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Past Tense 12-17-05 03:34 PM

My Sister is 13 she wants too say if she'd bump ur music
 
just drop ur links shes white and she knows what should be played on the radio belve me shes always listenin too it

so post ur link too ur music and the song u want her too hear we'll be doing this for an hour or so

KOOL COL-B 12-17-05 03:48 PM

www.soundclick.com/werdspicca

check tha fresh prince of T.O.B track, werd

Paranoid 12-17-05 03:49 PM

um cool, I might not be that good but lets see how good she thinks iam....links in the sig.

Past Tense 12-17-05 03:53 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by KOOL COL-B
www.soundclick.com/werdspicca

check tha fresh prince of T.O.B track, werd

alright listen now..

HER WORDS EXACTLY:
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lisha
1.Words sound distorted
2.That wouldn't be able too play on the radio cuz the fresh prince beat which is a copyright issue
3.Lyrics are a eight out of ten
4.dude,good song for soundclick not radio lets hear some of ur other ones

Blay'all 12-17-05 03:54 PM

so basically ur offering your 13 year old sister's services? :cool:

www.myspace.com/joeycack

Past Tense 12-17-05 03:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paranoid
um cool, I might not be that good but lets see how good she thinks iam....links in the sig.



HER WORDS EXACTLY
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Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.i love your voice
2.get ur own beat
3.git more emotion ur just like duh duh duh duh duh
4.pretty good lyrics
5.too make it too the radio try your own beats

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Joey Carolina
so basically ur offering your 13 year old sister's services? :cool:

www.myspace.com/joeycack

lol i guess this is not coming outta my mouth

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.Get ur own beats
2.quality needs to be better
3.sounds distored cuz ur like roar roar roar roar roar lol
4.lyrics are great
5.practice own beats and flow and might get on radio one day

IMPORTANT STUFF:
Check out my myspace www.myspace.com/ondacomeupfosho
I dont think your body needs any work

L. Veracity 12-17-05 04:03 PM

check out "This Ain't That" cuz it's prolly my most "commercial" track

anything else is fine too, doesn't matter to me lol

:) V link in SIGy V :)

Blay'all 12-17-05 04:04 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lisha
IMPORTANT STUFF:
Check out my myspace www.myspace.com/ondacomeupfosho
I dont think your body needs any work

LMAO, damn.....
she's 13... does she know i'm 18?

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L. Veracity
:) V link in SIGy V :)

alright shes listenin now

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.better than the other guys
2.Not Radio Material better for underground
3.great lyrics
4.Keep tryin you'll get there

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Joey Carolina
LMAO, damn.....
she's 13... does she know i'm 18?

no but she said ur hot lmao.... i was like alright that all came outta her mouth i'll record her doing it if ya'll aint belive me

Blay'all 12-17-05 04:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Past Tense
no but she said ur hot lmao.... i was like alright that all came outta her mouth i'll record her doing it if ya'll aint belive me

lmao, worrd @ me getting hit on....

but worrd, u could record her sayin "Joey Carolina is one sexy motherfucker" or somethin like that to prove to everybody and i can figure out someway to put it on my myspace or in my sig or somethin :cool:

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:09 PM

alright she just judged immortal technique

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.Def. Bump this shit
2.Great flow
3.great lyrics
4.Great beat.
5.Def bump this


thats on the song industrial revolution

Sean Gunner 12-17-05 04:09 PM

There is no worst critic then a kid. I guess she can check mine, it's the mic. *gets ready to be owned by a 13 yr old*

Blay'all 12-17-05 04:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by The Revelation
There is no worst critic then a kid. I guess she can check mine, it's the mic. *gets ready to be owned by a 13 yr old*

worrd, i thought i was too....
but if u were sexy like me maybe u'd get hit on instead :cool:

Sean Gunner 12-17-05 04:12 PM

I don't have my pic on my SC though. lol

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:14 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3225663

thats too joey from my sister

J. Luth 12-17-05 04:14 PM

lol @ blay one. but yea, I guess it won't hurt to get critiqued. soo umm...

www.myspace.com/spul

run it remix. first one should play..... ain't my best but most commercial, I guess?

~_~

Sean Gunner 12-17-05 04:17 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Past Tense


LMFAO! Oh God dude, Joey sig that seriously.

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:17 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by The Revelation
There is no worst critic then a kid. I guess she can check mine, it's the mic. *gets ready to be owned by a 13 yr old*

alright here ya go

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.good lyrics i feel ya
2.flow needs too be upped
3.If you care that much put more emotion in to
4.It'd be on a christian station
5.cool

WhoAmI 12-17-05 04:19 PM

get her to check out "art of war" in my soundclick in my sig

aint been mixed down/EQd/Limited/Compressed yet though so bear that in mind

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by It's SPuL!
lol @ blay one. but yea, I guess it won't hurt to get critiqued. soo umm...

www.myspace.com/spul

run it remix. first one should play..... ain't my best but most commercial, I guess?

~_~


alright shes listening

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.She likes this version better then chris brown
2.You should be on the radio great song
3.Great flow
4.Good Lyrics

Important Stuff:
You Look like tupac hot

Sean Gunner 12-17-05 04:19 PM

:cool:

I'd be bumped on a Christian station. cool

13th. 12-17-05 04:19 PM

www.soundclick.com/madknight

top one!

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Souljah~
get her to check out "art of war" in my soundclick in my sig

aint been mixed down/EQd/Limited/Compressed yet though so bear that in mind

alright shes listenin too it now

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.ok twista thats good
2.great flow
3.good lyrics
4.keep tryin too make it the radio

J. Luth 12-17-05 04:21 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Past Tense
alright shes listening

lmao @ tupac. but lmao tell her thanks. word....

Blay'all 12-17-05 04:21 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Past Tense

LMAO!!! worrd :cool:

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:24 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mad Knizzle

alright listenig now

Quote:
Originally Posted by LISHA
1.the beats cool
2.good lyrics
3.get better flow
4.keep tryin

Indeph 12-17-05 04:26 PM

ROFL Blay should make that the beggining of a song.

13th. 12-17-05 04:28 PM

i wished id posted my pic on s/c now

LMAO

Past hop on aim i need to talk!!!:D

Past Tense 12-17-05 04:28 PM

alright done for now u can drop links we'll get back at it in like an hour or so were gonna go and hang out at the mall or somthin

Blay'all 12-17-05 04:32 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Crusade
ROFL Blay should make that the beggining of a song.

lmao, worrrd :cool: i will
it'll be the hook, like a sample.... just looped over with her saying "Joey Carolina is a hot motherfucker, Joey Carolina is a hot motherfucker"... or i could work it into a beat :cool:

everybody click the Mr. Carolina in my sig :cool:
anybody know how to make it so it automatically plays?

Sean Gunner 12-17-05 04:40 PM

javascript:Player('../player/single_player.cfm?songid=3225663&q=hi&ref=2');

?

Blay'all 12-17-05 04:41 PM

^nah lmao, i already tried that shit

Paranoid 12-17-05 05:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Past Tense
HER WORDS EXACTLY
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lol.....why doesnt she listen to the songs that I used my own beats on.

.Ike. 12-17-05 06:12 PM

www.soundclick.com/youngike

i dont care what she listens to....

J. Luth 12-17-05 06:50 PM

lmao @ the Joey Carolina is a hot motherfucka lol

Phenom-in-all 12-17-05 07:00 PM

www.soundclick.com/phenominall

'Put it on me' - Reddnation ft. Gabe
or
'Whats good' - Phenom

word. LMAO

Paranoid 12-17-05 07:47 PM

whats good phenom....:)

distilled 12-17-05 07:50 PM

Your sister is a shit critic


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