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kon-vex vs sabotage
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no bullshit Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 11-15-04 at 01:47 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed.. forfeit |
sup bro, good luck man...... no hate for this battle k
good luck |
you accepting bro????
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umm i guess so..........
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sweet as...... ill drop about 14 too then
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can you please accept so that i can assure you in!
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sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 05:51 AM.
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kon-vex has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 04:49 PM.
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Im skilled in this game u just a poor rookie
They say you are what you eat..no wonder you devour pussy Im dissin you non stop I belong in the hater club Thinks he’s a con-vicks(kon-vex) cause he jacked a tub of vapor rub* Periodically line after line Kon’s gonna beat me? Naw, its all in your mind** Im beating u forever like they sayin that times broke The only time youre ever up is when youre waiting on votes I got ho’s cause kid I jus pop and go Kon’s seen more de-feats than Dr.Scholls Ur flow is only sprinkling mine stays thundering What more do I have to do? Youre already under me*** *vicks vapor rub **in his sig ***he lives in New Zealand and its under The U.S good luck............. |
already dropped homey..............................
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mmmmmm, ill drop soon.... got some other battles to do ok
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droping 14.... think you dropped the same
This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch “Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego “The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego Another council member… must be their worst employee Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest |
i thought you were doing 14? o well.... uppin for some votes!
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nice verse man...............
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Voted For: sabotage
not to good of a battle honestly konvex- your structure is good but seemed to be to much of your focal point everything lacked to me punchs and personals didnt hit very hard some didnt even really connect to me your wordplay was there in some parts it was decent when u spit it fuck what else um it was all basic even with bold words nothin really stood out to me <<< tight punch an this is just feedback lol just keep workin with wordplay and better punchs to connect sabotage-decent verse overall played opener and pretty weak closer i thought your flow was good i thought the seperation of your bars is wierd though just a pretty basic verse though not much really stood out here either work on some more wordplay like u had with the vicks line i think sabotage edged this out |
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alright thanks.......
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aight this thing is actin all fucked up, wont let me vote for some reason but imma break it down for yall right quick any way... decent battle...
Sabatoge- Good flow, liked ya verse. structure was off. punches and personals were there and hit pretty well in most places, lack of multis but thats aight. good wordplay and creativity. overall ill admitt ive seen better from you but you had a solid verse 6/10 Konvex- you came pretty good. good flow, structure was iffy, punches and personals hit ok but could have come better. wordplay was pretty good and it was semi creative. i liked the verse as a whole but the punches and personals lost it for you homie, no hate tho 5/10 good battle... no hate to konvex but sabatoge won this |
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Voted For: kon-vex
Sabotage Im skilled in this game u just a poor rookie They say you are what you eat..no wonder you devour pussy ^ Already seen a you are what you eat bar today Im dissin you non stop I belong in the hater club Thinks he’s a con-vicks(kon-vex) cause he jacked a tub of vapor rub* ^ punch weak really nothing special in it Periodically line after line Kon’s gonna beat me? Naw, its all in your mind** ^ blah Im beating u forever like they sayin that times broke The only time youre ever up is when youre waiting on votes ^ 2nd line aight but 1st line self-glory I got ho’s cause kid I jus pop and go Kon’s seen more de-feats than Dr.Scholls ^ Defeat lines are played and again self-glory 1st line Ur flow is only sprinkling mine stays thundering What more do I have to do? Youre already under me ^ self-glory closer but if worded different...woulda been dope punch Kon-vex This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness ^ weak rhyme but aight opener He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage ^ ??? that could be a glorification bar to him...no real diss there He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch ^ lol good bar there nice punch “Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me ^ LOL however a lil self-g but that made me laugh Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego “The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego ^ nice punch...but it don't rhyme Another council member… must be their worst employee Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me ^ Personal needs backing up but good bar Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest ^ Aight closer again coulda been better Overall Average battle but had some aight punches no real complex wordplay that stood out but not a wack battle...however it was 1 sided Sabotage u do need to elevate more try and stay off the self-glory track and work on ya flow and structure some more...Kon-vex nice verse 1 bar had no rhyme and the other had a weak rhyme but other than that it was an aight verse dope flow and deent structure...keep em comin V/Kon-vex RTF in ma sig |
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