TheSinnister vs Tie-D
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-06-05 at 10:49 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - expired battle win

Tie-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-05 11:04 AM.

TheSinnister has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-05 11:49 AM.

This guys frantic mind fights for possession
Magnifying the power, I'm teaching you a lesson
Never the less being obsessed by a delusion
This is what happens when you fuse sinnister illusion
Your lyrics deluted, your thoughts seem clueless
Your mind abused, and you dont speak fluent
Your eyes decide this wrongful right
Is there still time to save your worthless life
Do you have what it takes to change your narrow mind
Forget the past you imitate quit layering the lies
One layer upon the other your gonna die inside

14 wins, tht record was built up on noobs
8 battles against anyone half good and you lose
Avvy’s a pic of the joker cos that’s wat you are
Im a joker too, watch…………..you’ll go far!
Holding his head up gallantly walking the road
I bring the talent tht squashes u like a toad
The Chrymies see ya record and make u a hot tip
I see your ability, you steam like a pile of hot shit
Has the CS leader lost his mind there?
Signing u, a good investment, but then so is a time share..??
Your sixteen kidd, you need to grow up
Or get some real friends, ur only one now has to be blown up
The only thing I know of that’s really sinister
Is the fact that your palms are covered in blisters
wen u here no one will kiss ya,
wen you gone no one will miss ya
you cant leave your house cos someone will hit ya
that’s wat happens wen ya parents are brother and sister

good luck bro.

Thats a good verse
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U to tha P to tha PPPIN
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This was feedback posted for Tie-D
 

oh shit man, tie-D you straight up killed this battle, you spit fire

lmao, uppin.......................................

This was feedback posted for Tie-D
 

^^ HOT DANM LOL YOU OWNED HIM.....

ending was funny lol.... good drop fam ;)

This was feedback posted for Tie-D
 

i cant vote checkin tha polls........................

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thnx for the support to ma crew

hopefully other peeps gonna think the same

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This was feedback posted for TheSinnister
 

sin still wanna battle me?
10 lines say yes and ill set it up

This was feedback posted for TheSinnister
 

gooood battel u got thsi easy buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmp

Thanks willa, and yes taveres...............................

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damn. still not a single vote. This is harsh. Wat ya gotta do to get some honest votes on here?

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hi my name's Tie-D and i want some votes

Voted For: Tie-D

Avvy’s a pic of the joker cos that’s wat you are
Im a joker too, watch…………..you’ll go far!
Has the CS leader lost his mind there?
Signing u, a good investment, but then so is a time share..??
you cant leave your house cos someone will hit ya
that’s wat happens wen ya parents are brother and sister

WEAK VERSE BUT YOU GOT POTENTIAL, WORK ON WORDING AND MULTIS.


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MAYBE: Your lyrics deluted, your thoughts seem clueless
Your mind abused, and you dont speak fluent




WEAK BATTLE,

TIE HAD A FEW GOOD CONCEPTS WHICH HIT SLIGHTLY, BUT WITH BETTER WORDING WOULD BE DECENT PUNCHES, SINNISTER SPIT A FUCKIN TOPICAL VERSE TO ME, HAD A GOOD FLOW BUT DIDNT HAVE PUNCHES DISSING YOUR OPPONENT, WORK ON THAT,

NO HATE RTF IN SIG WHERE IT SAYS KO.

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Voted For: Tie-D

This guys frantic mind fights for possession
Magnifying the power, I'm teaching you a lesson
^^^THis was ight
Never the less being obsessed by a delusion
This is what happens when you fuse sinnister illusion
^^^No...punch
Your lyrics deluted, your thoughts seem clueless
Your mind abused, and you dont speak fluent
^^^No weak attempt for a diss
Your eyes decide this wrongful right
Is there still time to save your worthless life
^^^No......
Do you have what it takes to change your narrow mind
Forget the past you imitate quit layering the lies
One layer upon the other your gonna die inside
^^^Nuthin special...ight i guess closer..

14 wins, tht record was built up on noobs
8 battles against anyone half good and you lose
^^^No....weak oopener
Avvy’s a pic of the joker cos that’s wat you are
Im a joker too, watch…………..you’ll go far!
^^^Ight personal
Holding his head up gallantly walking the road
I bring the talent tht squashes u like a toad
^^^No....that was a weak punch
The Chrymies see ya record and make u a hot tip
I see your ability, you steam like a pile of hot shit
^^^Ight at least ur dissin him
Has the CS leader lost his mind there?
Signing u, a good investment, but then so is a time share..??
^^^Ight.....
Your sixteen kidd, you need to grow up
Or get some real friends, ur only one now has to be blown up
^^^Weak...diss
The only thing I know of that’s really sinister
Is the fact that your palms are covered in blisters
^^^solid line....
wen u here no one will kiss ya,
wen you gone no one will miss ya
^^^No.....
you cant leave your house cos someone will hit ya
that’s wat happens wen ya parents are brother and sister
^^^Good CLoser

V/tie-d......this was a weak battle......sinnister u need to get some punchs an personals u need to diss him consistently....ur lines are weak no hate work on that....Tie u came ight u had some played lines but u had some lines that dissed him....U get the win...RTF or this vote will be removed.......

Voted For: TheSinnister

TheSinnister - Good flow, vocab was sick, and you had some good rhymes.

Best Line -This guys frantic mind fights for possession
Magnifying the power, I'm teaching you a lesson

Worst Line - NONE

Tie-D - Your spit was ok, your punches were pretty bad, but it flowed ok.

Best Line - 14 wins, tht record was built up on noobs
8 battles against anyone half good and you lose

Worst Line - The Chrymies see ya record and make u a hot tip
I see your ability, you steam like a pile of hot shit BOO!

OVERALL - This was an alright battle, but TheSin takes it, his vocab and flow were better, and I liked his punches. Tie-D your punches were whack, and you lacked in wordplay.

Vote - TheSin

RTF in Sig or vote be removed.

This was feedback posted for Tie-D
 

checkin pollz.....................................

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Voted For: Tie-D

The sinnister- Your verse was a lot more complex then tie-d's but your verse didn't really have no punches or personals....so it wasn't really hittin....and with a battle that is what you need...This verse seems like it should be in open mike instead of front lines....
2/10




Tie-D-You verse had no stucture....your flow was horrible...but nonetheless you had a couple punches and a personal that caped it off....you need to work on your punch delievery cuz these punches were pretty garb....

3/10

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uppin damn it.

Can we close this soon, its obvious iv won it

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Voted For: Tie-D

I think that Tie-D got this battle because i feel that Tie-D came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Tie-D got it they were used effectifely and were on point TheSinnister u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Tie-D good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Tie-D and flow and structure i'll give to Tie-D.

V/Tie-D

RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215409

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Voted For: TheSinnister

Sinnister won this, his punches were mo complex and they hit harder, so vote goes to him...