Potential (For Kids Who Need Elevation w/ Potential)
 

i got potential but i need alittle elevation.

LoL, alrite.. but u must be active iight????

well i'm active.

lol..iight, but keep battlin non stop also cuz thats wut will help u elevate alot

ok but i might lose some and win some but i wanna pick my offenderz right. dont wanna pick the wrong people.

ayo...i guess ill try out....i wanted to be in the regular forum as The "God of Vocab"....but no one is posting a yes or no...

aight i mind check my new battle wit logistic thats aanother dope verse.

i got potential, but im in 50th Brigade and im workin on a side crew.... i could drop the side crew, but u gotta understand, im only usin this 4 practice.... prolly aint stayin here 4ever... ima just drop my verse of my open mic. its longer than 10 lines, but fuck it....

now im not normally a violent person, unless u give me a reaspn/
but if u pop shit about me, ill shoot u, even if bitch aint in season/
so just cause im a woman dont mean i cant b violent/
in such a sick world, multiple gunshots wont even make media silent/
its like murder is a game, like a sport or a hobby/
hundreds of ppl git killed everyday, but my song aint about 2 git sobby/
i aint tryin 2 preach, i got 2 much of a backround/
but in my case, if rappin effects were like wrestlin, my lyrics a smackdown/
ive been thru tough times, haters hatin my shit/
drugs, sex, and violence, emotional relationships/
bitch u know im talkin bout u, so dont fuckin deny it/
my records out n exposed, so u cant just hide my shit/
u raped me bitch, made me pay 4 my own abortion 2/
but u aint gittin away with this im out 2 torture u/
who woulda known id grow up 2 b such a lyrical genius/
date such a fag, slice off both balls from his penis/
dangle his dick right in front of his face (ha ha!)/
am i suckin hard enough now?! blast fuckin semen all over the place/
cmon, bitch, wanna take advatnage of me now? grab my chest and use me 4 sex/
well i guess i aint got a choice, im 2 high 2 fight back, i knew i shoulda refused that X/
cause i hate u, y the fuck did i date u?/
i should rape u, all iwanted was a thank u/
i did so much shit for u, u never took the time for a glance/
that bitch swingin her thong up in ur face, the hos got u in trance/
do i not mean shit 2 u? i thought that we were sumthin?/
but im stuck another night at home, naked, watchin ur body humpin/
im sick of bein white trash, its time 2 make a come back/
u gonna git ur nuts cracked, im more than just a big rack, boy ima make ur guts clap/
squirtin outta ur mouth, unless u watch the shit u speakin/
im cut all ur limbs off, we aint even close 2 the weekend/
so watch wut u say, else ur out 4 a bitch smack/
think im playin around, but u better just watch yo back!!!

holla when u reached a conclusion

damn girl nice wordplay but fuck no flow shit.

its a rough draft, i aint finished editing. i still need a chorus and bout 2 more verses, so im workin....

aight coo coo. shit check this.


people bite my rhymes all the fuckin time/
you versin me is a suicide sign/
girls love me they never ever decline/
thats a flow perfect three baar line. lol its dope right.

ah.............

ill just b nice and say "why yes"

well i'll jus be nice and say it was. it had flow i was givin youu an example.

ok.... but u still gots 2 work on ya wordpaly. boring shit.... 2 basic in my opinion

wordplay got it.

lol..everyone is in that tried out :) but plz work on structure n flow :) n vocab :) n everything :)

alright hey imind you got a raapper leets have a round.

lol, alrite!!! next time though like tomorrow k???

who ever has aim im me...

aim: six five oe

alright but i needa learn how to fight. some fight my rapper.

yo, 4git it.... im stayin with 1 crew and thats 50th Brigade.... im gittin sum coachin, but i thought about it, and i need 2 b more loyal.

this is aa crew oh thought it was a elevatin center but what the hell. i'm elevatin. hey evyon lets fight wit rapperz.

i aint got 1.... truthfully... im clueless on that whole shit....im stickin with real text battles:)

uhm okay shit. well i gotta be patient.

okay.....................................
goodbye

helllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooo

sry just needded my 500th post

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Evyon thats free posting.

lol..it doesn't matter..this forum doesn't uppin ur posts lol

hmmm okay. damn no onez votin on my battlez.

i JUST NEED 1 MORE VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please vote the battle in my sig. the favor WILL b returned:):D

uppin try outs uppin try outs uppin try outs

Yo this is the verse i posted fo' my battle against LyricleSolja......Just a quick keystyle....

My Lyrics Descending, Renderin' You Defensless.....
Pressure mountin on ya Cranium-Ya mind gettin Restless.....
Foolin ya Lyrical Devices wit Stealth and Camoflauge.......
Hazardous to Herbs Health-Hittin ya wit Lyrical Volleys n' a Barrage.....
I Collide wit ya Rhymes but mine Dominate...
Create a Body count at a Phenominal Rate.....
LyricleSolja Minds been Fractured and Shattered nuttin left to Obliterate....
Cast this Fool into Eternal Rest This Herbs Just Sealed his own Fate.....
Ya rhymes are timed-bad just like Premature Ejaculation......
The onli time ya get "Hot" is from the friction on ya hand of u Masterbatin.....

dman that's fuck up dude

Scrape out^.......

heres one from me I.Mind i'm doin good right?


you suck you fuckin dog and i'll throw you in a pitt/
bring you down and spit in ur face and say you aint shit/
you cant battle for shit cuz bitch you aint fitt/
you wont spit because you too afraid to get hit/
you aint got no ballz to battle me you shook/
you kno you suck so why you call out Snook /
come against me fo sho bitch you'll get cooked/
when you yell your so unknown no one will look/
your another loser in my hand book/
dawg get outta here kick in the ass with my foot/
you aint shit but a mutha fuckin pussy/
you still suck and you still a duck suckin rookie/
your skillz will never fuckin grow/
i'll give you aa lost bitch you kno/
llok i drooped you didnt bitch i'm done with this hoe/

lol. mines BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i been practicing multi's 4 a new song im writing... here's a sneak:

"cause of my criminal thoughts, many young lives r wrought/
a few hits of marijuana and another kid ends up shot/
an innocent life lost, government looks at us cross/
blaimin it on the music and we pay the cost"

AND

"they say all my music is just disrespectin/
and yet im creating millions of hits per second/
they disapprove my opinion cause im an adolecent/
but if u listen closly, i really teach a lesson"

AND FINALLY

"dont go minglin in2 places when no1 wants u/
or else all our industry gon burn like hot glue/
im aimin this all at the Bush administration/
media's interrigation/
this whole fucking generation"
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the last was kinda weak, but tell me wut u think. its political, so..

i think ur rhymes are too simple.
try to make summin better than this. this is tupacz rhyme and try to rhyme like this.
I was born a rebel
makin trouble for the devil
takin this gang bangin ish
to a whole nother level.

damn he is so ill.

"you suck you fuckin dog and i'll throw you in a pitt/"

I'M basic?