Stanza vs blisss
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko
4-1 ko

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-30-05 at 08:42 PM

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 07:56 PM.

blisss has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 08:04 PM.

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not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew
bit off more than you can chew, spits nothing more that splattered shit
but like running through windows, stanzas dreams of being big are shattered quick
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
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quick key, dont get it, dont vote

explanations:

first bar: stanza DID have a emoticon of the rolling smily laughing (:roll:), then he changed it....so that is what the punch is about.

Nice drop ...............But You WonT win ............

Voted For: Stanza



not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew
^^not feelin this?all it is only a smiley with RAW under 5/10
bit off more than you can chew, spits nothing more that splattered shit
but like running through windows, stanzas dreams of being big are shattered quick
^^Good 6/10
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
^^weak.....this one suked...2/10
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
^^^nope.......2/10

U started off OK.But eventually faded.His profile only had a smiley with RAW beneath it......how is that laughing at RAW for lettin him in his crew?Ur last 2 punhes were horrible.

Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
^^nice metas and rip on name.....8/10
Im "Burning Down Trees" So You Know That Im Bout To "Smoke This Twig"
When Im finished People wont Know Who You Are Like The "Guy In Yo Sig"
^^^OK...not as good....6/10
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
^^^OK...but not as good as the other ones,5/10
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"
^^OK....4/10

Well....like Bliss...ur verse got worst as it kept goin.But they hit harder than bliss.U had a personal that hit and acctually made sence.Nice metas too.U got this easily in my opinion,

Vote-Stanza

Aii

Blisss
not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew
????? I See rock N roll Not Laughin ????
bit off more than you can chew, spits nothing more that splattered shit
but like running through windows, stanzas dreams of being big are shattered quick
The concept in that Line was Sort of played No Hate Though man
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
....Again I Thiink the concept ..Not The punch...The concept of the bar is played and its still not hard hitting
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
.....That Was Aii Nuttin Specail...

Overall I Think That You Should try To Make direct punchez towards your oppenent instead of boostin yoself up even though you didnt boost yoself up a whole lot it was still noticable so i cant give you my vote in this battle so sorry No Hate Though Man

Stanza
Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
Aii cooncept not hard hittng punch But Good Wordplay and nameplay
Im "Burning Down Trees" So You Know That Im Bout To "Smoke This Twig"
When Im finished People wont Know Who You Are Like The "Guy In Yo Sig"
Nice small Personal There man I Like that LOL
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
Nice Diss towards his crew ......I had to defin vivid Though LOL
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You
...Agaion Nice punch and personal all in one and good wordplay in the first line

Aii man Overall you have good wordplay and its funny if you had stronger punchez then you would be doper no lie man yo Verse wasnt all That In This battle But It was good enough to take the win and I also Think That You do good in focusing on your oppenents weak Points and that why i Think That You Take this battle

my v/ Stanza

Nice Battle Both of you :thumbup:


Vote not counted unless Bliss agrees to vote since it wasn't entered through the voting system
-strobe

Aii man Thats 0-2 Im Up lets Go ahead and Get This last Vote so I can get this thang closed

WTF The vote didnt go through ?................................

Voted For: blisss

blisss ya verse had really good flow, really good concepts and hard punches. ya last bar was hot... that was a sick closer right there. 1st bar was funny as hell and a really good opener... ya got my vote

Stanza... ya verse was good don't get me wrong. the punches were lackion. ya didnt come as hard as blisss. ya 2nd bar was the worst... just wasnt feelin it, sorry

*no hate just honest opinion* *please RTF*

blisss... i know yur drakel... so i just want you to know i got no hate for ya and never did... if you want me to explain vote more just let me know... but i thought i explained enough

wtf?.....change your sig back faggot

dont pull a bitch move, and if i see another d/r in here, i'll fuckin kill you slut

this tells me you were expecting this vote, you fucking faggot

i can so tell that wasn't you writing either, or else you bit shit....again

shut the fuck up bliss.......look you lost this battle and u know it.Anyone on this site would tell you that.

^ get off stanza's dick, i wrote that verse in 5 minutes, and the bitch didn't even pm me either

you're a fucking joke man, 4-14 and nobody likes you, except stanza because you two vote for each other in every battle....i can guarantee, if i tried, i would whored stanza, i still beat him, but this site is fuckin whack for voting right now because people like you are active everyday

fuck off and die, just like your rap skills....fucking faggot

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197330
^^
Take a look at these battles.Did Satanza vote for me.I'm pretty sure I voted against him in a couple a battles too.Dun gimme that bullshit about not even trying.U tried.It not like Stanza is a newb.It's either you really stupuid or you making an excuse.And I know you makin an excuse.If this site is whack then leave.U not gon miss you.So wat if nobody likes me.I start the beef myself.I don't like them either.I'm whack?.......yet I murdered you in our battle.

And in our battle u winning 3-2.....yet in this post you call the voters whack?Yeah....I guess your right then....the voters are whack for givin u votes.Fuck retarded bitch

Your Drakel?

Oh Wassup Man .....I Guess You still dont like me huh?

Im srry for you .........Still Uppin

calm down mayne its jus a battle

^ word, ktrini, you still riding stanza's dick.....those battle are so long ago

and no, i didn't try, because i went out for supper with my girl.....keyed this shit up in like 7 min........
and didn't try in your battle either........cause you're whack......bu tyou just get your stuipid d/r's.........so fuck you, you're whack.......lets have a serious battle

This was feedback posted for blisss
 

checking polls....................................

Yeah uhh... K and Stanz... You guys are wack...... Not on the mans nuts either... But Drake owns you both.

Voted For: blisss

not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew
coo opener
bit off more than you can chew, spits nothing more that splattered shit
but like running through windows, stanzas dreams of being big are shattered quick
punch was decent
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
good use of his name here
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
nice closer



Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
weak opener
Im "Burning Down Trees" So You Know That Im Bout To "Smoke This Twig"
When Im finished People wont Know Who You Are Like The "Guy In Yo Sig"
meh, avg. punch
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
nope
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"
1st line was aight, 2nd was wack

overall

stanza, weak punches u had there.. the font was str8-gay.. the structure
was okay here, vocab needs help, and the flow lack’d.. overall those
punches could’ve been harder than that though

blisss, you had a decent structure, the flow kinda lack’d a little here,
vocab was aight.. and the punches, well, you came on top here with
the punches..

OSB You Still Runnin behind my Post Hatin On Me aint You ?

LOL Yall Guys are a Trip

And Blisss Why would you battle me on yo other name I remember you makin the callout then i replied but you never replied back ?.........I dont have nuttin against You But can You stop Pmin Me Please

Thanx

^ shut up, you so have d/r's....and you're a straight up bitch for changing your sig after the battle

that shows you know i fuckin owned you, so you have to change shit up

i never had a problem with you either....i just ignored the fact you were a piece of shit, but now i have to deal with it, cause you're pulling bitch moves here

and im on this name because you fuckin rode k-trini's dick in my battle against him, and basically called me whack when i owned him

bump.

bump.............................................. .

Wateva Man im Not Gettin ready to sit here and entertain your EThreats

Uppin

e-threats?

hahahahahahhahahahaa, man, where did i e-threaten you?

bump...

............Im So fly I got Honey So Whinnie The Pooh Is always in my Ride................

............Kiss this win Bye bye bye Bcuz I Dont care 4 da Shit You Be Talkin All Up on The side ........

Up

okay, that was pretty gay, but thats stanzas way....upping is what i say

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Voted For: Stanza

this was a igght battle here......

ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where

vs.

Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"


stanza had better punches and they were better concepts and more thought of, thats y i'm giving this to him.... bliss work on your structure and syllable count

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Stanza

gud opening-stanza-Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"

overall-stanza-
vote-Stanza

bad closing-stanzaThis Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

syllable count? gotta be kidding me....eh, whatever...last dudes vote is gettin removed though...pretty whack

i wish whack people didn't vote

LOL Uppin .............................uppin................

This was feedback posted for blisss
 

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This was feedback posted for blisss
 

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