivly spit lies and shit.. want proof? it says in dudes avy that this guys a myth.. Regardless of all that, I murder and Maul rats, and from good your the farthest.. Swallowin ex-lax and a gallon of margerine my shit still remains hardest.. with sadistic notions, I slit his wrists and tongue in a quick motion.. so he quits boastin, I freeze and chew mc's, than i spit foes and.. just so you guys know, this fag can't spit at all if his dicks frozen.. |
Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 11:57 PM.
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hey since you accepted this....decline the other one
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i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire
kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra i got a certain problem i'm "addicted" to ripping veterans and ya next * big words? u unable to pronounce em so i know u used a webster in ya text * ya structure is on and off like white and black keys on an "oregon" * let's let the rv heads compare us, they'd say ya pippen and i'm jordan u even said it ya self u ain't gonna be a rapper so fuck touring * drenching this "wildfire" out cause when it's raining it's pouring * an expanded vocabulary ain't shit if u don't know how to rhyme words periphial vision, is gone cause ya bars a horse and mine are the blinders wildfire couldn't elevate even if he tagged along with mountain climbers kid's really femine inside, occupation? he'll become a gay fashion designer u say u leave resin from smokin herbs, but u soft like wind to kites * this boys a fag he done blown on more dicks then smokers with newport lights all signs point to dope, lmao, boy u sweeter then caffine from coke or pepsi this mans a fag, he pmed me the other day saying that he thought i was sexy *an open mic of his *uses big words u in his spits *he's from oregon, oregon=organ *said in an open mic his life want lead him to rapping *his name *his member title |
not bad not bad at all...uppin uppin uppin........
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good shit wildfire, good shit, lol, we uppin in this
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Voted For: WildFire
myth ok good flow vocab and structure punches and disses were fucking wack as fuck they aint hit and gay jokes are hella played you need to elevate for real big words dont make a dope verse 3/10 ok wildfire structure needs help badly flow is a little off also vocab good good multus punches were not good but slightly harder this was weak both ways i think with better multis and slightly better punches you won this 4/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: WildFire
Wildfire: k you clearly had doper punchlines the best maybe on this site lol...dope ass vocabulary and nice wordplay this guys got the real way how to do it myth watch out hes a fiend at wordplay...lol nice punches liek i said flowed...stucture kinda fucked..but still hot verse ive seen better tho from you...8.8/10 Myth: k man that was weak streched verse all threw but it kinda flowed it wasent to much streched you need vocabulary badly i cant understand how im gettin it in there haha...some vocab tho not hard hitten onse like desinger weak try hard shit force people to look in the dictionary...lol its what i try to make people do... VOTE: Wildfire return the vote on my battle verse will a peer when the battles in my sig aight.. |
both those votes should be deleted cause empire's is a hate vote and me and x are in the same crew, i'll let strobe know
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why is i get the feeling of X voted for you...the crew vote wouldn't matter...lol....ah well tho..it doesn't matter..win or lose...good battle
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strobe has been notified of the votes, empire once again with another hate vote, it's a damn shame
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This was feedback posted for Myth
werd..... good verse fam..........................
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Voted For: Myth
aight tight battle guys i liked the overall flow and volcab of both verses nice wordplay and structure...punches were nice and i like the personals okay wildfire okay nice verse i was def feeling hte flow and wordplay nice volcab too... good punches and personals but you did a lot of self glorifying in the middle to the end of your verse i hate to see that a lil is alright but that was too much..it killed your drop even tho it was nice it just made me feel it less.work on that man..also some shit didnt make too much sense to me..but oyu had some nice multi's best line we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon.. battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven.. I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position.. I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition.. myth aight nice verse man i was feeling it all throughout and great personals...nice punches and flow was tight.....you stayed on topic pretty much...and i didnt see much selfglorifyin which is a plus cuz some is alright...liked the volcab and creativeness in the drop..nice best lines i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra wildfire couldn't elevate even if he tagged along with mountain climbers kid's really femine inside, occupation? he'll become a gay fashion designer u say u leave resin from smokin herbs, but u soft like wind to kites * this boys a fag he done blown on more dicks then smokers with newport lights all signs point to dope, lmao, boy u sweeter then caffine from coke or pepsi this mans a fag, he pmed me the other day saying that he thought i was sexy sick closer man nice v/myth |
uppin for honest votes, let's go people
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This was feedback posted for Myth
whoa *falls on face* sorry fell in whats up yall..
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Voted For: WildFire
Myth: i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra First line was straight, could've been a little more creative. Second line could've been taken 2 ways - either you're calling In-Vision a female or you talkin' bout how hot the bitches you get are... i got a certain problem i'm "addicted" to ripping veterans and ya next * big words? u unable to pronounce em so i know u used a webster in ya text * First line set it up good, but the punch just didn't seem all that hard to me. ya structure is on and off like white and black keys on an "oregon" * let's let the rv heads compare us, they'd say ya pippen and i'm jordan First line didn't make much sense to me, second line was self-glorification... u even said it ya self u ain't gonna be a rapper so fuck touring * drenching this "wildfire" out cause when it's raining it's pouring * This bar was good except for the very end, to make it better you could've substituted for "raining" an expanded vocabulary ain't shit if u don't know how to rhyme words periphial vision, is gone cause ya bars a horse and mine are the blinders Could've fit "horse" in there a little better, 'nuff said... wildfire couldn't elevate even if he tagged along with mountain climbers kid's really femine inside, occupation? he'll become a gay fashion designer Simple punch, gay concepts are played if stated blatenly... u say u leave resin from smokin herbs, but u soft like wind to kites * this boys a fag he done blown on more dicks then smokers with newport lights At first I thought this was a real dope bar, but then I realized you had it worded differently than I saw. If you said he's blown more "fags" than smokers with newport lights" you would've gotten mad props for wordplay, if you get that... all signs point to dope, lmao, boy u sweeter then caffine from coke or pepsi this mans a fag, he pmed me the other day saying that he thought i was sexy Once again, blatent gay lines are played... Wildfire: we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon.. battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven.. First line was just ok, but the punch made up for it, but overall the bar was average... I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position.. I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition.. Good use of vocab here, this kinda seemed like a filler bar but it was still good due to the rhyming and wordage. 3-0, thats a joke, you compulsivly spit lies and shit.. want proof? it says in dudes avy that this guys a myth.. Ok, it took me a lil' while to get this, but when I finally did it was a good punch, it was just a lil' over my head lol... Regardless of all that, I murder and Maul rats, and from good your the farthest.. Swallowin ex-lax and a gallon of margerine my shit still remains hardest.. First line was a good set-up, with a nice multi, and the punch was pretty good if you can decipher the wordplay... with sadistic notions, I slit his wrists and tongue in a quick motion.. so he quits boastin, I freeze and chew mc's, than i spit foes and.. just so you guys know, this fag can't spit at all if his dicks frozen.. Good multis in the first 2 lines, but the punch in the 2nd line didn't connect. And the 3rd line is what I was tellin' Myth about, this was a clever line at attacking someone's sexuality... Overall this was a mediocre battle, Myth you gotta work on those punches more, and try coming up with some wordplay, multis, etc. No hate, just givin' you some feedback. Wildfire, this wasn't as good as I've seen from you, but you still had some good stuff, your punches and wordplay took this one... V//Wildfire Return the favor to one of the links in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
Uppin For Honest Explained Votes Peeps
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myth if you realy want to know an explained vote um wildfire now in invision he straight merked you maybe not a KO but he merke you who cares if theres a hate vote you lost dawg..
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nobody "merked" anyone...uppin for votes..........
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This was feedback posted for Myth
uppin for more votes peeps, let's get some votes, this was a close one
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uppin for this peeps, lets get some votes in here
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uppin for more honest votes peeps, let's go
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uppin for votes folks..come on....................
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This was feedback posted for WildFire
just checkin' this battle out..............woot woot...
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uppin for more votes peeps, let's get some honest votes
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we uppin for honest explained votes peeps
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uppin............................................. .......
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uppin for votess................................../
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uppin for more votes peeps........................
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uppin for like the 5th time in a row.....................
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Voted For: Myth
both of you had a nice verse..both had hard punches than landed...Myth took tha structure tho..WF yo shit was stretched like whoa...but my vote goes to Myth for comin harder in his punches just barely... |
Voted For: WildFire
Myth- i got a certain problem i'm "addicted" to ripping veterans and ya next * big words? u unable to pronounce em so i know u used a webster in ya text * ^^best Line InV- I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position.. I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition.. ^^Good could have set up differently but it was aite 3-0, thats a joke, you compulsivly spit lies and shit.. want proof? it says in dudes avy that this guys a myth.. ^^personal well used.... V/InV |
This was feedback posted for WildFire
checking polls...
checking polls... checking polls... |
This was feedback posted for Myth
old ass battle.............ill give ya an up on it.................good by both
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This was feedback posted for Myth
just peepin this old ass battle
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Voted For: Myth
in-vision you had a alrite flow to your rap opener was kinda weak content was regular stuff "this guys a myth" wasnt so great of a punch you focus of cutting the tongue twice too which threw me off. give ya verse a 2.5/5 Myth you came a little better looked like you put a more work into yours, best part of your verse was your opener. i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra i got a certain problem i'm "addicted" to ripping veterans and ya next * big words? u unable to pronounce em so i know u used a webster in ya text nice verse 3.4/5 you had stronger punches but come harder next time round. |
uppin for votes..neea get this shit closed...........
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