RG bonus round thang, werd
 

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"RG - song bout my legal guardian Ovie"

werd, i made it about my legal guardian Ovie. wen he's on it, he wuz gone so i had 2 git him on ova tha phone, n lol, it sounds like he readin it off paper, but he didnt have a beat or nuthin n im pretty sho he wuz high, sooo, check that shit!

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...637#post2552637
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215540

werd

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didnt mean 2 post in here, shyt, werd

lol yea he sounds like he was reading it off the paper at least he didnt say stupid shit like my mom lol : /
flow was pretty much on point throughout emotion could have been better but cool track

lmao, wtf is up with using this beat, lol. Oh man, this better not blow...

ahahah damn son, you sound like this old-scool one hit blunder rapper Snagle Puss. And damn son, pull back from the mic. The lyrics are tight as hell but the quality blows the big one. LMAO @ garbage can. Your flow gets fucked up sometimes man, too many sylables, like one or two at the start in some spots.

AHAHAHA @ jackin dude's mom as a sample, but no son. You get disqualified. Why? Because you used a voice emulator and put the mic up to the speaker. I'm not gonna tell you how I know. Did someone rat? Is A smart enough to figure it out or hear it? I dunno. But you're still DQ'd.

wait wait wait, hold up, wut do u mean by that? u think ovie iz me? i swear on my fucking life it iznt. i will try and git u proof if i can. i dunno how will tho, but that iz not me at all. we're not even tha same race or nuthin, he's black. wut i did wuz, i use a hedset mic, i took of tha little foam thingy, n used elastics so itd stay on tha speaker part of tha phone. n then i went n talked 2 him on tha utha phone. that IZ wut ur talkin about right? i have ni voice emulators or nuthin like that, seriously. u have no proof of it. now ijust gotta try n figure out how ima proove it 2 u. hmmmmmm, werd

^^pfftt. son, I HIGHLY doubt it as it is, but to prove it, you'd need to get this man on the horn acapella and ask him to say "cool kol-b once gave me a blowjob with 4 skittles and a handfull of mayonaise." "word".

ROFL, u want him acapella? like, i can call him 2marow prolly n u can hear us both talkin. he's gonna b gone fo a lil wile tho, n he duzznt have a comp. hmmm, ayo, i have a bunch of hiz songs, if u want, i can make a SC wif them on it n u can listen 2 them. he had pritty bad quality cuz he made them on tha sound recorder thingy, no cool edit or nuthin. but i can do that right now if u want, holla back, werd

fuck dat. Mayonaise.

LMAO, nah, I'm buggin son, but yeah, you'd need an acapella of him just talkin.

lmao. hmmmm, hol up, i got tha intro 2 a cd he made a wile ago, its almost acapella, werd

tha best i can git right now iz him on tha phone. excpt fo that shit i sed in tha above post. i dunno if he can git 2 a comp n use hedphones az a mic or wut, i'll have 2 call him 2marow, werd

ayo, check my SC, i put hiz intro thingy on it. thas tha best i can git u fo now, werd

aight peepin now

Production:Problay the hottest beat i ever heard the i got 5 on it beat:10/10
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Flow:Ya flow was aight.....wasn't the best but u rode the beat good:7/10
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Pressense:ya pressense was good you kinda went in and out on the mic i was kinda like what?? fix that up and it'd be better:7.5/10
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Emotion:You had aight emotion......you shoulda added a lil more in some of the words and it'da been better:6.5/10
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Lyrics:lyrics were deep i was feelin um....basic but good:7/10
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Overall: good track for the rap game keep it up man...:6.8/10

stay up and keep droppin um solid
~1

thanks fo tha feed mayn ^^ werd

lmao

fuck ovie aka robo-cop.

vocals a touch loud

flow is str8 though

this isn't bad

and the guy at the end is CLEARLY someone else


Dooms, stop snortin that shit u LUNATIC!




not bad Kool


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flow could be polished up......ya gotta get betta delivery...i mean act and feel wut ya spitten nah mean?........but as da flow goes make sure there's not a lot of syllables bunched up in one line all ur barz should be bout da same length.....

pz

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colby ur shit was dope except how fucked up the "but he put a roof over my head" line sounded....and lmao @ ovie...that sounded sick and not in a good way

and yes...ovie is most certainly real....his last name is kpolugbo and he has two brothers that i know of...viro and chuko...i should get a yearbook and scan a pic of viro..he's only a couple years older than me

i really liked this. and yes, that IS Ovie, i know him too. and this was really dope cuz i know about all that shit n it sounds dope to be put on a track. flow was good, except for those like 2 times you went all fast n it didnt sound right, but sometimes when you did it it sounded good. good emotion. and LOL at Ovies lil verse, haha, nice.

thanx fo tha feed spuccaz, werd

I think Ovie is the one who cleans my horses' stables.

Kool Colby darts back and forth on the mic. His presence is like that of a darting snake about to bite you, but he recoils at the last minute to find a recording of Pop Lotty's mom(who sounds hot). The lyrics were pretty dope and the emotion was okay, and the beat was pretty sweet as well. Your quality was blah, just like my lifestyle.

7.5/10

Keep on shoveling.

thanx fo tha feed, werd

wattup pops!

im lovin these lyrics, but bout time bought a new mic, but we do got bills lol, but yeah the lyrics were tight, made me wanna keep listenin, shyt was deep yo, ovie sounds like a cool ass nigga, takin u in like dat in all, keep em comin pops.

werd :cool:

LOL, yeah i do need a new mic, u know, but these dam bills, n plus i gotta spend a bajillion dollaz on u fo christmas :cool: hahaha. thanx fo tha feed son, werd

Word

Flows Dope

Deliverys Good

Emotions Ok COuld Be Upped

Lyrics Are FIYA!!!!!!!!!!

Umm Word

The Phone Bit Was Bit Weird Lol Couldnt Hear That Muh What It Said Word

But Yeah


Overall:Decent Track 7/10


Keep Up!

Thx For Checkin My Track:)

damn, you Eazy-E ass spicca...

Ok, listened to some acapella stuff sent to me via PM's. Tracks valid, though colby, Ovie really seriously does talk like a robot, lol.

BTW, who the hell here ever said it was Colby?? I sure as hell didn't and it's OBVIOUSLY no him, so where the hell did you guys that said that get that? smh...if you don't know what you're talking about, simply stfu and mind your business. Thank's for shopping.

i was listening too da wrong one wit da phone call
but then i heard da trACK AND SHIT it was tight me
and da end of it was funny
Da fone shit had me rolling

your lyrics are good, but your volume level fluctuated alot
i countered this by turning the volume up or down, it worked a bit:
enough so that i could make out the low parts...
ovie?...does he rap? i dunno it was hard to make out everything he said
i caught the one punchl;ine, thought that was koo ..
kinda gansta over the phone...should get both on a mic thou...
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overall, if you keep your volume from fluctuating it would
be way doper, but fuck quality, your lyrics were solid...
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pc fam,...rtf on nk battle ..much appreciated..

lol @ pop lotty

n lol, @ dooms, prolly sound like a robot cuz its just ova tha phone, i dunno, lol

thanx fo tha feed snipes, appreciate it.

n werd daz, thanks fo tha feed, ima rtf werd

This signifies Kool Colby's MSN.

sorry man for not getting back to yah..

aight listenign.... lol@ the beat.. reminds me of that chick off Mental Funk.. lol\
anyway... Lyrics are pretty dope, but a little to high, need to be turned down, yah flow is aight for the most part, needs some work tho..quality is aight.. that also need some work.. lol.. alot of shit going on in this song.. lol.. anyway.. pretty good track hommie.. keep at it.. id rate it at 6.5/10...

thanx mayn, i appreciate it alot. good lookin, werd

this was dope yo. your lyrics were really good. u had good emotion. flow was good, but turn down tha volume in some places. i'd rate this 7/10, overall it's a good track nah mean?

lmao @ ovie on the phone and sampling pop lotty's mom :shoot:

this shit was dope like tacos nah mean? :shoot:

word

aight nigga this was nice, you had good quality

emotion was there, lyrics were fire. guy at the end wassn't that bad either

sorry to hear about your parents too nigga, sad shit.

holla at me for a collab sumtime nigga!

thanx fo tha feed spiccaz, uppin, werd

Listening...

Beat sounds deep...I like it...

Quality is all up and down and shit...Lyrics were cool...

The main things you are lacking is flow and delivery...flow was on beat, but it sounded choppy...and that also hurt your delivery. Delivery was cool in places, but your flow kinda messed it up...overall, just keep working on making your flow smoother.

But other than that, great track, keep it up.

beats good. Flows ok. sounds good. Sound like its kind a being read, the presence could be a bit more hyped.
This is good for the rap game though.

thanx fo tha feed mang, werd

Not bad..quality lets you down..flow is good.but you fall off in places
lyrics nice...i dont see why ud save when quality sounds that bad..
ive only got an £8 mic and mixing it and editing a few things bring it not bad..suggest you do the same, cos i didnt listen to all this as it got annoying.