morse code vs .barz of steel.
 

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10-16 Lines
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No Recycling
No Biting
NO D/Rs!!!
no recycling

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-03-05 at 05:11 PM

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.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 09:25 PM.

Look...

Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"
I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased
Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"
Ya text is weak, quit testin me, you're better? Please....
I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"
So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *
You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *
This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"
I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **



* click music and the first song...It's called "We Do What"

** Immortality is his alias

*** Samuel Morse invented the morse code and now he is dead...

.................................................. im postin tomorrow sumtime

morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-03-05 12:30 PM.

ALL PERSONALS ARE REAL(i know him in real life)....

this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1
you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush' *2

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made' *3
like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence *4

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)
your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas' *5

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win
hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse *7

http://tinypic.com/5ma1rl


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1*his alias's=black~magik, stu, microcker

2*get it heez a pussy....BUSH....lol (the burning bush is a stroy from the bible in case you didnt know)

3*barz of steel=not made yet, blueprint=not made yet, cooking piece of cake=not made yet

4*posts 26 and 27

5*you get the raise a breast part (hopefully), but also their breasts are soggy like RAISINS

6*yes the link actually is HIS audio (hi fi may not work YET, not sure)

7*(YES it IS him) he has a fake chain=fake steel(name play)


CHECK ALL LINKS OR DO NOT VOTE!!!

LMAO...fake ass personals

You dont know me kid

lol

^okay...sure^

thats y

1. you got the same yahoo as black magiks old one
2. your ip, and stu (blacks other alias) are the same
3. you up every thread black ups
4. you woodnt talk to me on aim

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1

Ok personal

you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush' *2

Decent

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made' *3


Nice

like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence *4

Ok

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)

Bit forced decent

your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas' *5

lollololol

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win

Str8

hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse *7

Theres nothing wrong with being white uve even got a white man in ur sig


VS


Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"

Sure i said this in a cypher lol nice

I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased

Filler

Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"

Str8

Ya text is weak, quit testin me, you're better? Please....
I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"

PLLLAYED

So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *

Ok personal

You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *

erm str8 sure he sed same ting

This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"

Played

I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **

Tight

Punches = BoS
Personals - Both
Metaphors/similes = Both
Flow = BoS
Amusement = both

Overall = BoS

Please return the favour in my sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

Checking the polls......................GOOD SHIT MORESE !

morse_code_09: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...194126&posted=1 lol, look at yur ppic
black~magik : lol, yeah the jokes on you
black~magik : its not me
morse_code_09: haha, too bad this isnt sick ass barz id name fag, this is the flowin phantom name, damn youve just been caught
black~magik : what?
morse_code_09: and if your really not black magik then get me banned for fake personals, i beg you
morse_code_09: i dont really give a fuck bout rv anymore
black~magik : what r u talkin bout, this is me
morse_code_09: im not even joking ask strobe to ban me, just do it
black~magik : why u postin my pic wtf?
black~magik : i wasnt talkin to u some chik is buggin me

........caught in your own tracks homo

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

his name should be whores ho

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Yo please can u return the favour people ??????????

Already voted on the battle in your sig...

Voters, please do not be fooled by this kids fake personals

Uppin

LOL at you getting the first vote removed...What a bitch

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

.....damn you guys are still fightin..............

morse yes this is kevin beindorff and can't you just get over the fact that sam is not barz of steel

morse code.....ur pic looks like you've been takin too much drugs with ya fat neck and white ass chaint thinkin u gansta.....u aint nobodies god damn father......YODA FROM STAR WARS LOOK A LOT LIKE YOU ....









too much sunburn bruv.....
tip: never ever wear all white coz u aint black

..........damn my names kevin aswell............

This was feedback posted for .Barz Of Steel.
 

look dis is for BM u up hurr tryin to say dat dis aint u but u no damn well it is though....ive seen pictures of u and ive heard some of yo songs...........juss cause u got clowned dont mean u gotta run....but i aint votin cause i no both of u..........NO HATE TOWARDS U THOUGH MAGIK...juss sayin u no

hu u talkin to
.................................

:slick::gfy::shoot:


..........lol.........

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

Ok, I am clearing something up.

Barz of steel pm'ed me asking me to help him get people to realize that me and him are not the same person. This is bullshit. I do not know, and have never talked to barz ever before, so for morse code to accuse me and him of being the same person pisses me off. His verse dissed me, when I'm not even the person that he is fuckin battling. That is my pic from about 2 years ago, and people can say what they want, because I am older and look MUCH different now. As for the conversation he posted, there is a logical explanation for what happend, but most people probably won't believe me.
As for morse code, you had no right to talk shit behind my back, or post my pic on the net. I just want you to know that me and barz are not the same person, and a friendship is not worth being thrown away over some internet rapboard bullshit especially when you do not know what you are talking about. So, get on aim, because we seriously need to talk about this shit.

uppin.....................

^lol.....okay...uppin....and no i still dont believe you but im not gonna argue about it so consider it over...

uppin.............................................

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this aont a muthafuckin draw....u just lost morse code...consider yoself merked.....

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

damn close battle........

barz......
the flow was dope....structure was on point....creativity in some of the punches was high, i was feelin some of them, some nice personals on him....wordplay was there and it was dope, i feel that ya rhyme scheme went basic in places but mostly it was all dope....LMAO at the closer, that was a funny and original play on his name....links are played but i still checked them...better off explainin that shit at the bottom instead of linking shit.....overall....8/10

morse...
nice drop to....structure was good, i was feeling the flow all the way through...first thing to mention is drop the whole bolding names thing unless it has a point, from where i look it just seems like ya forcing shit.....ya wordplay was nice, a good personal on his picture to finish with, i laughed at that...creativity was there although you to were basic in places, need to stay more consistent with the hotness.....overall 7.5/10

barz edged it by a hair.....

V/ - Barz of Steel

RTF!!! battle links are in my sig. :thumbup:

I RTF...

Thanx for voting man

Uppin This Shit............

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

lmao. If thats dude, he look like darius songalia off tha kingz...lol..But down to business.

I think barz took this one with harder disses and harder punches. Even tho that christmas/gift wrapper line is played, i was still feelin tha rest of ya verse. i liked yo flow. It was easy to read because of yo structure. this was a pretty good drop in my opinion. You came consistent from tha beginning to tha end, and I felt you took this one.

Morse- yo verse was coo, but i wasnt feelin it too much. I think yo punches were a lil off point, and worded badly. I think you focused too much on personals, which took yo main focus off yo creativity in punches and everything else. Thats why i wasnt feelin yo verse. It was good, but tha personals that you tried to make sound funny/tight, didnt work. That's what failed you. But nonetheless, a good drop.

Overall- this was a close one, but i think it came down to one fuck up for morse, so my vote goes to barz.


No hate. And I'll brb witta link. RTF, or this vote will be ghost like casper, that friendly mu fucka...lol

~1~

link in sig............................................... ...hit that up, and I will search for more battles by you, and send you tha money...you gota vote on it first, and pm me when u do!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

uppin this shit!!!!!

Thanx for voting, and all favors will be returned..........................

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Ok diz wuz a close battle, heres my thoughts:

Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"
^played concept in da 2nd line

I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased
^not feeling it

Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"
^nyce concept, real good wordplay

I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"
So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
^nyce 1st line, 2nd line kind ov ruined it

But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *
You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *
^good creativity in da rhymez, personal reallyhit harder, good job

This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"
^played

I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **
^really good closer, i aint mad@dat, proppz

Not da best verse, a few played concepts, da line wit dem personalz & ur closer hit hard, & they get u diz win, ur lucky Morse didnt come better or u wuld be see'n defeat fa sho man, good job though


this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1
^weak opener

you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush'
^ok wordplay, horribly worded

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made'
^ur weakest bar

like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence
^not da worse lines i ever saw, concept wuz good

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)
your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas'
^very weak barz, wuznt feelin them at all

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win
^good personal, dat wuz ur best bar

hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse
^culd ov used dat personal alot better, jackson shit iz played yo

Morse if u wuld ov used wat personalz u had on barz 2 better effect, u wuld ov had da win, a few played lines, punz wernt strong, personalz were there 4 u morse, but juz da conceptz u used didnt hit hard, both came pretty weak, no hate ov course cuz i know yall sum talaented dudes, but my vote goes 2 barz of steel

Uppin this shit

And Morse all of these votes are explained thoroughly, so don't think about being a nitch and getting them removed

Uppin this fuckin shit