hotshh! vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Battle Rules:

The Establishment vs Livin' Legendz

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 01:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 11:20 PM.

KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 07:53 AM.

U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
**khao=KO
***lost two straight to Misk in HIS crew then joined Living Legends

**its been broought to my attention, i need to eleborate further
living legends....dying with laughter...
saving hip hop, fixing dislocated body parts...dislocated hip
a shout-out is like saying whats up to someone
so, u couldnt REP ya HOOD, if u SHOUTED OUT, the FRONT of ya CAR
get it?, ok...drop now nucca

Yo, Livin Legendz Wattup? M-Eazy Wattup? Daubs Wattup?....EZ..

Check it..

still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT :thumbup:
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''



*=Abreast...meaning-up to a particular standard or level especially of knowledge

lol@da fake personal....i left livin legendz & i wuz reppin dem wen i battled Misk, & misk beat me by no-show in our regular battle, but he did beat me in da punchline, so 1 out ov 3 personal 2 be correct iz not bad lol

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

Polls...

hotshh! killed this...................

Voted For: hotshh!

khaoz theory:
still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
^^^DECENT PERSONAL....
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
^^^DIS IS NOTHIN BUT FILLER
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
^^^^MORE FILLER
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
^^^^??????? WHERE DOES DIS FIT IN
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT
^^^^^NO HATE FAM BUT I HAVE NO IDEA WHUT DIS MEANS
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
^^^WEAK PUNCH
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''
^^^OKAY

hotshh!:
U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
^^^LOL AND ITS TRUE...DATZ FUCKED UP
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
^^^UHHH OKAY
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
^^^NO
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
^^^I DOTN KNOW IF DIS IS A DISS 2 ME OR NOT
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
^^^^DA HOOD=FRONT OF DA CAR...SHIT IS GETTIN OLD NOW
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
^^^LOL BEST BAR OF YA VERSE...

V/HOTT....KHAOZ YA FLOW IS FUCKED UP AND U HAD 2 MUCH FILLER IN YA VERSE..HOTT U AINT GO HARD BUT U HAD JUST ENUFF DA WIN DIS


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This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

batltleeeeeeeeeeeeeee..........checkin,,,,,pollsss ssss

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

I think Khaoz took this one. With more consistency in his punches and disses. This was a close battle. Hotshh! came off with hard punches like usually, and a few multies, and real good wordplay, but Khaoz gets my vote because he came off more interesting. A text battle consist of good disses, and thats what Khaoz got. Flow was on point also, hotshh! structure/flow wasnt consistent and fell off in some places. I think this is explained good enough, Khaoz gets my vote.

-peace

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

pppppoooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssss ss

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

checkin polls...... go get em fam

lol @ fake personals
u aint join his crew cuz u lost, but u still lost twice to him

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Good Lookz But You Could Have Cam ALOT i Mean ALOT harder!

But i do got to give ya some propss for ya verse Famz Nice shyt!

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

ight famz... good battle u got this hotshh! good drop pz

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

checkin pollz........................+............

Young City has voted for LL in all their battles, I will get his votes removed...

Pure dickridding..

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

checking this out..........................................

Voted For: hotshh!

still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
PERSONAL WASNT REALLY HITTING.
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
LAME PERSONAL, JULY 04 IS ONE YEAR NOT 2
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
NICE BAR, GOOD ONE
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT
EHHH. DECENTLY NOT WACK
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
DECENT
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''
NO, NOT AT ALL...WEAK CLOSER




U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
BLAH OPENER
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
DECENT NAMEPLAY BUT STILL LACKING
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
NO. THIS IS NO GOOD
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
UMM, PRETTY NICE WORDPLAY
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
DECENT ONE HERE
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
DOPE...BEST BAR IN THE BATTLE

OVERALL BOTH CAME WEAKER THAN USUAL ESPECIALLY HOTSHH, THEORY YA STRUCTURE WAS HURTFUL AND YA VERSE WAS DECENT AT BEST
HOT YOURS WAS DECENT TOO
BUT THAT CLOSER TOOK IT FOR YOU

Uppin this.............................................

bump diz..........................................

werd he voted for ghost i asked strobe to remove it and he said no but you can have a go soul

so wat? ''typical'' iz voting against me in every battle i am not complaining, stop whinning u gay bitches, all u establishment faggs r babies, drakel cried, soul rebel cried, e.c cried, & hotshh used fake personalz, u r all wack

what u bitching bout fake personals?

u said i been here 2 years, i aint even been here one yet
thats a fake personal
you said who needs 2 times to win KORV
you never won one time ANYTHING

^ Hahaha owned..

I didn't cry by the way, I just said he is a pure dickridder..

KhAoZ ThEoRy...fa'real man, you got killed in this battle...Lmao at you getting votes removed. If The Establishment is so wack...how come we are beating you in all the crew battles? How come we have never lost...and how come you PM'd me to join it? Shut the fuck up...

hotshh! this is in the bag for you....seriously...:thumbup:

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

nice man, polls.....................................

uppin these .................................................. ................

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Voted For: hotshh!

after carefully reviewing both sides of the argument... hotshh! comes out on top. im not gonna break it down bar for bar because that means nothing....
hot had waay better punches and his flow was better. his wordplay was better than Khaoz and the personals were good. his best line was the living legends/die with laughter line... good shit. decent drop from hot, i've seen better, but this was decent.

khaoz wasnt too bad but he wasnt constantly hitting. there was too much of a gap between good lines.ur second line was HELLA stretched and some of ur concepts were kinda weak. that abreast line was probably your downfall, it was pretty weak and u didnt have any good punches to back it up. this verse was kinda newbish... all the quotes to try and stress wordplay made ur battle weaker. i say elevate and try again later.

V/ Hotshh!
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

uppin............................................. ..............................................

Vote removed

ahhh shit get that vote removed it was suppose to be feedback........My bad........

Voted For: hotshh!

I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
^^^ only line i liked but dopest in battle so u win
vs.
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
^^^liked this punch but u worded it wrong cuz titty feeing doesn't make someon a breast... so your wordplay was off so i can't give ya the props u woulda got with this punch... idk it it was a personal either? and thats not my fault cuz that just means it wasn't direct enough...
no hate... i have no problems voting against bigger names but in this case u lost... please rtf... links in sig

Alrighty now...............Uppin..........................

Voted For: hotshh!

still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
^^weak opener, punch lacked
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
^^not feeling it
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
^^decent punch
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT
^^nope, wack bar n punch
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
^^nope, didnt connect,setup n punch had no relevetcy together
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''
^^eh, stretched n needed rewording to be effective
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overall your verse was very choppy n you lacked in decent concepts that were hard hitting, 1 nice bar, you need wordplay that isnt forced in your verse, improve on that, n dont stretch your lines. first 2 bars were pure filler in my opinion.....other then that..average drop

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U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
^^not really feelin this bar/personal
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
^^decent punch, funy aspect...
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
^nope, not feelin this hotshh
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
^^nice, i liked this bar for some reason..
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
^^ok, decent
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
^^best bar n punch/nameplay in the battle, dope
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overall consistent verse, a couple bars i wasnt feeling but you brought alot more above average punches then khaoz
n your closer was pure brilliance, nice drop, closer was the illest...nice drop...

Alrighty now............Someone close this..............

Everyone knows TE has D/R's. Get over it. YOUNG_CITY's votes are explained. And he hasn't voted in all TE vs LL battles.

We don't need to cheat to win, J to the Dot, you can tell hotshh! ripped this kid...

Uppin..

^ :love: me!

werd.

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