Daubs vs Satans Spawn
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
4-1 ko
*battle CLOSES After 21 days*

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-26-05 at 08:35 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

Satans Spawn has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 12:32 PM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 12:33 PM.

Yeah I Was Just About to pM you and tell You to Accept the battle and just drop lata

I gave you 3 days to drop

il drop in like 10 miutes if you wanna do it that way?

Yeah me Two Im droppin In a few prolly Bcuz Im in school now

Yo

Daubs You Couldnt "Add Up" To Me If You was "One More Than A Billion"
Ill "Chop" You Up And Make You "Blend In" This Habitat Like "Chameleons"
Daubs Punchez Are Like Men Takin "Pregnacy Test"...They Never Show
Will Daubs Beat Satan Spawn In A Battle?...The World Will Never Know
This Guy could Never Come Hot Even If It Was Stoves That He Rubs
Daubneys Gonna End up Gone So The Question Is.....Where's Daubs

-Quikie-

I Hope You Step up

Sorry For The double Post I Meant To click preview post .......

Lemme guess, a load of shitty nameplays in that gay centering thing you do with that crappy font...
Its the content of the stuff, not how it looks...

Stanza's back again, why...he's not someone we miss
'so I aint doin drama..when ima rehearse this bitch
Wack shit, your nothin...apart from thick and feeble
Cos he thought RV was rooting for me..
..so he brought a tub of weedkill
After i beat him, fuck his excuses, the bitch emerges
Cause when i win..
..he the type of kid to blame it on keyed verses

Dont get something?
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Don't vote.

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs You Couldnt "Add Up" To Me If You was "One More Than A Billion"
Ill "Chop" You Up And Make You "Blend In" This Habitat Like "Chameleons"
5...decent...wuzn't feelin 1st line tho.
Daubs Punchez Are Like Men Takin "Pregnacy Test"...They Never Show
Will Daubs Beat Satan Spawn In A Battle?...The World Will Never Know
3...1st line wuz good...2nd sucked,honestly.
This Guy could Never Come Hot Even If It Was Stoves That He Rubs
Daubneys Gonna End up Gone So The Question Is.....Where's Daub
4...1st line wuz blah becuz hot lines are played and the 2nd line wuz ok..

Stanza's back again, why...he's not someone we miss
'so I aint doin drama..when ima rehearse this bitch
5...decent.
Wack shit, your nothin...apart from thick and feeble
Cos he thought RV was rooting for me..
..so he brought a tub of weedkill
6..good wordplay
After i beat him, fuck his excuses, the bitch emerges
Cause when i win..
..he the type of kid to blame it on keyed verses
3..ehh,this concept been done many times.

Ok..
Satan's spawn..
decent verse overall.Nothing spectacular.Didn't see any punch above average.U had some played shit..like hot lines..which have been done forever.And some flat out basic shit like the 2nd bar wit the whole will never know thingy.
Daubs..
hmm..ur structure is resemblant to JTR/Theory's in this one.Ur best bar wuz the middle bar with the rooting one.Only weak bar wuz the last one..cuz,well...it's a played out concept to say someone blames shit on keyed verses..But,you win.

Vote-Daubs

safe man,

and my structure,,,

im gettin with the wbl one, its better imo.

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

pollz fam............................................... u got this no doubt

This Is Not Hate Though Rii Daubs?

I Guess So

Your Actually The First Person To Even Get a Vote In A Battle Against Me all my battles have been 5-0'z

this is ur worst battle by far....no offence ive seen better from you..........(ss)

This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
 

:slick:
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course it aint hate man,

just a battle init....

Voted For: Daubs

1st bar- both have decent openings, punches are even
2nd bar- daubs has some good wordplay here, stanza's bar sorta makes it sound like the battle will be closed wit the "the world will never kno" part... 2nd bar goes to daubs
3rd bar- dont like stanza's closer either, doesnt hit very hard
ROFL at daubs, he predicted stanza real well here (altho the swayin at the beginnin is questionable)... stanza ended by sayin "quikie" haha
3rd bar goes 2 daubs

v/daubs

Ok Then I Guess im headed for my first lost

...............UYppin

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

rofl nice verse mate you killed him...............

Voted For: Satans Spawn

I say conceptions verse was structurally better with a better flo had strong punches that daubs lacked, actually went for more personals which gave conceptions the upper hand these bars were short so you have to get straight to the point daubs no beatin around the bush nice try tho keep practising

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

lmao

keep practicing,

I own you.


Learn to vote dick head.............

rofl your gay... battle me.... or learn how to vote...

Wtf I posted on some wrong shit scrap dat excuse my crazy outburst

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

your wack. jeez and your hatin on me. call me out if you wanna lose. fuck animal.

lol,

check elevated bitch slapped in a minute.

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Uppin,..............................Qhat Ya Gonna Do With That Vote ?

Dq? or what lemme know

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This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
 

props good battel easy win........................

who you kiddin willa,

atleast he knows it.

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Voted For: Daubs

v/ Daubs i think he came a lil bit more harder than satans spawn it was a close battle but daubs comes out on top

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Wow That Is The weakest vote ive seen in a while ..............Its gettin Dq'ed That wack shit

One line?

OMG Voting is poor these days

ask strobe to clean the whole battle then.


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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Structure- Conceptions
Flow- Conceptions flowed thru my head more.


Aiight.

"Stanza's back again, why...he's not someone we miss
'so I aint doin drama..when ima rehearse this bitch"- Daubs

Daubs You Couldnt "Add Up" To Me If You was "One More Than A Billion"
Ill "Chop" You Up And Make You "Blend In" This Habitat Like "Chameleons"- Conceptions

Sticked out to me alot more than Daubs's rhymes. The ending of Conceptions verse deffinately stuck out more. I got what you was saying Daubs, but Conceptions just came harder to me. Gd battle people.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooo

Sorry stanza, but i fuckin owned you here and these newbie dick heads dont have a clue how to vote.

uppin............................................. ..........

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Voted For: Daubs

Daubs You Couldnt "Add Up" To Me If You was "One More Than A Billion"
Ill "Chop" You Up And Make You "Blend In" This Habitat Like "Chameleons"
^^^No..this was a weak opener....
Daubs Punchez Are Like Men Takin "Pregnacy Test"...They Never Show
Will Daubs Beat Satan Spawn In A Battle?...The World Will Never Know
^^^No.....sorry that was a wack punch
This Guy could Never Come Hot Even If It Was Stoves That He Rubs
Daubneys Gonna End up Gone So The Question Is.....Where's Daubs
^^^No....this was a weak closer.....

Stanza's back again, why...he's not someone we miss
'so I aint doin drama..when ima rehearse this bitch
^^^Nice opener....
Wack shit, your nothin...apart from thick and feeble
Cos he thought RV was rooting for me..
..so he brought a tub of weedkill
^^^Nice punch...this was good
After i beat him, fuck his excuses, the bitch emerges
Cause when i win..
..he the type of kid to blame it on keyed verses
^^^Lol good personal.....For the closer...
V/Daubs...this was a pretty onesided battle....con....ur verse was weak foreal...i seen better from u....most ur punchs were played an weak....daub u came wit an ight verse that was solid enough to get the win....

Thanks for the vote mate..........................

I quit man you can have the win This battle is draggin on longer than I expected

You Can Take the win