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d.j em sce vs KO-Cain
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15-20 lnes No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting TOPICAL...... TOPIC is FALLLING IN LOVE Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 02-06-05 at 03:33 AM Must drop verse in 777777 minutes after check in. |
d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 03:57 AM.
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KO-Cain has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 04:14 AM.
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Topic: "Falling in love" Damn; so much commotion in the streets these days.. Peoples deceitful ways, crime waves, believe it pays.. But see the face, of victems, brought up in disgrace.. Fucking the place, up for most, but loving the waste.. They leave upon us.....Honestly I really dont need.. To see my people get a little cash, then pack up & leave.. I love the streets; and in turn the streets love me.. My community, my hood, how good can this be..? I'd never retreat; even in the darkest of days.. Tomorrows gonna be bright, its never stuck in a phase.. Fuck it.. I know sometimes you get a little depressed.. But baby, its all culture, were just living a test.. Thats brings the best, out of us, at times the worst.. Were dying to burst, out of our shells, crying at first.. Then realising, were strong, systems can never kill us.. They may of evicted us, but they wont take our spirits.. The way you feel this, rhyme can be compleatly different.. Its just a figment, so specifics, its all from...with-in.. Dont give in, ambition is the key to success.. Never stress, cause those who love life, strive to be the best.. And thats word.. All these mutha fuckas out there.. Act like they know how the game is.. Dont get it twisted.. Even in the darkest days.. Just keep your eyes on where your headed.. You CAN make it.. PEACE. |
Topic: "Falling in love" Damn; so much commotion in the streets these days.. Peoples deceitful ways, crime waves, believe it pays.. But see the face, of victems, brought up in disgrace.. Fucking the place, up for most, but loving the waste.. They leave upon us.....Honestly I really dont need.. To see my people get a little cash, then pack up & leave.. I love the streets; and in turn the streets love me.. My community, my hood, how good can this be..? I'd never retreat; even in the darkest of days.. Tomorrows gonna be bright, its never stuck in a phase.. Fuck it.. I know sometimes you get a little depressed.. But baby, its all culture, were just living a test.. Thats brings the best, out of us, at times the worst.. Were dying to burst, out of our shells, crying at first.. Then realising, were strong, systems can never kill us.. They may of evicted us, but they wont take our spirits.. The way you feel this, rhyme can be compleatly different.. Its just a figment, so specifics, its all from...with-in.. Dont give in, ambition is the key to success.. Never stress, cause those who love life, strive to be the best.. And thats word.. All these mutha fuckas out there.. Act like they know how the game is.. Dont get it twisted.. Even in the darkest days.. Just keep your eyes on where your headed.. You CAN make it.. PEACE. |
Fucker.. lol.. You can see my verse.. :nono: .......................................
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i will drop mines tonite.......................................
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Well hurry up because you have the advantage now of reading my verse..
So dont be bitch and take ages to write.. |
Dude.. People cant see/vote on this untill you post your verse in the actual place for posting your verse..
You do realse that right? |
THIS WAS ORIGINALLY WRIITEN FROM A FAMOUS MAN NAMED SEAN FLORES
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i put it in a QUOTE for some creativity....now vote |
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This was feedback posted for KO-Cain
nice battle gud drop yo stay up.....i think u can pull this out witta win
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This was feedback posted for KO-Cain
crazy hot....
simply amazing.... shit was fire and im loving it.... code steel......... |
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
^^^UPPIN" FOR LEGIT VOTES Y'ALL!!! DONT SLEEP!!!
BOOST THE CRHYME RATE!!! s.v. |
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d.j em sce Middle Weight d.j em sce's Avatar Posts: 3,032 Joined: Feb 2004 From: sacramento Status: Online Text Record: 46-11 Audio Record: 7-2 Graphics Record: 0-0 d.j em sce vs KO-Cain IP: 1B2F 201A Battle Rules: 15-20 lnes No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting TOPICAL...... TOPIC is FALLLING IN LOVE |
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point being...^^^^^^lol....it was me being lazy and i just copied anything and paisted it./...
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Look this is really shit.. No one has voted in days.. What the fuck is with this.. |
Voted For: KO-Cain
d.j em sce: loved your approach on the topic, found good balance between basic and complex vocab. Emotion was strong, nice imagery... Because she was the culture and I was a master of ceremony But until we finally meet in matrimony, I will forever be lonely ^favo lines Flow was decent (might be improved with multis), you stayed consistent throughout the whole thing,kept me focussed...good job for sure! KO-Cain: very strong topical,loved your twist on the topic.Had your flow and vocab on lock,good multis here and there...Not too muhc imagery with the "down to earth"-attitude which I was definately feeling. Absolutely loved your ending,had inspiring vibe over it and the emotion was raw. Solid drop! My vote goes to KO-Cain (no hate d.j em sce) 'cause I was feeling his drop a little more,especially the sense of reality and raw emotion to it. Was close and strong topical battle DQ |
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Voted For: KO-Cain
pretty good battle i gotta go wit ko cain though his imaginary was good flow was mostly on point vocab was alright but bottom line is he got his story across clear an effectively nice read dj em sce shit was decent i just thought you coulda put some different words in their to make the story come across clearer nah mean structures were both good so good battle juts gotta go wit ko cain was feelin his verse....vote-Ko cain |
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Voted For: d.j em sce
i was feelin DJ's drop more. I think he came harder in this one, and played well with tha topic, AND STAYED ON TOPIC THRUOUT THA WHOLE VERSE. KO-yo had a nice verse. but overall i wasnt feelin it homie. u started off clean, it was nice, and creative, and even unexpected, but then after a bar or 2, u just changed yo whole style up, and started to drift off topic. after tha first couple barz, i started to get uninterested, and bored. i think u should work on comin more consistent, but this wasnt tha worst drop i've seen b4, thats why i think this was a pretty good battle. DJ-yo verse was amazin, and interesting. i think u stuck to tha topic way better, and that means a lot in topical battles. i think u came w/ more creativitie, and originailty, but i think u kinda tried too hard on that, but its coo. i also think u came more consistent in this one. yo started off dope, and stayed that way thruout yo whole verse, and that said alot. u even showed more emotion, and character in this one, thats why i had to give u tha vote. overall- this battle was rather close, but i think DJ came out on top in this one. no hate KO, just elevate a lil more family, and come harder next time. DJ u could also elevate a lil..NO HATE, yall came hard in this one.. intro-KO Rhyme-DJ Creativeness-DJ topic-DJ STRUCTURE-KO style-KO closer-DJ v/DJ PLZ RTF ON ONE OF THA BATTLE LINKS IN SIG, AND MAKE IT XPLAINED, CAUSE I TOOK MY TIME OUT TO VOTE ON YALL BATTLE...SHOW SOME RESPECT ~1~ |
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W/e.. Uppin for more votes...... |
Voted For: KO-Cain
Ko-Cain... I like the way you approached this topic, not a way anyone else would approach it... So 10/10 on creativitie... But your shit was crazy with multies as well, which in my opinion, makes it easy to read... Also, your lines werent short, but they werent stretched, which i like... Good emotion and imagery... Overall... 96/100... DJ... I didnt like the way you approached it, i mean, your topical was by no mean bad... But you approached like anyone else would... I felt more emotion in your verse, it just lacked creativite... 84/100... V/Ko-Cain |
^^^fuck you bitch....lol j/k thanks for the feedback.....man i feel ya...i wrote that verse in like 10 minutes if even...but yo
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yo, KO...no hate...and DJ, u better RTF that shit bitch.....
uppin this shit for yall... |
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