A.K.A. vs Marshall Law
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-07-04 at 06:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 07:00 PM.

yo i'm waiting on you to check in so we can get it on

Marshall Law has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 12:20 AM.

your rhymes is like your name i'ma break them
just cause you got his name don't mean you as good as em
I'ma take the tag off your shirt and put it on your toe
bullets kinda like your ma with the way they blow
you better watch cause i'm not the one you wanna hurt
but try and you'll be sleeping wit a blacket made of dirt
you can't rap so i say fuck u and your old alias too
i rap a bandana around my fist so all you see is blue
i got a butcher knife that will slit your wrist
big hole so u gonna cover it wit more then a bracelet

Watch me slit his throat while this idiot waits and flosses,
Cause someone once told me I needed to cut my losses.
Tired of talk- so I'm bringing the hammer to nail this whiz
... So he's got me killing in the name; of all his aliases.
Told him he was spoiled, and he started to look down south,
Making my dick the smartest thing to come out of his mouth.
Don't front with me, cause I know you're really not tough,
...Hell you're so god damn poor- I can't even call your bluff.
So when I flip scripts, you'll never catch my mentallity...
Trying to grab my concepts, when you can't grasp reality.

ok they both in so start voting ya'll. you no how it works

uppin come on ya'll. this is an easy one..........

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

nice nice.....i'm checkin tha polls...nice seeing what ya doing....keek um coming

Nice as in I tore you a new asshole?

think what you want but i'm still only shiting out of one hole

Voted For: A.K.A.

well.... i think that marshall law's lines were mad played... i mean dick lines are sooo old. AKA had a few good punches, but both of you guys need to elevate, Fast!!!!!! haha nice battle. both good punches. honest vote...

^ Sometimes I forget why I quit this site months ago, and people like you were the biggest factor in that decision. I gaurentee that you didn't understand any of my punches, seeing as that would show the slightest bit of intellegence. Looking back I am guessing you're borderline retarded. He used gun punches? Yet you ignored them. A.K.A didn't use one piece of wordplay.

Fuck it... I don't even care anymore....

I'll wait till you get the win, so I can leave this god forsaken piece of shit. And go out and make real music, while you type out text verses. Good luck getting signed asshole.

Voted For: Marshall Law

easy choice here....aka ya punches were weak in comparison
marshall law took this shit in all cats...
jus better all around verse...ive seen ya concepts b4 on rb but its still better then what aka dropped....

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Iamuppingthisthread.

are you kidding me. damn leave and stay gone i hate cat like you who hate on everyone who votes asgainst him

Voted For: Marshall Law

open: ML ( I liked it a lot)
close: AKA ( Nice punch)
personals: ML (The beggining)
metas: Uhmmmm both
punches: AKA
multis: None

win: ML

ML had better vocab and harder hitting punches...I like his overall anyway..

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Voted For: A.K.A.

iight i give my vote to--- A.K.A.
BOTH were pretty good I jus' had to give it to AKA because he's word play was a lil better this time. Structure was pretty good for the both of you. I do have to say the other guys vocb was a lil better then AKA's though. So bascily I based mine along the lines of the better verse and how it flowed, and thats why i made me choice. I gave AKA a 9/10 and Marshall a 8.8/10.

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Voted For: A.K.A.

aight yall good battle here.... breakdown:

AKA... good verse dawg.. flow was good, structure was ok even tho one of ya lines was a bit on the stretched side... punches hit pretty well but the personals were pretty much on lock! for a little 10liner this was a good verse, creative and to the point, would have liked to see some multis tho.......
6/10

Marshal.... aight ya verse was ok too, flow was off in some points but was ok for the most part, structure needs work, needs to be evend out.... punches and personals hit but some didnt hit hard enough, creativity was aight... again would have prefered to see some multis but overall 4.5/10

aight yall good battle from both of yall but AKA takes this one... no hate to marshal just elevate and you will get there........

VOTE- AKA............

That's because the votes are ridicolous. No one seems to know how to vote on this site and it baffles me. But yea, I'm gone.. so good luck putting out your text album faggot.

Voted For: Marshall Law

man i gotta give u da vote it was hard to say who won but u had betta punches ya flow was betta and u came out good...dont get me wrong cause A.K.A did do pretty good to but i had to give it to u...holla

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just cause i do text don't mean i don't rap either i have you no that i am making my cd so bitch you'll see me

Okay, let's hear you drop an audio? Exactly.

no doubt i'ma drop one soon please belive. but wait i don't see your audio record up? what going on

Voted For: A.K.A.

yo i gotta give htis one to AKA he came harder with personals and some punches....... you came harder, and i was feelin your verse more........ nice job keep it up

fav. line : you can't rap so i say fuck u and your old alias too
i rap a bandana around my fist so all you see is blue

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uppin for this win son. 1 more ya'll gte it on the board

vote.............................................. ....

Voted For: Marshall Law

aiyo this battle overall waz blah i hope these were free verses
the second guy barley even ryhmed at all..u need to wurk on
ya dropps mos def...u had no good punches...no multis...
shit u diddnt have a single line i waz fellin personally...Marshall dont get to happy tho' u werent all that
good the only reason im even voting iz cuz u had one sumwat
hardhitter....so vote for =marshal...cuz aka waz str8 simple
in every aspecct.....

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This was feedback posted for Marshall Law
 

this was pure murder.....I already belive I voted on marshall w/ another name because he came hard w/ all the punches and actually attepmted commin dope

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

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This was feedback posted for Marshall Law
 

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don't give gay feedback just vote i only need one more

vote.............................................. ........

Sorry, I don't do rap music... I play drums in a rock band. Regaurdless I am still making real music, that people can hear- not read.

Anyway, Lol@ deleting all of my votes. This site can fuck off, cause you're all too busy running around sucking each others cocks for votes, and not even doing it discretly.

come on ya'll vote it up i need on more is it that hard?

^ Whose dick did you suck to have my votes deleted.

Voted For: A.K.A.

Watch me slit his throat while this idiot waits and flosses,
Cause someone once told me I needed to cut my losses.
Tired of talk- so I'm bringing the hammer to nail this whiz
... So he's got me killing in the name; of all his aliases.
Told him he was spoiled, and he started to look down south,
Making my dick the smartest thing to come out of his mouth.
Don't front with me, cause I know you're really not tough,
...Hell you're so god damn poor- I can't even call your bluff.
So when I flip scripts, you'll never catch my mentallity...
Trying to grab my concepts, when you can't grasp reality.
^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT, GOOD FLOW, OK PUNCHES SOME WERE PLAYED, SOME WERE GOOD, I LIKED THE WAY U USE PERSONALS (TALKED ABOUT HIS ALISAS)
KEEP IT UP FAM



your rhymes is like your name i'ma break them
just cause you got his name don't mean you as good as em
I'ma take the tag off your shirt and put it on your toe
bullets kinda like your ma with the way they blow
you better watch cause i'm not the one you wanna hurt
but try and you'll be sleeping wit a blacket made of dirt
you can't rap so i say fuck u and your old alias too
i rap a bandana around my fist so all you see is blue
i got a butcher knife that will slit your wrist
big hole so u gonna cover it wit more then a bracelet
^^ GOOD FLOW^^ DIDNT SENSE ANY PERSONALS ^^ PUNCHES WERE KINDA HARD BUT IT WAS AIIIGHT


BOTH OF YOU NEEDS TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES....FLOW GOOD FROM BOTH SIDES,,,PERSONALS,,,,,GOOD FROM BOTH SIDES....DIS WASNT AN GOOD BATTLE,,,BUT I GOTS TO VOTE WHO HAD NON-MOST PLAYED OUT PUNCHES AND THAT IS AKA HIS PUNCHES WERE KINDA HARD AND YOUR PUNCHES LAW WAS KINDA PLAYED OUT

BOTH OF YOU ELEVATE ON PUNCHES WERD

This was feedback posted for Marshall Law
 

checking votes....................................

ok voting this back up 2 more left......................

Voted For: A.K.A.

Marshall Law
decent punches, nice structure
vocab was good, flow was aight
didn't see no wp from you, overall
ur drop wasn't good..yo punches didnt
make no sense..especially the 2nd line...

A.K.A.
decent drop, punches were hard-hittin
structure was blah, flow was aight..and
ur vocab was aight..decent wp...overall
decent drop..could've came harder tho
but u took this win..

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