OneStepBeyond vs KiNg SoLo
 

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No Recycling
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Check in by: 03-20-05 at 11:57 AM

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KiNg SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 11:27 AM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 11:54 AM.

Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?


*it says From: Da U.K. ***** Status: Back from the grave!!
**kings rule in monarchy's and america is a democracy... well its a representive republic but everyone says its a democracy

that was just some quick shit

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

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This was feedback posted for KiNg SoLo
 

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This was feedback posted for KiNg SoLo
 

checkin polls ^^^^^^^^^nice verse^^^^^^^^^

wheres the votes at?..............................

tru that man
got all the ppl checkin the battle but no one is votin

i understand mista authentiq cuz we in the same crew

but everyone else, y'all need to vote on this hot shit
favour will be returned by myself and OneStep

peep this shit mayne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

checkin the polls...close one, but on tha real. i feel KS is too weak to have that record.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

This was a close one to me, but I had to give it to 1step, because I feel he came a lil bit harder, and more prepared in this one. 1step had the harder punches to me, and better wordplay. He played off the personals well, and his personals didnt even need links, thats what I liked about his verse. Only thing is, I felt that your verse didnt flow well, but other than that, I felt you came with more consistency in this one.
KS-yo verse was ight to me, but I wasnt feelin it from start to finish like I was wit 1step. You had better structure, but I dont think you came harder with punches. I think you lacked good wordplay and vocab in this one, but ur whole verse wasnt bad to me. Yo verse flowed better because of your structure. I think you should work on your personals. Links are old, if you cant make a good diss personal w/out links, it wasnt meant to be put in yo verse. I dont even think anyone clicks on them links anymore, but NO HATE, good drop, I just dont think you took this one.
Overall-A close battle in my book, but 1step got it wit good punches, and better wordplay.

v/onestepbeyond

^^^ ok i'm not hatin but wat the fuck????

1step uses basic wordplay and his punches were standard, my punches were far more complex, and my personals were to with like one in near enough every line. aight, if u don't like links fine, but still my personals were far more complex in my book.

it just goes to show how far this site has fallen from when it was RapBattles ReLaunched. the votin don't happen and and majority of those that do vote don't know what the fuck they tlkin about!!!!

anyway uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chill man... uppin................................

Voted For: KiNg SoLo


king- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

one - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

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aight more uppin on this shit!!!!!

honest, explained votes ppl.

favour will be returned!!!!!!

and this is why i want explained votes

cuz now i'm back to losin 1-0
IT'S A DAMN CONSPIRACY I TELL YOU!!!!
naw for real ppl, vote honestly and well explained

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
no
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
no
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
decent here
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
mags & match don’t rhyme
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
okay? Doesn’t make since here
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
decent
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?
weak

Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
decent
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
okay, decent
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me
nah weak here
Can’t Nock Out Kingz, ure lyrics can’t even break my royal armour
Got ya whole crew wit my cattle makin me a certified “bitch” farmer
okay
Got ure 3 wins from bitches, tha odds be favourin me on this night
Cuz odds are, 10-1 ure bitch ass will get knocked out in a real fight
decent
Shit, U KNOW u can’t win, U JUST GOT hit by lyrics too sick
My (W)ins always (H)igher, cuz (O)neStep gets (R)ipped by (E)very (D)ick
uhhhh…pretty decent

Overall KiNg SoLo took this one, came harder in the punches, non-played or weak
All the way through like OneStep, but overall K.S. took this one though

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

King Solos Verse
Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
nice personal and opener
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
lol...another good personal
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me
pretty good...
Can’t Nock Out Kingz, ure lyrics can’t even break my royal armour
Got ya whole crew wit my cattle makin me a certified “bitch” farmer
eh wasnt feelin this one
Got ure 3 wins from bitches, tha odds be favourin me on this night
Cuz odds are, 10-1 ure bitch ass will get knocked out in a real fight
lol...eh
Shit, U KNOW u can’t win, U JUST GOT hit by lyrics too sick
My (W)ins always (H)igher, cuz (O)neStep gets (R)ipped by (E)very (D)ick
lmao...good closer


OneStepBeyonds Verse
Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
eh...ok opener but felt kinda weak
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
wasnt feelin it
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
same...felt weak
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
lol...good
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
eh...ok
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
i think coulda been worded better but ok personal...
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?
nah...weak closer

Overall this was an ok battle from both but i thought king solos punches hit harder and the personals were more thought out and creative...no hate good luck

peace

This was feedback posted for KiNg SoLo
 

dayum the second line was fuckin dangerous....!!!...

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
that shit is ill son...dope ass punch and personal, sick opener - 9/10
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
dope wordplay, ok cpncept, nice personal on tha crew name - 8/10
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me
ok filler, personal, aight punch ...decent -8/10
Can’t Nock Out Kingz, ure lyrics can’t even break my royal armour
Got ya whole crew wit my cattle makin me a certified “bitch” farmer
lol..not bad..original concept..gd humour..decent punch -8.5/10
Got ure 3 wins from bitches, tha odds be favourin me on this night
Cuz odds are, 10-1 ure bitch ass will get knocked out in a real fight
errr...this dont really work...6/10
Shit, U KNOW u can’t win, U JUST GOT hit by lyrics too sick
My (W)ins always (H)igher, cuz (O)neStep gets (R)ipped by (E)very (D)ick
lol..gd closer, again wid an original touch..punch is hard..good closer -8.5/10

Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
meh..not really adiss/punch at all.....wheres the cuss? weak opener-6/10
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
ok vocab, not bad concept...decent punch -7.5/10
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
its a bit generic, not really hard hitting and palyed concept - 7/10
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
its funny, but its not actually a diss/punch..-7/10
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
much better, personal, hard punch, gd concept, dope bar -8.5/10
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
meh...gd attempt but it dnt really come off..flows well..ok bar -8/10
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime
err..no...bad bar 2 put as ur closer, its weak basically - 7/10

VOTE= KING SOLO for a more solid and personal drop
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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

damn, this was pretty close..........but in all honesty, im going to have to give this victory to king solo.

both of you gentlemen had nice punches, clean structure and decent vocabulary. in my opinion, each of you had a pretty consisitant flow carrying your verses. both of you had me laughing out loud at some point in time or another during your pieces........nice. i appreciate a good chuckle now and then.

one steps best lines...

"you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?"

solos best lines...

"Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me"

my vote is based solely on enjoyability. when i was finished reading both pieces.......i picked the one that stuck out more to me. this time it happened to be solos. congrats. he just came a little bit nicer with it. i dont really have any pointers for either of you gentlemen besides keep up the good work.

oner...


...the super......big bad c.s.

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