Legend vs J~FOUR
 

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6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
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Closed - Expired / old battle win

J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 08:43 PM.

Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 08:47 PM.

Shit. I've never used this verse in a battle. So I use it now. :D

ooooo eeeeee...... goood drop mang.. i like the i didnt use this verse line.. lol bitch.. jp.. good drop fam.. ~1~

lol. Yeah joker. lol. Uhm. Yeah uppyn this shit...

yo people uppyn...................................

Voted For: Legend

Aight this was a ok battle...Structure goes to Legend Im feelin his style on dis one...Punches where weak from both so I say it was a tie with that topic..Flow goes to J4..Vocab goes to legend he kept it down and good..J4 had decent vocab..Personals was a tie...Multis N metas was lackin on both sides so i tied that up

Structure-Legend
Punches-Tie
Flow-J4
Vocab-Legend
Personals-tie
Multis-Tie
Metas-tie

overall this was close but i give it to Legend

V/legend

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Voted For: J~FOUR

aii this is how i feel

Legend
I Liked your veres ya structure was nice but you came very weak on punchez..............thats something i think you should work on and personals bcuz you seriously lack the use of good punchez ad personals....

J~FOUR
I Like your verse you came decent wit some punchez and flows but your Multi's were weak and some other things were lacked but other than that yo veres was ok and thats why you get my verse
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* but plz do im askin as a favor plz do return the favor....peace************************************

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thanx for an honest vote. Uppyn......................

will the Favor Be Returned?.,bcuz i need the favor so plz return it

^^stop beggin let da nigka decide if he wantz to lol...If you do return da favor my link is in da post

Uppyn.............................................

Voted For: J~FOUR

i wuz looking forward to this battle...damn, legend you shoodve came harder mayne...j~four took this one
heres a lil breakdown
opener:tie
multies:j
punches:j
vocab:j
closer:j

j-good verse, nice multies...also had real good wordplay, and sum nice punches too...i didnt see anything that needed major improvement

legend-couldve came lot harder...had a few good punches but not enuff, also couldve improved on the vocab...needed some multies in your verse cuz it had none...no hate, but this might be one of your wackest battle verses that you've spit on this site

both-both people coodve improved their openers...but thats about the only thing, that "both" could improve on

lol....dont think i voted for j~four cuz randy orton is from stl, and i love wrestling...lmao

v/j~four

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oh yeah...plz return tha favor.....links are in sig........~1~

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Voted For: J~FOUR

vote for J~Four
vocab=j~four
punches=j-four
metas=j~four
overall this was a land slide battle
favorite lines
Ya think you gonna win? must be the coke-you-snortin
Cause, I stay "killen legends" like ~Randy Orton~
Important, when your crew is you.. the-whole-portion
Cause I'm "killing New Breed" like a ~species-abortion~
Ya mind-distortin', leavin ya "thoughts all mangled"
Cause My "punches more direct" than ~T.V. Cable~
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Voted For: Legend

Legend
Vocabulary Was Decent, Had Some Nice Punches That I Enjoyed, Structure Was Neat,What Was A Down Fall Was Multi's You Could Use A Little Of That, And Throw In Some Meta's..But OverAll Nice Verse Man....8/10

Four
Wow You Had Good Punches And Ish But Your Vocabulary Was Plain Old Basic And You Had No Rhyme Scheme Not multi's Nor Meta's Personals Was Good But Could Of Done A Better Job On That

Structure=Tie
Vocabulary=Legend
Meta's=Legend
Multi's=None
Punches=Tie

Vote=Legend..Return The Favor Man, Link In Sig

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Uppyn. Dayum I'll return da favor.................

Uppyn this shyt...................................

Uppyn thys shyt...................................

Voted For: J~FOUR

Legend
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

J~Four
structure is good.. flow is on target.. a lot of multis.. wordplay was dope.. some of ur punches connected.. good personal..

Overall
both had a good structure and flow.. J~Four had more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. J~Four gets my vote..

VOTE - J~FOUR

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lol. Uppyn thys shyt..............................

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Voted For: Legend

word ur shyt was better by a bit Jfour had better structure and flow but u had better punches ad vocabulary.....so i say u get this by a bit....

legend word of advice...shorten ur lines mayn its beginning to look ugly as heyll LOL. word...and do u take time to colour each line black and grey? lol

J Four: good structure but the rest was blah.....ur punches was aiight and personals was decent

vote: legend

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Voted For: J~FOUR

Your shit was ok. U shouldve explained ur rymes after the verse. it would sounded 10x better that way. Ur flow was good and u kept direct wit ur punches. metaphores werent all that but It was ok. ok word play.
punch. j4
meta.j4
flow. j4
word. J4
overall verse j4

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Voted For: J~FOUR

this was a very close battle but in the end J~Four got this simply becouse his metas were so nice i liked that Randy Orton Legend Killer Line keep doin ya thang both of ya

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Fucking pussies vote right. Uppyn this............

Voted For: J~FOUR

ok legend punches were weak and disswes too you really need to work on those flow and struture was good vocab also pretty decent too but your weak punches and disses hurt you bad practice those.
j four good flow very good and struture also nice punches and disses won you this they were dope cuz the flow helped thm as well as good personals here too which was nice also won you this hands down

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Voted For: Legend

legend got this his personals were better his flow hit harder punches were nice everything was jus a step better than j-four but either way good shit both of ya jus go get ur shit critiqued it will help alot good shit
legends favorite lines:
You the Champion of being whack without having to snatch the belt
Not that active but you social bitch just like Miss Roosevelt
I'm off the hook little fishy. You lost in my ocean just like Nemo
my votes get approved and your just stay gets alot of being veto’d
return tha favor on batlle vs top spit
thx

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Voted For: J~FOUR

Legend you came as if u werent focused in this battle
you need 2 work on your punches alot more kid
ive seen some of your other battles and dont focus
so much on havein diff colored barz...focus on ya punches
ya similies werent there.ya wordplay was basic
ya setup and delivery were basic..i understood wha u was tryin
2 say but u could of came alot more edgy and direct...work on ya metas and multis..and setting up a punch...jus dont use words 2 fill in or 2 rhyme with

Four
this is the 1st drop ive seen from u son..let me state
dont worry bout all those dashes and bold letters and shit
that dont mean nuttin ..jus drop ya bars and get tha shit ova
this was an ok drop..u won in my eyes wit ya punches
some were kinda played but there were aight
ya opener and middle was good but ya closer was pure garbage
could of been re worded..work on ya set ups and delivery and metas and multies

overall aight battle boyz..but i wanna see better next time

*Nuff Said*

Voted For: J~FOUR

While ya squeeze dicks for cum emcees is who I’m stranglin
While my rhymes give ya a shock like the kite and Ben Franklin
decent punch…
You the Champion of being whack without having to snatch the belt
Not that active but you social bitch just like Miss Roosevelt
didn’t understand this punch here
I'm off the hook little fishy. You lost in my ocean just like Nemo
my votes get approved and your just stay gets alot of being veto’d
no
man admit it you are wack. You’ll never fit in not even here
You suck dick for four and we all can see that is so clear
pretty decent punch
Your life is history goin against me nigka. Don't be so afraid
I mean they're are some verses in this world that are even more played
decent closer

Ya think you gonna win? must be the coke-you-snortin
Cause, I stay "killen legends" like ~Randy Orton~
no
Important, when your crew is you.. the-whole-portion
Cause I'm "killing New Breed" like a ~species-abortion~
pretty decent punch, it landed here
Ya mind-distortin', leavin ya "thoughts all mangled"
Cause My "punches more direct" than ~T.V. Cable~
kinda don’t rhyme but decent anyway
Legend, You Got "Disabled flow" Like "Amputated Dicks"
Cause i always "take out the trash".. them ~overatted pricks~
good closer

Overall both had good drops
Punches – J~FOUR took them…came way harder wit them
Flow – both had good flows, none was choppy
Structure – both had good structures…both in place and not stretched

But overall J~FOUR came harder in this piece though just by a hair…

No hate

ok ok..... Uppyn this. I want it closed...........

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Voted For: J~FOUR

punches - j4
persnals - j4
struck - j4 (legend ur lines were streched as fuck)
mutis - none
metals - none

j4 came hard with punches and persnals close battle but he get my vote.............legend u was ok not as hard coming though both keep elevating.............