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Whine whine whine...sob.
What gets really annoying, is when people vote against you in topicals because you don't have enough
emotion imagery description whatever when you're obviously not basing your verse on it. Our topic was 'Awakening Creatures', with me and Tweety. I don't really care if I win, but the shit is stupid when I had a piece clearly met to NOT be emotional, and then someone says I don't have enough emotion and gives it to the other person. My approach --- awakening in the morning, going to work her's --- possession I notice the voter didn't say anything about vocabulary, I guess that doesn't matter. The difference between me and Tweety's verses was she was trying to be deep, which isn't original, and I was trying to make a twist to it, but she still gets a vote because I don't have something because I wasn't trying to do that. Really, I'm tired of people breaking things into categories when people are obviously shunning some types. Maybe you're supposed to use them all, but I don't see how it makes sense sometimes. Raw emotion mixed with a humor piece? It'd be messed up. Shit's stupid. << [/whine.] |
*Hands Daemon a tissue*
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This guy is smart....
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No..that wasn't our topic.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207622 It was animated Creatures that what our Topic is...Not awakening. |
- dabs his little beady eyes. - I'm just so sad that no one loves me...
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Oh, Animated. Same difference. Awakening, Animated, what does it matter what the topic is? That has nothing to do with it. And Animated Creatures was bound to try and bring something up demonic... o_O Really, ya have to be ORIGINAL. And cool, like Daemon.
Animated happens from Awakening..and stuff. So my piece fits into both categories, yo... |
I even based my name on Demons..yet I'm still cool.
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i didnt read the whole thing cuz i'm really not into topicals,but tweety's style is very basic,where she just makes the last word in every line rhyme...which is very elementary....typical beginner girly shit....the other dude has a much larger vocab and multies,and just seems more quality
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Yep everyone tells me that I need to change my rhyme scheme..but shit...That's how I write...Oh well...
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anyone who votes on topicals on imajery n emotion are nerds.Just vote on enjoyment n creativity.Fuk all em nerd termz.And "deep"?shit..i seen that topical battle u talkin about.and all i can say is...stop trying to be william shakespeare.That shit is gay.and that is advice to the 2 of you. |
Stop trying to be a thug. How the fuck are you going to compare poets to one poet? I'd rather be compared to Poe. And guess what, you know who Shakespheare is, so why wouldn't I want to be like him, a world famous poet known way past his life?
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True.............Allen Poe is dope :)
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he wuz good before.but now..he is just plain ghey.and i ain't tryna be a thug.It aint' trying.And poetry is whack.Would you go up to ur girlfriend n read Macbeth or Hamlet to her?No.You go up to her n play some gangsta rap or some shit entertaining.And that poetry shit you write...it is immpossible to spit that in audio.Cuz to comprehend one line we have to read it over and over and we have to grab a dictionary.I mean..profound lyrics is good and all.But you guys on this site overdo it.Make ur lyrics audio style.Rappin can get u money and help you support ur life n shit..while being fun and considered a hobby at the same time.Poetry is (somehow) a hobby to some..when it boooorrrrinng.At the time of shakespeare...his shit was like Eminem today.It wuz a complete different era.Too uncomparable.He's know past his life cuz he did revolutize shit..but not people outgrew it and spit on it like we do to hispanics and gays today. |
You're wack, face it. I don't need a life of fame or luxury, but I'll get luxury because I'm actually going to work and take no stupid shortcuts to get there, and I'll be with roommates and shit. You're a sad person if you base your life on trying to become world famous and then you'll just get your dreams crushed everytime you try to take a step in the business. Did I ever say I want to put the complex shit into audio? Have I ever said I write for four year olds? I'm thirteen, if you can't understand what I say you need to just fuck off. How many times have you been banned? Get a clue.
I hardly expect a wannabe thug to like you who only cares about shit that concerns him to like poetry. Trust me, I'm not going to go next to my girlfriend and start rapping at her. Not everyone shares your tastes, thank god. |
what a fucking retarded topic.
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yes rappin can get your money...but poetry might to you be boring but to me it's a fantastic thing..I mean C'mon what if a person is bout to kill himself cause he feels all emotional that's tucked inside and he can't let it all out...Poetry is about expressing and without poetry there wouldn't be rap anyway..Period!..Rap and Poetry are the same but have different styles Rap is expressing also. Poetry can do audio ya know , ever been to a poetry cafe or a blue's resturant? If you go there you'll see what I'm talking about..And yes It is entertaining especailly for grown folks..I play the piano and I do spoken Words..Now I'm a lesbo and I had G/F that love..rap but when One-night when I played her the piano and my Poem...It was soo good and she liked it.. i expressed my heart out to her.Man Poetry to me is outstanding and a very good way to express yourself...Thank you.
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I don't make the topic. Ranks, you're annoying as shit, you never add anything prolific to a topic.
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If it's retarded then I don't. Holla.
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If it's retarded, why bother waste your time?
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This post...signifies that I won the arguement.WHy?Becuz when someone loses an arguement..then they end up dissing.And you ended up dissing.Haha.And I don't solely use my life to try and make it as a rapper.But you never know.The shit i spit could get me somewhere.While you gonna be a poet.Poets write books..authors don't make SHIT.Ya hear?Authors don't make SHIT.And wtf at you tellin me about dreams being shattered when you a young urban kid with no experience on that subject.And you don't put the complex shit on audio then.OK.SO you write shit speccifically for people on the net?You write a song..and then you read it and say..."yea..now I can impress those guys on the net"?U can't do that.And I'm trying to tell u something that could help u.writing for people here is wasting ur time.Make ur rhymes in a way that u could spit it.And the rhymes u make is simple.Just grab a dictionary.and put fancy words.and disguise the fact u ain't saying a fuckin thing.And I ain't say u gotta to go to ur bitch n start rapping.But wat girl likes to listen to poetry?none.And not everyone on the NET shares my tastes.But in real life..I'm in the majority.All that talk about banning is irreleavnt to the arguement. |
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Whoa you serious?...Authors got dough..I aint talking about pizza bread either... |
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welll...then leave this thread you fukin fag. or... spit some bars i'll merk you faster than i could go to new orleans firing a trick & u a bitch comin in here to bitch like a aspirin hispanic SO come on ranks..spit some bars if this thread retarded.Unless u a bitch u just goes in a thread to complain.Let's see what u got. |
- walks around, one hand cupped above his mouth, fingers moving, saying 'ooooo' - FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT!
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Lmao you thinking you won an argument just because I owned you. For one, who ever said I write for people on the net? I keep my shit on the net so I can save it, collect it, then when I get enough that I like, I'll submit them in for a book of poetry. Skilled rappers get recognized, and skilled authors get recognized. You know that a lot of people on the net share their same views IRL, right? And how can you talk about a majority of people in the world, until you've conducted a survey and gotten the views of the majority? If my rhymes were simple, why would I need a dictionary? If my rhymes were simple, why are they more complex then your average rapper's shit? I write on here to get feedback and increase my skill. You probably write on here to do the same thing. What are you trying to do? Impress net cats by doing text battles on a site? I don't see you doing audio, so why are you talking about making it big when you probably have a chipmunk voice? What do rappers say? I say a shit load more then rappers. Rappers talk about ghetto life, and how hard it is, and about hoes and how they're pimp. Even if that is a stereotype, you're still stereotyping poets the same way. I'm an urban kid with no experience on having my hopes and dreams crushed? Maybe that's because I have enough skill to make sure my dreams come true? And banning may not be relevant to the topic, but it shows how many people here agree with you --- about four, including your alias. What've you been banned for? People hating you? Cheating? |
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Without poetry there wouldn't be rap.True.But without soccer there wouldn't be basketball/baseball/or football.Cuz soccer came before all these and influences all these.SOOO..does that make soccer the best sport ever?NO.And if a person is about to kill himself..he ain't about to make poetry.He'll just write a letter.Poetry takes mad time to make and shit.If he wanted to die then he ain't gonna prolong his suicide to make poetry.I don't know about this poetry audio shit u talkin about.But if it flows..then no...it ain't poetry.the differnce between rap and poetry is that rap is made to flow.That's the differnce.And grown folks.Who the fuk cares about them?Are you a grown folk?NO..so when u become a grown folk..then go make ur poetry so u wouldn't look stupid.in skool...when we do poetry for english class..i don't see anyone jumping with joy or nothing.rap is more fun and is liked more by todays' culture.And Rap is a better way to express urself than poetry cuz it gets urself heard more.More people like rap than poetry.It's a better way to get heard.That's all.And why would I give one fuck about ur lesbo story?I am homophobic.I don't care about that.And she prob said she liked it so she could eat ur clit out.*pukes*.Makes me sick. |
Word @ ranks being scared..lil bitch.
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No one said poetry was the best thing ever, but we think it's better then poetry. So what if poet's don't agree with the majority? If someone is about to die, it doesn't matter what they do, why would they care if they took a few minutes out of their life to write a poem about how they feel? They'll die anyway, it's not like people care about taking a few minutes to live a bit longer to show why they're doing something. People do poetry, people do notes. It's stupid to compare rap to poetry, there's a difference, and different people have different taste. So what if the majority like rap? Not all rappers get famous, a shit load of rappers only know of a few of people. Like I said, I don't care if I'm world famous. I'd prefer living with a few friends, being healthy, and having basic needs plus a few nice luxuries then being tailed around by the media and having all of my motives questioned. Poetry is a hobby, and rap usually is too, I like to do my hobbies, big fucking deal. I like rap as well. It doesn't matter, I don't want luxury, case closed. |
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what the hell are you talking about? |
I think he wanted u to spit some bars.
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^lol trini....... ~_~
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for what? lmao. trini is so weird... |
^^^lol is that really k-trini?........
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that's what I think.... many similarities ~_~
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HUH?,you were refering to me? |
lol i don't think its him............
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Trini is Pressence.
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yea, we'll see... ~_~
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wtf is a ~_~, other than gay.
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yeh but is deranged his other alias |
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